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Reviewer: mary jane88 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 05:24 PM · On: Between Love and Hate

why !!!!!!!! cant they ever have a break from all the bad shiittt.... ahhhh tears tears... i need whiskeyy .. great but sad ass chapter...

Reviewer: Chiefco34 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 05:23 PM · On: A Chain Of Flowers

Booooo!!!!!!  I hate it when Bella cries!  It's just wrong.  I knew what Bella saw was not what it appeared to be.  Poor Edward, I feel so horrible for him and I'm sending good vibes his way for Bella to listen and forgive.

Thanks for posting bb, cuz I fucking LOVE this story!

Reviewer: LatinaLibra (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 04:42 PM · On: Lost

aaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! So sad!!!

Reviewer: Bulls in Brooklyn (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 04:39 PM · On: Lost

awwwww sad.....

Reviewer: twifanx3 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 03:55 PM · On: Lost

i'd feel the same way =/ ohmann. tears galore with the past two chapters.

Reviewer: xcmuchip (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 03:48 PM · On: Lost

AAAW! That was so sad.  Please post soon.  I want them to finally believe each other.

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 03:17 PM · On: Lost

My least favorite chapter...sorry...though I love the story....

Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 01:28 PM · On: Lost

*groan*

both still so deeply fucked up.

he'd better not leave her! 

but you ladies write what you write for a reason, and you do it so, so well.  so whatever keeps the story going....  

<3 

Reviewer: Chandler (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 01:19 PM · On: Lost

I can't get enough of these two.  Keep it coming please!!

Reviewer: Platinim13 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 01:15 PM · On: Lost

I wasn't expecting that. Perhaps I should have been. Tragic really.

Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2008 12:56 PM · On: Lost

OH FUCKING HELL!!!  I mean, I toally get this over played insane-o hormonal roller coaster ride that is a teenager, but HOLY CRAP!  THEY AREN'T GOING TO BE TOGETHER!?!?!  I am so bumming about this!

Reviewer: Lina (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 11:26 AM · On: Lost

awww so sad :(

Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 11:00 AM · On: Lost

But..but..that was short...short and sad :( I need more of your crack, I mean, fic *sobs* Great update though, very intense!

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 11:00 AM · On: Lost

Ladies you write so well together it is seamless.

If he holds her long enough will she believe?   Will he learn to believe?   Your angst is truly beautiful.  

Reviewer: erinmiyu (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 10:23 AM · On: Lost

you are totally killing.me.dead. with all the heartache...

Reviewer: Goodygurl (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 10:12 AM · On: Lost

Aww that was so sad...poor Bella...poor Edward. I can't wait for more! Update soon!!!

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 10:12 AM · On: Lost

Wow! That was an awesome chapter! I could picture it all! Thanks for the fast update!

Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 10:11 AM · On: Between Love and Hate

Awesome and heartbreaking - truly loved the description of shoving the notes in through the space between the plywood and drywall - wonderful writing!!! And so angsty and so painful and so like the characters that they are - doubting their love and their own worth and not waiting for an answer or an explanation!! oh, kids, give each other another chance!! and write it quick so we can read about it!!!  XOXOXO

 

Reviewer: Lady Saffir (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 09:59 AM · On: Lost

Loved the first line from EPOV.  Entirely too accurate.  Wow.  They have a lot of talking to do.  Wonderful as always.

Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 09:48 AM · On: Lost

Oh man! More pain. She still doesn't believe she's enough. . & he thinks he keeps ballsing it up.

 

Another great chapter. But oh what pain for them both. Such a bittersweet chapter. Well bitter-sour, not really sweet at all. They came back together (without rejoining properly).. . . What can be done. What to do?

Damned if I know. . .

Thanks for updating. - such a good chapter.

Em.

xxxxx

Reviewer: badgergirl1999 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 09:47 AM · On: Lost

One of the things that I love, love, love about this story is that you do not take the easy way out.  You don't skim over fear and inadequacy and let them have the easy ending.

It's real.

In the real-ness, there's hope.

And that's amazing.

So, yeah, while things might seem a little scary right now...there's still more story to be told.

LOVE.

Reviewer: stephanie1068 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 09:39 AM · On: Lost

dammit. now i'm sad and depressed.  dammit, dammit, dammit.  they have to get it right eventually, right?

Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 09:31 AM · On: Lost

Poor broken souls, is there no hope for them?

Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 09:27 AM · On: Lost

:( That's all there is to say for this one. Double :(

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 09:26 AM · On: Lost

Oh so sad.....sniff, sniff.

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