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Reviewer: NiKKi the Vampire Princess (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 03:28 PM · On: Father Of Mine

Why is it shit when Carlisle says "Nice to meet your girlfriend" ??????

 

Love this story. Edward has to ease up tho. Be nice to Bela, she loves him.

Reviewer: happymoon35 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 12:49 PM · On: Asleep

So today, while avoiding studying for finals, I went back and re-read most of this story again because it's my favorite fanfic on this site.  Yeah, it's that good.  Anyway, I read this line again and it nearly broke my heart:

She'd be leaving soon, I knew that now.  You can't love a boy whose own mother couldn't care about him.  I just hoped I'd managed to give her a good enough memory that she'd at least miss some part of me.

You ladies are pretty darn good writers.  I just wish Bella could magically heal him and make him all better! ;-)

Reviewer: denmother (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 11:46 AM · On: Father Of Mine

okay, girls. I just found this fanfic after I read ladders. Marve, will you marry me? I love these. I have been laughing for days reading this stuff. Oh pretty please, all I want for Christmas is the end of this story!! You both rock!! Awesome writing. I want to joint the cult and drink Kool-aid but only if it has JD in it!!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 05:54 AM · On: Father Of Mine

Oh it's going to be such a sad day when this story is over!  :(  I really enjoy it!!  I am sad that Bella is so sad and Edward thinks he needs to stay away from her!  Great update!!

Reviewer: Skepo (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 05:00 AM · On: Father Of Mine

omfg

i read the whole story and i loveeeee it!

The back and forth between bell and eddie is amazing it lets you see what is going on! i love it can't wait for more!

Reviewer: pearls8 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 04:31 AM · On: Father Of Mine

now thats what im talking about!! loved this chapterrr!

Reviewer: mllesinistre (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 07:26 PM · On: Father Of Mine

Loved bad-ass Bella in this chapter kicking the crap out of Angela and Tanya and Kate. But it seems that her attempt at proving herself to Edward still hasn't worked. Or has it? I'm confused about their relationship status.

I'm sad to see this story coming to an end as well, but you guys have done a fabulous job with it.

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: kms1979 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 04:35 PM · On: Father Of Mine

I'm so sad that it's almost done! Why is this fucked up stuff so damn romantic to me??

Reviewer: HoldingmyHeartforEdward (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 04:32 PM · On: Father Of Mine

I will not allow you to stop this story. Seriously I love it so much it's insane. I love what a panty thief edward is don't ask me why but it's thrilling.

Reviewer: Goodygurl (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 04:28 PM · On: Father Of Mine

Really good, can't wait for more! Update soon!!!!

Reviewer: Bulls in Brooklyn (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 04:12 PM · On: Father Of Mine

what happened Mel? What did you break?

Author's Response:

I had a mishap on a flight of steps and broke my foot. Owie.

 

Reviewer: stephanie1068 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 03:12 PM · On: Father Of Mine

i'm so glad bella kicked angela's ass - she should've done that to start with.  i'm so sad this is almost over.   only two chapters to go?!?  nnnnooooo!!!!!

Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 02:43 PM · On: Father Of Mine

awww, and owww, and omg -- yeah, the teenage angst and pain, i can feel the splinters and thank god I am not the parent here because I would be frantic!!!!  - keep it coming, i need the finale!!

Reviewer: Chandler (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 02:16 PM · On: Father Of Mine

Does it really have to be over so soon??!!  If it is destined to end, please give us at least one more seriously hot lemon!!!

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 01:53 PM · On: Father Of Mine

Well at least she was willing to fight for her man!

Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 01:28 PM · On: Father Of Mine

Bella, honey, you are a looney :) Great update girls

Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 01:17 PM · On: Father Of Mine

Hahahah! Daddy dearest eh?!

Hot bitch himself!  :)

 Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat chapter. . .

 Loved how bloody co-dependent & needy they are - so much more real & well better than any other "healthy" shit!

lol

Love, love love this chapter.

Cheers.
Em.

xxxxxx

Reviewer: dreamsatnight (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 12:43 PM · On: Father Of Mine

ahh i'm sad to hear it's almost ever.

edward is so hot when he's being jealous/protective.  can i borrow edward for just a little bit for myself?  pretty please?  haha



Author's Response:

I think he should be cloned. This Edward needs to be created in a lab, crazy and all. He's yummy!

- wishy

Reviewer: Lina (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 12:30 PM · On: Father Of Mine

gees temper temper edward and bella

Reviewer: xcmuchip (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 12:18 PM · On: Father Of Mine

Great chapter!  Very hot!  I can't wait to see how this all ends. 

Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 12:17 PM · On: Lost

I hate you, Mel. 

 

 

Reviewer: Chiefco34 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 12:13 PM · On: Father Of Mine

This Edward totally turns me on BIG TIME!  I can't actaully believe that Bella kicked the shit out of Angela, but I'm kinda glad she did. ;)

Great chapter ladies!  I absoultely cannot wait for the next two.  Please hurry (and thanks)! :D

Reviewer: xx_bella_xx_cullen_xx (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 11:45 AM · On: Father Of Mine

=]

I liked when Bella beat the hell out of Angela. That bitch fucking deserved it.  

Only two more chapters? No =[ Here comes a new round of tears.

<3 Bella 

Reviewer: Lei-C (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 11:38 AM · On: Father Of Mine

i love this story so much!

 these two are so jacked up i can't help but smile when i'm reading it!

you guys are amazing!

great job! i'm sad that it's almost over.. :(

Reviewer: infernalheart (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 11:01 AM · On: Father Of Mine

Let me just say I love this Bella!!! She is so kick-ass and tough...granted a little emotionally handicapped but thats ok. She and Edward will figure their shit out...right? Also, gotta give some love to smexy, sweet Edward. Love this story, loved this chapter!I'll be sorry to see it end.

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