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Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 03:49 AM · On: Why Can't I

Me? Hot and bothered.

Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 03:35 AM · On: Laid

Holy hot hell. That was scorching.

Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 03:12 AM · On: You Might Think

Oh HELL yeah. I love this empowered, bitch Bella. And I love how she's got him wrapped around her finger already... ;)

Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 02:48 AM · On: Between Love and Hate

Well, this is definitely a new take on Bella. And definitely on Edward... AND DAMN IS IT HOT AS HELL.

 

I lit a cigarette and puffed on it like James Dean as I strolled my way up through the honeys and homies of Forks High, breaking hearts and blocking cocks as I made my journey.   Jasper met me halfway through the lot and we bumped fists before I continued my path of destruction to the front door.<- This friggin cracked me up. Edward is such an ass but hey, he's just too gorgeous not to like. :))

Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 08:19 PM · On: Push It

I fucking love you. Period.

Reviewer: mllesinistre (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 05:10 PM · On: Push It

OMG, Edward's such an asshole. I knew he had talked about leaving right after but I never expected him to actually do it.I almost feel bad for Bella stealing and hotwiring his car. Almost. 

By the way, that was a very hot chapter.

Reviewer: kissyourself (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 05:04 PM · On: Push It

naughty :)) hahaha 

i wouldn't say poor edward, because... hahahaha i just can't wait for his reaction to bella's work on the dadmobile:)) 

Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 04:08 PM · On: Push It

wow. that was grrrreat! those two are such concentrated whores that they don't know what to do with eachother. It's very entertaining. Can't wait to see what Eddie does when he finds out about the mutilation of his pride and joy. But hey, with edward, the dadmobbile is hott. Really hott.

Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 04:04 PM · On: Push It

I'm sorry. 

Nuoc mam!?!?!  Are you Vietnamese?  Nuoc mam is awesome.  Smells like feet but tastes so good. Damn.  Now I need spring rolls.

I love you guys because:

Pusifer?  Holy Hell.  MJ Keenan's voice is sex.

Bitch fest is great.  They deserve each other. 

 

 

Reviewer: Chiefco34 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 02:20 PM · On: Push It

DOH!  Daaaaaaaaaayum.  That was some hot ass shit!  Hmmm, a little violent are we? :)

I really love the witty vernacular banter, but please tell me they won't talk like that to each other all the time.

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 01:41 PM · On: Push It

What a dick.

Reviewer: LovesSparkles (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 12:48 PM · On: Push It

ahhh! love love love this story - i am so hooked it's unbelievable. I cannot believe he did that! I cannot believe she did that! ahhh! update soon!

Reviewer: ahnyx (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 12:38 PM · On: Push It

amazing chapter!

Reviewer: twilighter_since_1901 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 11:13 AM · On: Push It

wonder what edwards gonna say about his dadmobile!!!

Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2008 10:12 AM · On: Push It

SORRY!!  I AM SO SORRY!!!  DO IT AGAIN!!!  PLEASE do not EVER end this story!!!

Reviewer: ikecheer24 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 09:43 AM · On: Push It

lmao they're both such cocky assholes... I LOVE IT! =) 

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 09:29 AM · On: Push It

Holy shit! WOW! Amazing chapter!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 09:21 AM · On: Why Can't I

All I  have to say is that was incredible! Love how he went down on her in the parking lot! Fucking hot!

Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 09:13 AM · On: Push It

hmm, i wonder what else edward has coming to him...

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 09:11 AM · On: Laid

OMFG!! That was fuckgood!! I am laughing my ass off right now! Bella is the Best!! Poor Edward! He really is her bitch!! Cannnot wait for more!!

Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 08:51 AM · On: Push It

Go Bella, make that asshole suffer like he has never suffered before....***girl power or whatever***

 

 

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 08:51 AM · On: Kiss With A Fist

LOVED IT!! Fantastic how they go back and forth screwing with each other!!!!

Reviewer: count_bessy (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 08:46 AM · On: Push It

WOW I can't believe how much I love this.  Usually I would be biting my nails at this point, trying not to drive myself crazy worrying about the two of them working things out, but instead I am inexplicably happy.  This is hilarious, and I can't wait to see where it goes.  I think that finding an eventual resolution will be nothing short of the wildest ride ever and I LOVE this story.  :)

Reviewer: Goodygurl (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 08:29 AM · On: Push It

That was really good...but evil on Edwards part...this story is turning out extremely well! I can't wait for more! UPdate soon!!!

Reviewer: CapriciousC (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 08:22 AM · On: Push It

Oh no he di'nt!  I sincerely hope she's going to do more than just hot-wire that car and return it to the parking lot.  As much as I love Doucheward, I love seeing him put in his place even more.

How odd is it that I want to be able to tell someone to "give up the strange?"  I love that phrase!  My hubby's faithful, though.  My dog, however, humps anything that moves.  Yep, that's it, I'm laying down the law with the little wiener right now.

Ya'll are genius!  Seriously.  Thanks for not cock-blocking us, and for keeping us on our toes!   

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