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Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: October 09, 2008 11:08 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
Awesome chapter. Edward's a douche but he's learning his lesson. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: midsummerstars (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 11:06 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
Ooooooh! I like this James!!! Poor Edward really screwed up! May the best man win! (Edward of course....)
Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 10:40 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
Gah! Drama!
Reviewer: sgdonnybrook (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 10:32 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
This is getting very good. Not that it wasn't good before, but I like that the plot is thickening!!
Reviewer: 0nykz 3yez (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 09:49 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
Great chapter!!!! I loved the insight to how Edward was feeling, I wouldn't have guessed that the whoring around had to do with making her jealous and she didn't mention him trying to apolagize so I was getting pissed at him. And you introduced James! He was a psychotic vampire in Twilight so he's bound to make this great(-- er than it already is)
Reviewer: elfarmy (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 09:48 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
ooooo, excited that edward has a heart. can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Lady Saffir (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 09:47 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
Step one in the recovery program is admitting your mistakes, Edward. :) Now good luck with the rest of them. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 09:47 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
Ok...now, it would be hilarious if James turned out to be Bella's gay best friend from Phoenix! And it would be even funnier if he had a thing for Edward himself....James' character is usually a villian and in competition with Edward...it would rock if he wanted to get Broke Back with little Eddie.
Reviewer: Matahari (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 09:46 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
OMC - I can just taste the angst! Update soon! ~Matahari
Reviewer: Syndie (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 09:38 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
Thanks for this, it made my sh*tty day better!!
Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 09:28 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
When I saw the mail alert for yahoo I wished 'please be so much better when yer naked. And it was. Thanks for making my dreams come true <3
Reviewer: Momstheteacher (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 09:27 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
Excellent chapter, loved it!
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 09:24 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
"And, if I was honest, I’d hurt me, too. Because even though she was weird and crazy, she was just my brand of weird and crazy. She kept me interested like no one else ever had. She kept me wanting like no one else ever had. She just…" I loved that line. Love the characters! Must post more often!!
Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 09:22 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
Angsty rejected Edward is funny. There's something about him that makes it enjoyable to watch him wallow in his agony. yippee! james? huh, this should be interesting.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 09:20 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
Well I'm glad that Edward is suffering. Plot thickens indeed! Didn't expect to see number 1, and he sounds yummy and nice. That's gotta hurt though for Edward, thinking she's up there screwing James (whether or not they actually are, I have no idea). I find it funny though that in Bella's POV Edward hasn't talked to her, yet in Edward's POV, he is apologizing several times. What, did she have her iPod earplugs surgically attached to her ears?
Reviewer: Kelly (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 09:09 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
That was good. Ha! he didn't see a pimp-daddy mfer. Yeah, he is a douchebag, but now perhaps a reformed douchebag. :) Great chapter!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 09:06 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
I think Bella is already too deep in love with Edward to actually care about James anymore, but I will have to wait to see.
Reviewer: Lamb4Peace (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 08:59 AM · On: Between Love and Hate
It just keeps getting better and better. Doucheward has stolen my heart! Keep it up!
Reviewer: count_bessy (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 08:17 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
I can't believe that I'm just discovering this story. It's brilliant and captivating, and I can't believe how much I'm enjoying Edward's misery. I can't wait for more. :)
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Reviewer: jdsk (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 03:39 PM · On: Bigmouth Strikes Again
Oh noez. Angst for our little friends? Poor B. It all makes sense now. E is still her bitch. Great chapter ladies!
Reviewer: CapriciousC (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 07:11 AM · On: Bigmouth Strikes Again
Well, damn - I didn't see that coming. Doucheward is not only an asshat, he's kind of clueless, isn't he? Reminds me of a shirt I saw on a guy in a bar recently - it said "I'm with stupid" and had an arrow pointing at his crotch. Doucheward needs one of those shirts. Can't wait to see what Bad Bella's going to do to him next though - bring on the retribution, sister!
Reviewer: Jencrane (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 07:08 AM · On: Bigmouth Strikes Again
Oh my GOD!! So amazing! I can't believe we have to wait. I really want Bella to put him in his place. You two need a book deal.
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 04:04 AM · On: Bigmouth Strikes Again
Attagirl, Bella. She's so strong and such a survivor. I figured she was that type, honestly. Because I just can't imagine her as a total whore. It's just too hard to picture. And dear Lord, Edward is such an ass but who can really help but love him?
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 02:59 AM · On: Bigmouth Strikes Again
LOVED it! Edward is wsuch an asshole! I am glad Bella told him off and suprised the shit out fo Edward when she told him that he was only the second guy she ever slept with! Cannot wait for more.
Reviewer: kissyourself (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 02:27 AM · On: Bigmouth Strikes Again
that was... intense. was surprised about bella... wow, this gets even more interesting!!! :)
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