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Reviewer: German_Twilight (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Closure

Will you continue with your story soon?? i love it...

Reviewer: ThroughTheTrees (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Closure

Are You Going To Update Soon.?I Really Want To Know More About This Story.

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Closure

I love this story.  So far it's been great.  I love how Bella and Edward love each other.  So completely.  Even through the ups and down and other peoples drama, lets say Alice and Jasper's Vagas wedding.  O'boy.... I don't think they're going to pull it off as they think.  And I'm glad Bella is such a forgiving person, get the family to come together like they are.  One of my favorite moments is during the last chapter, Bella stops Edward and looks at how happy the whole family is and Edward says even the most depressed person couldn't be unhappy around this bunch.  That is a beautiful picture.  Please come back soon.  I'd love to know what my favorite couple is up to.

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 6 - The Birthday Gift

once again i loved this chapter.  These two are so cute together and i'm glad jacob found someone that bella can also be friends with.  i'm wondering what's up with Alice lately and i'm also not liking the moter bike either. 

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 5 - The Birthday Boy


Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 3 - The Big News

The first story to this one.  Very good.  I just started reading this one and so far so good.  Boy Edward really took Bella leaving every weekend very hard.  I love how much he loves her and is taking care of her.  I forgot from the last story, but how old his he again?

Reviewer: leechlover81 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Closure

please update soon, I love this story and I'm so looking forward to the sequel!!

Reviewer: WickedWillow1861 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Closure

Great chapter as usual, Jo. <3

I gotta ask, you really think that about HP, really?

Maybe you'll tell me sometime, lol.

I'm happy to hear that Phil got his, talk about wish fulfillment.

Can't wait for the next chappie <3

Much Love,


Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Closure

wow im so glad that whats up with phil is over!!! i keep thinking that well end up running into him in the epi or at least hearing about him there...

VERY excited for the hp cosplay next chapter ^.^ hehehe

as usual, cant wait for more!

<3's for you!!!

Reviewer: crazyweirdbeautiful (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Closure

I can't stop smilingthe moment the judge handed out the verdict. :))

I also have a suggestion... Maybe you could end this with the vision that both Edward and Bella had when they were walking along the trail? The one with Bella pregnant with their second child... ;)

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Closure

Amazing :D 

I missed this story! 

Reviewer: leechlover81 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Closure

Looking forward to the third instalment. Can't wait!!

Reviewer: PiperBillie (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Closure

Huurry Hurrryyyy I want read this rest HUUURRRRYYYYYYYY.

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Closure

JO!  LOVE IT!  Seriously, now I hope one of your adoring fans will make a banner of Edward and Bella in their Halloween costumes...any of them reading this....PLEASE!  Can't wait for the next chapter - your writing continues to kick my butt, it has ever since day one with The Virgin Swan and The Cullen Intuition.  Can't wait...great writing makes for great reading and this was a perfect way to start off my day.  Thanks Jo!



Reviewer: potterchick86 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Closure

Looooved it! I wish all judges were that awesome. And your bella is a bad, bad bitch in the best way. :)

Reviewer: brandisb (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Closure

I tell all of my friends all of the time that Harry and Hermione are having an affair. It just makes sense for those two to be together. And Ron with Luna and Ginny with Neville. That's how I would have written Harry... but that's not the point of this review...


Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Closure

i can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: imlikecandy08 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Wedding

great chapter


Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Repercussions

wow SO happy shes leaving!!!

SOOOOOO glad to hear that there will be a third installment!! yay! i love these 2 ^.^

i say give phil 10 years with a chance of parol in 6, BUT i think he should get ass raped in there AT LEAST once

cant wait for more!

<3's for you!!!

Reviewer: myszjada (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Repercussions

can't wait 4 the next chapter!!

As 4 Phil...I think u should give him at least 2 or 3 years!!!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 6 - The Birthday Gift

Good job! B & E are too hot!

BYW, you have awesome banners! They keep going and going and.....

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Party Time

I think Bella will be doing this again! At a minimum, she has to get through showers and a wedding reception!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 3 - The Big News

Charlie and Sue just seem to work! I am rather surprised he just laid it out there for Bella, though! And who would NOT want to spend the day in the kitchen with Edward??

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Wedding

That was just enough of E's breakdown. The reason is there, but we don't have to know all the details, just like you decided.

Boy, E can't keep his lips off of Bella's scar! I guess it reminds him just how fragile things can be.

Great start! I am worried about that bubble bursting that you threatened in the note....

Reviewer: German_Twilight (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Repercussions

I totally love ur story...sooo great

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