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Reviews For Persuasion
Reviewer: Aly110 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 8

Hey Nicole:

I love the story, I truly do. But wow, they fell in love fast didn't they? Well, I guess its the writers desition the amount of time it will take the characters to fall for each other, right? Any way, your penname is caribbeanlady and I was wondering if you were really from the caribbean, and specifically from what country, I'm from Puerto Rico and just a couple of years younger than you, so I've been extremely curious about the international diversity of this web page. If you can enlighten me I will be really greatful

The Best of Lucks:

Aly        

xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

Hey Aly,

Thanks for your review and yes, it does seem like they fell in love quite fast. But first, they're both kind of suffering. Bella for her fathers death and Edward because he feels like he's trapped. They kind of connected with one another because of that and it changed into love quite quickly. But my second reason, I'm going to be honest, is because I wanted to story to move faster. :)

About my penname, no, I do not live in the Caribbean but I have visited it many times including Jamaica, The Bahamas and The Cayman Islands. I've always enjoyed my time there and I'm sure Puerto Rico is a beautiful place. I live in the exact opposite of the Caribbean, actually. My home is in Canada. So I guess I could be called international. :)

Thanks for reading.

Nicole 

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 10

I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!

this chaptyer rocked it was the perfect amount of sweetness!  I am so excited for the next chapter all your questions with no answers I look forward to some real soon!!!!

SQUEEE

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 10

Can't wait for more! XD

Reviewer: stark (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 10

It's funny that you say you don't like Breaking Dawn. I've only read the first two books and absolutly refuse to read the others because I know what happens, and I don't like where she took the storyline --esp. with Bella having a baby. It's SM's story and all so she can do whatever she wants with it, but I choose to live in ignorant bliss about what happens after Bella and Edward reunite.

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 10

A girl after my own heart!  I didn't like BD at all (I can't stress that enough) either.  I am also not a huge Jacob fan.

This story is incredible.  You've captured the formality of the time period so well!  I always look forward to your updates.

Reviewer: RaeRae (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 10

I didn't like Breaking Dawn either. I wanted Jake and Leah to get together. lol. I love this story. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 10

ok good on bella not having a baby... i mean it just doesnt fit this story to me... i really like this chapter and the story and i can't wait to see if 'will be revealed in later chapters' will come true or not... anyway great job! =]

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 9

i can't wait to find out if they all turn into vampires! this is a great story!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 9

I can't wait to see where this is headed!

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 9

I loved this chapter and the way that Edward protected Bella from Rosalie. I didn't like the cliffy...but it is your story...and I still love it.

Reviewer: twilight_4_ever (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 9

This is an awesome story!!!

Reviewer: Team Edward 422 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 9

WWWOOOOOWWWW!!!! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story. So, will Edward be popping the BIG ? to Bella next chapter???? I cant wait to see whats On Edwards mind!! Please, please, please update SSSOOOOOONNNN!!!!!!

Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 9

I hope a proposal is in the next chapter :)

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 9

OMG OMG OMG!!!  I love your authors note it answered so many questions and even left room for a few moreto be asked!  Will they all be tunred hmmm.  I can't wait to find out.  Will Edward go off to war?  I hope not.  Will E and B have a baby?  OMG OMG OMG POST AGAIN SOON!!!



Author's Response:

Will they all be turned?: Thats for me to know and you to find out. ;)

Will Edward go off to war?: Shall be revealed in later chapters. :)

Will Edward and Bella have a baby?: I'm just going to say this now. No. I don't enjoy stories where Eddie and Bells have a kid. It just doesn't seem like their characters to me. I know a lot of people will argue and say "But what about Breaking Dawn?" To tell you all the truth, I really really do not like Breaking Dawn. None of my stories will include Bella getting preggers. :)

Reviewer: alexisjayde (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 9

one word:excellent. looking forward to more.

Reviewer: alexisjayde (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 3

very well done, its rare for some writers to write correctly in a different time period. im loving the way your playing this all out!!

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 9

what about esma?? and how old are the others??.. i know bella is 16 and edward is 17???



Author's Response:

What about Esme?: Shall be revealed in later chapters.

How old are the others?: Bella (16), Edward (17), Alice (17), Jasper (17), Emmett (17), Rosalie (17)

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 9

Wow.  I didn't know Carlisle was a vamp in this story.  Interesting twist.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 9

Great chapter!

I wonder what Edward has to talk to Bella about...I hope it's good news.

Please update soon?

I have a  question: Will Edward become a vampire as well as Bella?



Author's Response:

Will Edward become a vampire as well as Bella?: All shall be revealed in the upcoming chapters. ;)

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 8

I had to leave a review for this chapter...what an awesome job. Your writing is fantastic. Congratulations on the nomination for the Indies!!

Reviewer: brain candy (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 8

The end of the chapter was so sweet!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 8

Congrats on the nomination!  I will keep an eye on it I love this story and look forward to the next chapter!  Post again soon!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 8

I love old-fashioned Edward...

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 8

That was so sweet!  Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 8

i'm so happy for them!

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