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Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 108

I'm so glad Edward finally got his closure.  He needed it.

Reviewer: midnightsun7 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 108

YEAH!!!!!!!  He has seen the light!  That was.............heartbreakingly awesome!  I cried!

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 108

I am so proud of Edward. He really did need to talk to his mother on his own. And I was so ad to see he finally realized he did nothing wrong. Coming from a person who was raised by a abusive step-father his first step Is to realize that none of this was his fault. Thank you for sharing

Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 80

It was kinda sad that edward thought carlisle would keep it from him who his father was, had carlisle known he would have had Victoria thrown off the case because its really not right for her to be involved in the case. but i'm glad they got to talk about it also thought it was so funny that carlisle used Edwards profanity. 

Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 78

Edward really got the short stick when it comes to stepparents first his father is and evil prick then his stepmother takes out her anger on a tramatized abused kid who didn't know what happened to her husband. And i have no doubt that Victoria has been taking out her anger on him i'm sure she gets a kick out of seeing how she can affect him. b*tch!

Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 77

So at first i thought that perhaps Bella was over reacting about the need to rush home and i felt kinda bad for phil but after Victorias little revalation i think its a good thing. 

Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 75

The flashbacks are sad but also i'm fascinated by them. 

Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 73

Poor bella i can't imagine how hard it is to go back to the house where her mom died, then to meet jake, poor bella. but in the end it will be the right thing that she needed to do. 

Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 56

Ok so this is something that bothers me about bella and this chapter is a good example of it she get a bit sanctimonious, she expects everyone to see Edward the way she does. It doesn't suprise me that Edward and the others don't get on very well for Alice and Em, the were kids and didn't realize just how damaged their brother was its not suprising that things are difficult but Em proved when he confronted Mike to protect Edward that he does care he just isn't sure how to proceed. Its not like every teen is capable of being selfless enough to help someone as troubled as Edward. 

Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 55

Hi i'm new to this story i've read all the way through but can't reveiw from my Nook so i'm trying to come back and review to a few chapters. i to read and not review. So i really liked this chapter, i liked how bella appeared in Edwards dream and was able to help him through it. And of course poor edward when he woke up, it must be so difficult to fear sex and yet be a hormonal teen, he's reacting in a normal way and yet all he knows about sex is pain he's afraid that he would hurt her. its really sad 

And now Em knows its a good thing but really scary for him.

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2011 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 108

YAY for Edward!  I am SO excited he finally admitted to himself that it wasn't his fault!!!

Reviewer: Msarkie (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 108

Woot!!  Go Edward!!

 

He's finally getting it.

Reviewer: ast (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 108

yay!!! Finally he believes he never did anything wrong... :)

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 108

Go Edward.....stupid bitch, he should have told her he was going to be with his mother and family.

Reviewer: lunaluna72 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 108

Woo Hoo Edward ! So bloody brilliant, loved it. Hope your ok, thinking of you x

Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2011 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 108

That was HUGE for Edward. He finally gets that it wasn't his fault. I'm kind of bummed his mother didn't drum up a better excuse for not intervening, but I guess that's life. I also like how Edward didn't have to lean on Bella to do what he needed.

My favorite line was "Fucked up. You?" So honest and direct.

Reviewer: Amnotkim (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2011 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 108

YAY!! He said it!! He's accepted it!! Maybe he'll be all better now!!!!! Love this story!!!!!!

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2011 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 108

AMEN EDWARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Finally our boy gets his words out and has some pretty big realizations....I just want to wrap him up and hold him, telling him it will be okay.  But I wonder about the "high" from the anger that he has now let out will effect him?  I know he still has alot to do to get better but I think he is now ready to move forward!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I Love that Emmett was the one to lash out first showing the protective side of himself..... making Edward realzie that he was not alone in this.......... amd Esme goning all Mama Bear on Elizabeth, now that was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2011 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 108

OHMYGOSH!!!!! Soo proud of Edward!!! Great great chapter pls update soon!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2011 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 108

I have been out of the country and just returned to your incredible story and the news of your personal loss.  Both you and Edward are on a "hero's journey." Thank you for sharing your strength with us. My thoughts and prayers are with you.

Reviewer: mrsckugs (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2011 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 108

Amazing. I loved this. Thank you. I am sitting here with tears in my eyes. 

Reviewer: Olive Oil (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2011 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 108

*fist pumps the air in triumphant relief*

Reviewer: kittensrcute16 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2011 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 108

Write more please!!!!

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2011 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 108

Edward finally has his moment with his birth mother and he shines! "It was never my fault"....probably the most important line in this chapter, maybe in this whole story is Edward realizing things were done to him that he did not cause or instigate. Love big brother Emmett all ready to kick some ass....and don't mess with Esme when it comes to her kids, she will stick you for sure. What was really great here is Edward initiated this meeting and he ended it, it was all on his terms and I think that will only boost his sense of self that much more. Great chapter, look forward to more.

Reviewer: scarlet (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2011 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 108

So sad. What a twisted aweful mother!

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