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Reviewer: mksims1 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 77

SO IS SHE HIS STEPMOM AND WHEN R U GOING TO GET THEM OUT OF ALL THIS PAIN

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 77

Holy crap....not James?   Some other guy right? 

Reviewer: ParisKat (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 77

Wow, now there's a cliff hanger. I can't say I'm surprised that Victoria and James were somehow involved in the past, but wow, to drop it on Edward like that. I hope Bella gets back soon, he's going to need her. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Olive Oil (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 76

why do i have the sick feeling that victoria is not on edward's side? please, please update this story soon! bella and i are freaking out over here!

Reviewer: Olive Oil (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 67

although i'm crying like a ninny, i loved this chapter

Reviewer: Olive Oil (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 58

thank you, i was honestly worried that u were gonna make edward pull a new moon... i wouldn't have been able to handle that in this story

Reviewer: Olive Oil (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 46

i don't think i'm ready for the full story :(

Reviewer: Olive Oil (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 37

they'll comfort each other :)

Reviewer: Olive Oil (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 34

omg, awww... such a bitter sweet chapter

Reviewer: Olive Oil (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 33

triumphant fist pump in the air for bella!!!

Reviewer: Olive Oil (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 27

might i dare hope for progress from edward?

Reviewer: Olive Oil (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 16

yay, the meadow! :D

Reviewer: Olive Oil (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 4

loved this chapter. seems like edward's not the only one with issues...

Reviewer: Olive Oil (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 2

I am hooked!

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 76

I am hoping that Edward is a lot stronger at this meeting w/ the social worker, but I'll have to wait and see. Can't wait for Bella to get home, these two still have a lot to talk about without tip-toeing as though on eggshells!

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 75

Awwww, Carlisle's patience and love for Edward just shows through at every turn, but poor Edward has been emotionally abused on top of the physical abuse and doesn't feel worthy of anyone's love so it's so hard for him to wrap his head around it all and accept it openly. We see how the present life is starting to overtake the past, ie the dream with James and how everyone else popped in. I think eventually the good dreams will outweigh the bad!!!

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 74

I hope Edward doesn't sulk too much in the self-loathing over his worthiness of being a good boyfriend for Bella!!!

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 74

I hope Edward doesn't sulk too much in the self-loathing over his worthiness of being a good boyfriend for Bella!!!

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 76

Were they supposed to meet at the house I don't remember, good chapter I lost my dad a few years back and I can emphasize with what Bella is going through.

Reviewer: scarlet (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 76

Great chapter!

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 76

Bella was better with Phil.  She was also much more introspective in a good way.  I am eagerly looking forward to the next update.  I want to know what is happening with Edward.  This is Victoria's last chance to play cruel mind games with Edward.  I hope his time with her doesn't set him back.

Reviewer: lunaluna72 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 76

Bless Charlie asking them to take a flower. Cant wait for Bella to be back with Edward.

Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 76

Grrrrrr! You have to give me more than that! Always loyal!

Reviewer: janefanatic (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 74

I'm so glad she's letting Edward help her now! And I loved the (minimal) Phil/Bella interaction. I know she understood that she'd been unfair to him, but I'm proud that she was able to tell him that. 

Reviewer: janefanatic (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 76

Can't I pretend to be surprised? Even a little?

On a serious note: I get the changed dynamics between Bella and Phil; it's understandable that Renée, being their only real link, would take their bond with her death. But I was kind of surprised by how baldly Bella stated this, because I thought they were having a great moment over Renée's things (read: the jewelry box!), and I guess I just imagined a nice relationship there. And I am glad Alice told Bella about Victoria, even if she probably wasn't supposed to! And how she did it (protesting at first and then an "Oh Hell- has Edward told you...") was pricelessly Alice. Thanks for sharing!

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