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Reviewer: opalaline (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 84

My heart aches for Edward! poor guy is trying so hard!

Jasper was just awesome! How great for Edward to see that everyone isn't out to get him!

So glad to see him finally use the journal...I bet this will really help him sort through his feelings.

Look forward to chapter 85!

Love this story!

 

Reviewer: melb626 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 84

Man, can't Edward catch a dang break. I am glad some good came out of it by him opening the note book and writing. I am hoping that Edward starts to make some strides soon.

Reviewer: Rion (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 84

This is just amazing deep story.. road to recovery is long, hard and painful.. thank you for not rushing to a HEA
Edward is really fighting so hard for Bella and to be better it kind of breaks your heart..
Have Merry Christmas

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 84

Jasper was awesome in this chapter! Glad to see Edward writing in the journal! That you for the Christmas gift of an update ... loved it! Happy Holidays Nilla!

Reviewer: txgrl (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 84

Great chapter - kudos to you for putting out consistently good work.  Every chapter is spot on and well done!

Reviewer: Amphigory (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 83

Ill trust you, and even not hate you...as I love your story, if you promise to relieve the cliffy VERY, VERY, soon.

Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 83

Is he having a flashback or does he see something? I got a pain in my chest!

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 83

What happened? Why?

Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 83

Trusting you.

Reviewer: janlb123 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 82

Thank you for the Chaper Notes.  Completely agree, this is a wonderful story that shouldn't be rushed.  The lemons need to happen at the right time, and will be all the sweeter for it.

Reviewer: janlb123 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 83

I trust you, I don't hate you!  ::holding Nilla's hand::

I knew things are always going to be 2 steps forward, one step back with E&B ... so I'm just happy for the story to unfold in its own time.

Reviewer: Olive Oil (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 83

OMG! poor eddie freaking out at the movies! what was bella thinking? taking his into a dark theater? did she loose her mind? stupid, stupid, stupid!

Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 83

holy hell batman,

Panic attack because of the dark????

Something in the movie that sparked a memory?

Someone ?

AWaiting the next update x x 

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 83

Ooh, poor POOR Edward.  He just freaked.  Now he will deal with his guilt! 

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 82

I can't believe people really expect Edward to just be ready to jump into bed with Bella.  He freaked when he got a hard on!  He has a long journey still to go.  I think the journey will make the destination all the more sweeter!  I am enjoying the progress!

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 83

wow very very good keep up the great work and post soon

bye bye

Reviewer: CyraBear (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 83

Oh, poor guy.  It took me half the chapter to figure out why he was so freaked out.  Good thing Bella didn't kiss him.

Reviewer: Unfallenangel (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 83

omg whats rong was he thinking about james? man im soo hooked on this how could u leave it like this :(

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 83

Uh oh... bad idea, I guess... will give them something to talk about in therapy... yikes.

Another great chapter. I can't beleive you are dedicated enough that we're already on chapter 83... thank you so much for your hard work!

Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 83

Oh No! WTF happened to him?!?! Ohhh...our poor Edward! Why couldn't he enjoy a simple movie night? :+(   I'm afraid of your answer...ooohhhh

If you aren't able to update beforehand, I wish you and yours a Very Merry Christmas too! Love Ya..Linda

Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 83

Aww poor Edward. People must think he is a psycho girlfriend beater=( Hope it gets better for him.

Reviewer: starsong (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 83

Oh no, a cliff-hanger!  I can never tell if I enjoy them or hate them more!  I suppose I like the dramatics of an end to a chapter like this, just wish I had the next chapter readily available.  I will definitely be looking forward to the next installment!

Poor Edward, I was worried about the movies.  He is trying so hard, though, it just breaks my heart when more things go wrong.  But I do have confidence in your vision for the story, so I will just be waiting to see how it all unfolds!

Reviewer: Library Lolita (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 83

I don't hate you and I love how you're treating E with a rarely seen authenticity and honesty. Have a wonderful Christmas and I look forward to the next!!!

Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 83

oh no poor edward :(

it breaks my heart everytime he has an episode :(

Reviewer: Chelz29 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 83

I HATE YOU! Okay, just kidding. BUT COME ON! Don't do this to us! Update ASAP and we'll leave the pitchforks at home ;)

It's soooo good, keep going. Go up to 200 chapters, IDC, just get on with it, please! =)

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