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Reviewer: itsyblue (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 84

Aw... poor Edward is trying so hard, and just can't catch a break!! I love this story.

Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 84

Great chapter!! Im happy you were able to give us another amazing chapter before Christmas :) Poor Edward, made me cry he is trying so hard to prove that hes okay :( Im glad Jasper was the one who came in to talk to him and help him out a little bit. Hmm I wonder what he will write down in his notebook....?? Thanks so much again for the chapter!! Have a great and wonderful holiday!!! :)

Reviewer: vickid (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 84

This seemed like a really major chapter to me. E wants to be better so bad but forcing himself to do it just isn't working and he finally is realizing that he just isn't going to make it happen very easily. Excellent writing.
Merry Christmas.

Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 84

"Bout time,  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 84

I'm so glad he's started writing.  Maybe he can start being honest with himself first and then share with Dr. Weber.  Poor guy but awesome Jasper.

Reviewer: I_heart_jacob__ (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 84

He's making a breakthrough!!!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: Twihardgirl246 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 84

Edward is really trying too hard. And i'm so proud of him for writing in the notebook. Like Nicki Minaj says, they can see right through him. lol :)

Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 84

liked how Jasper handled the situation...curious to see what he wrote in his book.

Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 84

Oh jeez! Poor Edward. He should have just eaten the ice cream. It would have made me feel better, anyway.

~Tay

Reviewer: 09kez (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 84

ohh... progress for poor E.   Painful, but progress none the less.  Merry xmas

Reviewer: Coz (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 84

Poor Edward, I really felt for him in this chapter but I love the fact that he tried to challenge his anxieties, not to mention that he started writing in the journal.  I loved Jasper, how he reached out to Edward and maybe Edward lowered his walls when it came to a potential friendship between the two.

Like always, a great chapter and I hope you have a Happy Christmas!

Reviewer: beacullen (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 84

I hope this is the turning point.  The point that makes him really truely  want things to be different than they are.  He may not ever be what he thinks is totally normal, but hopefully he can be happy for the most part and get through a day with no flash backs. thanks Nilla Merry Christmas

Reviewer: REDHOTANGELS (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 84

oh this was ssooooo good i can not wait for the next chapter!! Happy holidays!

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 84

Edward in this chapter is all over the map emotionally.....must be hard as hell for Bella and the others to try and keep up with his mood swings. You have to give him credit for trying and lasting as long as he did but maybe this is one of those times he should have spoken up for himself, admitted maybe he wasn't ready for this just yet. At least he has the foresight to keep Dr. Weber in mind and is doing something constructive by tackling that notebook. Love this story Nilla, you are doing a great job with it....am enjoying the slow yet steady progress with Edward.

Reviewer: chrrispysmomlee (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 84

thank you for the new chapter!!  what a nice christmas present!!!

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 84

:)

Reviewer: nanuvamp (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 84

marry xmas :) 

gr8 chap

xx

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 84

I feel like shoving a happy pill up his - but then I'm reminded of the fact he won't like that.

Merry Christmas.

Spikey

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 84

Great update.

Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 84

Shit! At least now maybe he can write and get it out of his system...He really needs to learn to let Bella help more.

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 84

I knew he'd beat himself up over this.  It is great to see him using the journal though. And Jasper is such a great guy. 

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: dellatwi (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 84

Okay I feel bad for edward I really do but he is starting to irk me too he's so damn rude.

Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 84

Oh!  I'm so glad he started writing!  Who knew it would take this to get him to do it. 

Happy Holidays to you.  Thanks for the lovely gift!

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 84

Yes!  It's time Edward started to release his emotions on paper.  That's how I released the hold of my negative self-talk - wrote them down on paper and then burned them forever. 

I'd say that as far as episodes go, Edward did a good job of pulling himself out from his flashback.

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 84

Well, a good start :) At least he found the notebook! Worth it if the night causes him to think about it!

Another great chapter, thanks for writing!

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