Reviewer: Vryunique (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2020 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Make This Go On Forever
Great story. Thanks for sharing....
Reviewer: Vryunique (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2020 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Here Without You
That might have been a good conversation where they made some progress except that Bella is still acting like they're not going to last. She doesn't want him to meet her mom and she's still thinking Edward will break up with her eventually. If his actions up until now and his sob fest wasn't proof he wasn't going anywhere than I think Bella has some problems.
Reviewer: Vryunique (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2020 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Please Don't Leave Me
I wish Rosalie said that maybe Bella wasn't the girl she thought she was and if that was the case maybe Edward would be better off without her. What Edward did was wrong, taking Bella that way. I wish he would have told her that he was very disappointed and was upset she didn't love him the way he loved her. That's what I thought of her actions. Edward deserves better than someone who will run at the first sign of trouble. I wouldn't want a partner like that.
Reviewer: Vryunique (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2020 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 6 -- I'm Yours
A woman laying unconscious on a bench with a bruise on her head should be brought to the hospital or an ambulance called.
Reviewer: Vryunique (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2020 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Whatever It Takes
Bella sure seems pissy because a coworker is a dick to woman. Her comment about he should know where she lives since he gets around was way out of line. Especially to an acquaintance who may have a say in her future.
Reviewer: Vryunique (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2020 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Whatever It Takes
Bella sure seems pissy because a coworker is a dick to woman. Her comment about he should know where she lives since he gets around was way out of line. Especially to an acquaintance who may have a say in her future.
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2017 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Make This Go On Forever
Love you, love your stories. Can't wait to read the next one.
Reviewer: anonymous15 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2015 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 8 - They Bring Me To You
I'm not happy with this chapter at all, well except for the part that Mike was put in the hospital. Bella definitely should have pressed charges, & got him fired. In fact what she did was excactly the opposite, she practically encouraged his behaviour. This chapter should have set a better example against that kind of incidents.
Reviewer: anonymous15 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2015 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Fix You
Well, I have few concerns.
1. Why doesn't Bella press charges?
2. Why did she cave to peer pressure that easily if she doesn't want to drink? Is she that weak?
3. Why didn't she refuse the drink that Mike brought her? She didn't have to drink it at all if she didn't want to.
Reviewer: anonymous15 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2015 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Obsession
Hilarious. Typical kindergarten behaviour from our dear E.
Reviewer: anonymous15 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2015 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Worlds Collide
So far a very good opening. Even though the story is already written and the reviewing on 1st chapter may seem redundant, I felt the chapter deserves it. :) Besides I'm actually a fan of your writing so I hope this story will also live upto the expectations. Best wishes!!!
Reviewer: Babecullen (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Make This Go On Forever
This is a great story. I will be reading more of your stories.
Reviewer: ficfangirl (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2015 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Make This Go On Forever
Thanks for sharing an enjoyable story.
Reviewer: DaisyDelicate (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2014 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Worlds Collide
Love it honey!
Reviewer: kadronya (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2014 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Make This Go On Forever
I love your histoire !!
Reviewer: Emma Goldman (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2014 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Just Say Yes
Plan B is not an abortion. If the egg is already fetilized you are pregnant. If it isn't it stops it from becoming fetelized. Same thing regluar B.C. pills do.
Reviewer: 2loveybunnies (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2014 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Make This Go On Forever
Great story, loved it - even the parts that were too perfect to be real! But, that's what fanfiction is all about and I love a good love story that ends in an HEA!
Thanks so much for sharing this and I'm glad I finally got around to reading it!
Reviewer: 2loveybunnies (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2014 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 14 - I'm in Love with the Girl
Oh no, Bella's cap was sitting out! Did Jane notice it? Will she out them? Is she jealous and vindictive like Edward's former conquests, or would she respect their genuine feelings?
Reviewer: 2loveybunnies (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2014 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 6 -- I'm Yours
Damn, these people sure do a lot of drinking!
Ha, I love the way he just threw that out there at the end...can't wait to see her reaction!
Reviewer: 2loveybunnies (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2014 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Whatever It Takes
Oh man, Irina is a piece of work. Bitter, and very unprofessional! Hard to believe she couldn't act more like a lady in a social situation, but I guess Edward hurt her. Can't wait to see what Bella thought of Edward's explanation and if she did pick up the finer points of what he said...
Reviewer: 2loveybunnies (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2014 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Getting to Know You
Well that certainly worked out to Edward's advantage! I wonder what Bella will think when she finds out about their little trip?
Reviewer: 2loveybunnies (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2014 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Obsession
Wow, would love to hear what Bella thought of Edward's rude behavior at lunch. I wonder if he'll be able to keep his distance?
Reviewer: 2loveybunnies (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2014 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Worlds Collide
For some reason I've had this on my TBR list but never actually read it! Thought I'd come do it now since I was in the mood for something good. My best friend's husband is an attorney with Justice and talking to her sparked my interest in your storyline!
Reviewer: twilightcougar (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2014 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Please Don't Leave Me
Wow !office gossip it the water cooler talking .I just tell my buddies" whatch your backs.rumors .are. flying .about .you"
Reviewer: twilightcougar (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2014 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 15 - No Air
Emmett is so funny .I cracked up how embarssing.
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