Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Truth
I like where this is going! I have thought about this scenario too, and I think I imagined it pretty much the same. Cool!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I hope Tanya's love for Edward doesn't deter Bella's love for Edward.
Reviewer: Nicab (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Prologue
Finally, I have waited awhile for an update! Love your story and so wish the chapters were longer. Please update sooner than later :-)
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Hmmm will she win over Edward though? Tell your beta to get on the stick with the next chapter! We are waiting!!!!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I think it's lovely that you are making Tanya a sympathetic character here. I just hope that Bella doesn't try to pull the "Edward should be with Tanya" card. Honestly, I just hate that because it isn't something that can be forced and considering how long Edward has been resisting Tanya I think that says a lot. Sympathy is fine though, I mean heck I can't blame her for wanting Edward. Who wouldn't?
I'm glad that Bella made friends with the Denali clan, and I think it's important to be friends with someone outside of the family. She does seem a lot more calm now. I've never been to Alaska but I've always imagined it as being peaceful for some reason. And cold.
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: dmnsqrl (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I have to say, put of the various versions I've seen of "Edward didn't save her from the van and she was changed" I'm liking this one the best. It seems truest to Bella and Edward and is smoothly written besides
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Prologue
What a cool concept! I just found this story...well, better late...
Reviewer: hus8 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I like the idea of Bella being changed after the accident and how you have dealt with her conflicts and confusion as she learns about being a vampire. I also like the realistic approach to her having to fall in love with Edward and them starting off as friends (from her point of view). I look forward to more.
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Great Chapter! I do feel a little bit sorry for Tanya,
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Adding to my faves... I love your writing style but I wish the chapters were longer.
Reviewer: roadkill2105 (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I like the story so far,
there were aspects of i that i dunnno seemed a bit odd.
but overall i am enjoying it.
update soon
Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Great story. I like the twist you put on it. I'm very eager to read more!!! :o}
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
*happy dance* HE HUGGED HER!! (Can't imagine what I'll do if/when their relationship develops and he kisses her, lol)
I loved this chapter. I'm glad you included the Denali clan into your story. I like the stuff about Tanya too. She does deserve some sympathy. She's been in love with him for decades and then he goes and falls in love with Bella. I'm definitely Team E/B but Tanya deserves some love too. I'm also glad Tanya's not a 'bad guy' in this story. She isn't exactly every fanfic author's favourite character.
Anyway, thank you for updating. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Yay for the update :) Thanks! Grreat Chapter
Reviewer: fluteislove (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
One word. AMAZING! That's what this is. I love it! Please update soon! :)
Reviewer: MisguidedAngel (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Yessss....I really enjoy your story and have been looking forward to a new posting and I am not disappointed.
Looking forward to more Bella and Edward:-)
Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I don't mind Tanya getting sympathy... as long as she doesn't get Edward! lol
Reviewer: stylishy (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I kinda like the non-witch Tanya, very different! But she is in love with Edward...mhh I guess we'll just have to wait and see :)
Great job!
~Yelda XD
Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 8: Broken
Update soon please :)
Reviewer: stylishy (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 8: Broken
Great job, I love this! Aaawwww....Edward's being all sweet...I hope Bella and Edward fall in love ;) by the way, you had me in tears in chapter 5! Update soon, *begs* please??
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 8: Broken
Very bittersweet. I feel sad for Bella, having to leave behind her past. But Forks will always be marred with violence for her. I think a new beginning is just what she needs.
Very well written.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 7: A Hand to Hold
Very nicely written. I am glad that Bella has Edward to lean on per se. I only hope she falls in love with him :)
Reviewer: berrycute105 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 8: Broken
THIS IS REALLY GOOD I LIKE HOW U SWITCHED IT AROUND BUT IT STILL SEEM 2 CONPREHEND VERY EVENILY AND WELL AND I CAN SAY IS I LOVE IT AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST
Reviewer: Nicab (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Prologue
Please don't stop writing :-( Update soon!
Reviewer: Jooboo (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 8: Broken
At chapter 5 you had me in tears.. and now I am totally hooked!
Although parts are so tragic and heartbreaking they are still so intriguing. I was quite disappointed Bella had so much self control in Breaking Dawn as a new vampire so probably in a morbid way I quite liked her hunting Eric.. hmm ok so now I seem like some murderous lunatic...
But then the Edward/Bella stuff = awwww!!! So sweet.. it is the reason I love twilight and now your fanfic :)
But it just keeps getting better and better with each chapter! Please, please (begs on one knee) keep writing.
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