Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Good! I felt bad for Tanya too. I mean c'mon can you really blame the gal?
Another great chapter, can't wait for more.
Reviewer: aireonna (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
OMG, I love this story please keep up the wonderful work, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Leah (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Yours is my absolute favorite of all the stories here on Twilighted. I am waiting for your more than any other. You are VERY gifted. I hope to hear more and soon!
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I like that you are not making Tanya a monster. In Twilight she didn't come across as one in my opinion. So what if she is in love with Edward, it doesn't mean she is a monster for it!!
I would like to see Rose get over herself. I know that she is upset that they moved and all,but really she should know why. She might not have tasted blood but she did kill several people and I am sure that caused her family to have to move back in the day too.
I really like the story. Good job.
Reviewer: Leah (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Sympathy is good! People aren't all bad or all good, so why should vampires be? EXCELLENT writing. You should consider ghostwriting or making your own stories. very well done!
Reviewer: antilleon (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I'm good with Tanya not being evil in this one. I have a few favorites where she is horrible so it will balance out. Loved the chapter, keep it up.
Reviewer: berrycute105 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
i like tanya, but i was look forward to a vapire fight lol j/k but what is tanya gonna do next duhduhduuhh
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I totally had to jump back to the last chapter and refresh my brain. But, that was highly enjoyable to reread the previous chapter too, so what the heck am I complaining about!??!
Well done, I think I like your version of Tanya so much better than many others. You seem to be sticking to the true version of her. She was jealous of Bella, but I don't think she was ever malicious.
Reviewer: christinemarie13 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Yeah, I don't think Tanya is all that bad. As long as she isn't all conniving and mean, I won't have a problem with her. That is usually what causes the dislike, obviously. And this chapter was great, by the way.
Reviewer: KerriDia (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
As promised...
EXCELLENT. I'm in love.
I think that pretty much sums it up :)
Reviewer: KerriDia (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 5: One More Murder
OK, so in liu of watching Family Guy I decided to read your story. I was going to save reviewing (as is my normal procedure) for the last posted chapter (I have this problem with not being able to stop reading once I get started).
This story stopped me dead in my tracks (which is not a bad thing). I haven't read many fanfics that have compelled me to stop in the middle and write any form of a review.
I'm astounded! Your last chapter had me tearing up...now I'm in shock! Now the only problem I have is that I'm hooked. <3<3<3 your story!
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Good chapter! I love the entrance the Cullen's make, especially Alice. LOL Glad that Bella meets the Denali clan, and they seem to hit it off too.
And it's refreshing to see that you're not going to make Tanya into the "bad guy". I think she's turned into the evil witch too much, so YAY! LOL
Can't wait to see more, keep it coming! :)
~Cat~
Reviewer: radiant_being73 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I have chills...great update...I love that Bella got some time to develop her new self under the un-oppressive care of Esme and the Denali coven. Hopefully she isn't threatened by Tanya's being in love with Edward.
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I read this all in one sitting and loved it! It was very well written and I like that this story is not so drama and angst ridddden! At least for now....
Looking forward to the next chapter! (And I like Tanya in this one I hope she dosent do anything awful!)
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Truth
loved this chapter! so well done.
Reviewer: Milliehud (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
ohh PLEASE WRITE MORE!! jELOUSY!!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Good story. I'm enjoying it.
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Everyone deserves a little sympathy sometime. It is still an Edward/Bella story right? I enjoyed Esme in this chapter too.
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Let the drama begin! good story, you've got me
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I'm really enjoying this story so far....I'll be looking forward to reading more of it!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I liked Tanya. I like how you established a friendly relationship with the Denali clan and Bella. I can't wait to read more about Edward and Bella's growing feelings for eachother. It just keeps getting better and better! I love it. Great job!!!
Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I just read this for the first time. It's really good i like it. I can't say I'm a big fan of Tanya though. It always irritated me how she threw herself at Edward. I look forward to reading more.
Reviewer: Kim620 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Well crap! Tanya always has to pose a problem, huh? lol I hope Bella doesn't get too angsty over this....maybe Alice will need to step in.
Good chapter. Moved the story along nicely. Not rushed and not a filler, well done! Please update soon :)
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 5: One More Murder
Holy crap! What are they going to do now?
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I am sorry to say but I truly laughed at your "sympathy" statement. I am glad that you are a better person than I, but its nice to read Tanya as a person instead of an actual bitch. I love this story, I cant wait for more Bella and Edward. :D
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