Reviewer: Pollygirl77 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2008 06:04 PM · On: Prologue
Love it!
Reviewer: rzokian (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 3: A Sign of Life
it looks like it might have been a little difficult to squeeze the information bella learned over several weeks and months into such a short period of time. she notices everything and wants to know about it right away. just like bella. :)
Reviewer: rzokian (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 1: A New Life
hmm . . . . this is something i wouldn't have thought of. how does Bella react to becoming a vampire before she learned so much about it? *clicking next*
Reviewer: Mallers (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 3: A Sign of Life
oooooooo i like it!!!!!!!!! mostly cause i've always wondered also what would have happened if edward hadn't saved bella that day with tylers van!! i hope you continue with the story for awhile it's really good!! Update soon please!
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 3: A Sign of Life
Good chapter! Loved her hunting and being good at it, shopping with the girls (or rather sitting there watching them shop lol), and then playing games with the family (even though we don't actually "see" that part). Can't wait for more of this! More Edward/Bella interration would be great too! LOL Keep it coming! :) ~Cat~
Reviewer: Kim620 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 3: A Sign of Life
I am enjoying this story. I guess it's time for a sad chapter :( Drama is always good in a fanfic, LOL. Good Chapter.
Reviewer: kweitemier (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 3: A Sign of Life
absolutely love it so far! It should have been how Twilight turned out, I think
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 3: A Sign of Life
Great story. I really like the whole board-game thing.
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 3: A Sign of Life
It's curious that Edward did not got hunting with Bella as well. Alice and Jasper are great in this chapter. I look forward to more! :)
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 3: A Sign of Life
I like this story--please keep it going!
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Truth
this is well done. I enjoy how you have Bella considering her new life. There are lots of questions, and I look forward to where you will take this story!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 3: A Sign of Life
DRAMA!! DRAMA!!! Drag this baby out!! This is wonderful! I wasn't sure I would like it, because it deviates so far from the canon, but I am enjoying it and would love to read more!
Reviewer: Singer1940 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 3: A Sign of Life
I am enjoying this immensely. I'm looking forward to see where you take this...
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 1: A New Life
I like this idea-- How would the story change if she really didn't know them at all? The relationship with Rosalie should be really effected as well. At least Jasper does not have to worry about his control around her, and Emmett will be a lot of fun, I'm sure. Great start! :) p.s. I love that you used to write Pride & Prejudice fanfic. That is simply awesome! Reading on...
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 3: A Sign of Life
Great job Update again
Reviewer: pigzrool (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 3: A Sign of Life
I love this story. This is my favorite" What if Edward did change Bella" or whatever story. I think Edward is really sweet to Bella. I think you capture the characters really well. better than I could. P.S. I don't care if the next chapter is a little sad. I want more!
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 3: A Sign of Life
It's a great story. I love the way the characters are written. Lots more please!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 3: A Sign of Life
Good chapter. I am glad that she had a good talk with Edward. Also, Cranium=lots of fun times!!
Reviewer: ikinz (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 3: A Sign of Life
My vote is that you keep going. I nver thought of the story from this view. Drama is good.... Thanks!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 3: A Sign of Life
I'm glad that Bella adapted well to hunting. That was a very no-nonsense approach and I approve! I am very curious to see if you will have Bella have a power and how she handles human bloodlust, not to mention of course the relationship with Edward (how it will progress). This is a fun read!
Reviewer: sarunokona (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 3: A Sign of Life
moooore!!!!!!
Reviewer: cocoajunkie (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Truth
It's good. I can imagine how confused she must be right now.
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Truth
Love it
Reviewer: mamagrace (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Truth
Yes, I like it! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Truth
I'm so glad Bella didn't have a major freakout and start screaming at them or anything (or run away). It IS a lot of info to take in though, isn't it? I hope Edward is the one to take her hunting!
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