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Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 1: A New Life
Loving this so far. Can't wait to see how Bella reacts to this.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 05:05 AM · On: Prologue
Oh, what a great start! I'm glad I don't need to wait for an update and can just click next :)
Reviewer: Wisecracker (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
this is great!
you must, MUST write another chapter! or ten.... 8 million thumbs up. =)
Reviewer: Demetria99 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
That was a really good chapter. It was exactly what i can picture happening to Bella if this happened. Nice work. I will be patiently awaiting the next chapter!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
ooh! I am excited to see what will come of their walk!
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
Very nice. I love when Jasper acts caring to someone else other than just Alice.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
edward and bella sitting in a tree... lol this story is awesome. please update soon!
Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
:) I saw this story today and thought that I'd give it a try. I like it, especially now that the love story is beginning.
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
Love it, love it, love it. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
Good stuff! Great chapter.
Reviewer: Kim620 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
Good chapter. I can't wait to watch the love story unfold......
Reviewer: sdfan92 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
i LIKE IT!! iNTERESTING
Reviewer: edwardluvr (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
bom bom bom...................... dont let edward make a fool of himself!!!!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: November 05, 2008 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
YEEEE!!! That was wonderful!! I do hope you will keep bringing up Bella's guilt, just a bit, because I don't think she'd get over it that fast. But I love meddling Alice - she is fantastic!!
Reviewer: Mallers (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
oOoOoOoO i love it!!!!!! keep udating it's so good!
Reviewer: pigzrool (Anonymous) · Date: November 05, 2008 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
I love how Bella was kinda disconnected for awhile. I don't know if that relaly happens with vmapires, but you played it out well. I want to find out what happens on their walk!
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
A kiss...that is what should come out of the walk. :D I am glad that she isnt beating herself up as bad as I thought she would. Esme and Jasper really helped with that. I cant wait for more.
Reviewer: mottmom (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
I like the way you expressed Bella's distress over killing Eric..... Hope they have a good walk.
Reviewer: xLaTuaCantantex (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
I love it!!!
MORE!
Reviewer: Momstheteacher (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
About time the love story started lol Great story
Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 5: One More Murder
Ouch. But well done.
Reviewer: muggle1983 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 5: One More Murder
No running away allowed! You must stay and keep going with this awesome story ;P
Reviewer: sdfan92 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 5: One More Murder
GASP...GASP...GASP
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 5: One More Murder
Whoa! Didn't see that coming. This is one of the first stories I've read where Bella falters. Nice job.
Reviewer: PaisleyCrighton (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 5: One More Murder
Very bold - I like it. Keep up the good work, and update soon. I can't wait for the aftermath.
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