Reviewer: Kendra (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Fantastic story so far. I love that you portray Tanya as decent and kind. It's about time that girl got some sympathy. I love the trials so far that you put your characters through. Angst and action and plot lines turns pages. Love scenes and fluff make us smile, but too much and it just gets boring and repetetive. So far, your story is engaging and interesting. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: modern_audrey (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Too bad it ended here--it was just getting interesting. But I do take issue with your portrayal of Tanya being in love with Edward. He himself observed in Midnight Sun that her emotions toward him were of a shallow nature, with no deeper feeling involved. Having a clear window to her mind, I'd say he's a pretty reliable source.
Reviewer: PPV123 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I wish you'd keep updating this story! It's such a good, refreshing, and relaxing read!
Good work!
Reviewer: sams830 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Please continue this story- I am enjoying it!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 4: When the Lights Go Down
How sad! But very good.
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Gah!! Cliffies are evil!!!!
update soon!!!!!!
Reviewer: NiCullen76 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
i'm drawn to this story but are you ever going to finish it?
Reviewer: alice-cullen-104 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
love the story! write more soon as you can, its brilliant!
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Wow..Please update again soon...And please don't let it be to long before Edward and Bella gets together...I can't wait.. ;D
Reviewer: MistyAnn (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I like your story. Just please don't hook-up Tanya and Edward. I understand you don't want to make her be a witch. I just don't want Edward to feel sorry for her and get with her.
Reviewer: soccergirl23 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Hello!! Hurry up on the chapters! I've been waiting forever!
Reviewer: soccergirl23 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Your story is pretty good, but as I said in another comment, its not very accurate. Seriously, I know its a fanfic, but still even if Bella did kill Eric, she wouldn't want people caring for her like that. I mean theres no way she would let anyone hunt for her!
Reviewer: soccergirl23 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
love the story, keep the chapters coming!!
Reviewer: Clairety Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
This. Is. Just. So. Damn. Amazing.
Sorry am a little hyper right now, haha. I am so sucked into this story, this is amazing, please keep writing!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: soccergirl23 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
Vampires can't faint you idiot!!!
Reviewer: soccergirl23 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 5: One More Murder
How the hell did Eric get so far into the woods when he was at the funeral!! Why did the Cullens not take off after Bella as soon as she left and catch her before she killed him? how could Alice not see this coming?! You obviously didn't think out this part of the story very well.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
please write more soon
Reviewer: maryka (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
wow, i can not wait to read the coming chapters. when is it going to be posted? i find it more interesting than the original twilight story line.
thanks.
please post it soon.
Reviewer: jlee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Prologue
It's been such a long time since you've updated... I hope you haven't forgotten about those of us that have been patiently waiting for your next chapters... Please update soon!!
Reviewer: Pineapple (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I sure hope that you continue this. It's creative and you're character descriptions are fantastic.
Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Update soon please!!
Reviewer: jedishelly1 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Great fic - I'd love to read more!
Reviewer: Painfully_Addicted (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
Please write more soon! I like this one! I can't wait to see what is in store for the Cullens next!
Reviewer: daunting_purple (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
I can't wait for the next chapters!!! So much suspense, its intense!
Reviewer: Shaylee_PotterMalfoy (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
im really enjoying it. hope you continue.
cheers :)
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