wow, totally great!!! first, i want to tell you i have read no other au-human only stories because i have been so against going away from the real story line but something about your summary and picture drew me into looking at your story, and i am so glad i did. Definitly on my fav list!!! i couldnt stop reading, not even once, so, that is why i waited to review at the end, not because the other chapters were unworthy of reviews....they were totally attention grabbers. I love this perspective even though i love the danger the original vampire plot carries.....n either way this story rocks and i guess your story has given my stubborn twilight obsessed self permission to read other human based twilight fanfics....

thumbs way up!!!!

Cant wait for updates....hurry please!!!!!

Returning to school after the holidays what a complete drag.  Jessica had a lot of nerve walking  up to Edward and kissing him.  Then he told Jessica off regarding her behavior and mean words to Bella.  She in turn reported him to administrative authorities that Edward threatened her and he was suspended for the afternoon.  Bella was angry, but I was surprised that she didn't verbally chastise Jessica on both her behavior and her tattling.  Alice being gone for a week with her mother on another of their bonding trips.  She left poor Jasper all alone with no one to be with.  He joined Edward and Bella for the day.  Interesting to learn about his empathy powers, the ambulance analogy was a great one.  Bella and Edward remaining close and their relationship getting stronger.  After the morning kiss, Bella was having a hard time kissing Edward.  He was completely correct that her behavior was exactly what Jessica and Lauren were hoping to achieve.  They wanted Bella to withdraw from Edward.  Once he notified her of afternoon's suspension, she gave the entire lunchroom quite a show.  Now her mom is visiting with some announcement she wants to make in person.  Probably marrying someone new. I think Charlie overreacted to Bella's statement that her mom could meet Edward.  Any girl wants her mother to meet her boyfriend.  Charlie thinks she is getting too serious too soon.  He wants her to date more men before deciding Edward is the one for her.  Really Charlie what more can a girl want than Edward.  He's caring, loyal, romantic, funny, charming, kind, loving, and supportive among a lot of others.  Who doesn't want Edward Cullen?  I know I would like one for myself.  He's wonderful just enough of a bad boy to make it interesting, but a gentleman through and through.

I love this story!!!!!! You make them seem so cute and not grown-up!!! best story in awhile... like 2 days... lol. Update soon!

this has been perfect sweet and pure like first love and first kisses should be  every young couple should have memories like the one you are discribing   this was absolutly beautiful     i almost hate  to read on because i know like all good plots there is going to be the preverbial bump in the road for them   i hate to see smething so perfect be tainted by doubt    so i guess i better ready my self huh      

I thought that was amazing and cute and it kept me up half the night! I was still waiting for you to incorporate him being a vampire somewhere but other than that, it was an ideal read. Thank u!!

WHY DO I GET THIS FEELING SOMETHING BAD IS GONNA HAPPEN

im slightly obsessed with this thing. great job! i love it

That was a sweet New Years.

ooooh so cute...

up to chapter 8

Great chapter as usual. I'm so glad they expressed their love to each other and Emmett's presence just added to the quality of the chapter.

As usual, I really appreciated this chapter, B & E are so cute together.

Loved the introduction of Esme's character (she's a strong woman) and the description of the house.

Very cool story. I like the way you portayed the characters, they seem realistic.

I also like the easiness of the beginning of their "relationship".

Hey, squirrels ARE kind of creepy.  Beady little eyes, twitchy tails ... ugh!