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Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 03:54 PM · On: The beginning
More soon please
Reviewer: BlueDiamond (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 04:29 PM · On: The beginning
Certainly need more to get this going. Thanks.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 07:00 AM · On: The beginning
looking forward to more
Reviewer: Jynxx (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 04:57 AM · On: The beginning
So far, the writing is very good. I am interested to see what the story will be, but for now, there isn't really anything that occurred in this chapter...I'm thinking it probably should have a bit more information to be considered an actual chapter...maybe the first dream? Some background? Something....It just seems a bit unfinished for a chapter
But, you're idea from the summary seems interesting and original and I'm going to give it some more time to to see where you are going to go with it.
Reviewer: Safa (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 12:42 AM · On: The beginning
Sounds like an interesting summary, can't wait to see how this story develop.
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