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Reviewer: captaincurly (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2015 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 18

Thanks for the story. I enjoyed snarky Bella.

Reviewer: Mohanie (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 18

This was an amazingly, funny tale that had me with a smile on my face from start to finish. Which is a nice change from the angst filled tales I have been reading lately.

You are an amazing writer and Keep it up. Thanks for the smiles!!!

***my ratings 2 thumbs up, five stars!!!

Reviewer: 50bestfriends (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 9

You have the wit of ten thousand tongues and I love it. You should write, write, write. I love it and wouldn't change a thing - well I wouldn't be a true fan of yours if I didn't add ... just one thing ... spell check, please. Other than that - we're good sista! You have me rolling on the floor and I can't wait for more. You're good!!!!! And anything that's not good - can be easily fixed with spell check - so enjoy writing, spell check and write some more! Stop reading this and go write!

Reviewer: magandaangel (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 18

This is a great story. I enjoyed reading it!

Reviewer: Tabitha Finch (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 18

I totally loved the whole snark factor in the Cullen family -- especially Bella, of course!

Thought the end came little too quickly, but that's probably just because I've been enjoying it so much!

Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Tabitha Finch (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 13

So, Charlie must be her bio dad, right, if she smells like him? Veeeery interesting!

Great plot developments! Kinda cheesy intro -- the old "note hidden in the suitcase" schtick, but love what it led to! Of course, Carlisle must have wanted this development to come about at this time, and keep Edward close.

I'm so glad this story is completed and I won't have to wait for any chapters or cliffie resolutions!

Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Tabitha Finch (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 11

Uh, I'm confused. I thought her dad died before she was born. How did HE tell her the story?

Reviewer: nicroxursox12345 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 18

One word: A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!!! :D

Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 18

wow. i sure do like your style of writing and the plot you came up with. also the ending wasn't half bad. the humor was just as i liked it, dorky and sarcastic, and the drama was at an acceptable level. good characterization, check; expert narrative, check; times in which i couldn't control my laughter, check. well, you've ticked all the boxes and met the criteria, great job on the story.

dd

Reviewer: ChulaB (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 18

loved it, the whole story ;-)

Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 18

i so love emmett and jazz in this story, brilliant

Reviewer: rlarimore86 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 18

Wonderful! I loved this very very much! The humor was great and I cracked up several times. I loved the concept of the story and it turned out better than I expected. Great story!

Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 2

aw . so cute and funny .

when the hell does sexy edward come in ?!

oh hot damn , that boy is FINE .

Reviewer: Mimigrace (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 18

Awesome story! i'm glad that most of the focus was on the family rather than her relationship with edward. i'd love to have a big brother like emmett, he's a riot!

Reviewer: Elleg20 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 18

Aww its over nOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO i really liked this story and its slinky doo lol how cute thats the first time i've heard that one can't wait to read more of your stories

Reviewer: Elleg20 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 15

Aww that ws so sweet where was everybody else they must have left the house can't wait to hear what Em and Jaz say

Reviewer: Elleg20 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 14

ooooooooo I'd love to have a dream like this

Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 18

Haha I thought the ending was perfect!

B.Q.

Reviewer: missielynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 18

this was REALLY good story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I absolutly loved Tofu.

Reviewer: SpookyKat (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 9

So totally lovin' both this Bella and Edward. Heck, love the whole family!

Reviewer: SpookyKat (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 7

Love it! Captain Planet *snort*

Reviewer: JulieUK (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 18

Excellent story..I'm hoping for a sequel :) Please..pretty please :)

Reviewer: Melanie883 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 18

I just finished reading and though Bella's replies are all hilarious, I'm still laughing at the "Kids in the front seat cause accidents. Accidents in the back seat cause kids." one. Great story, really different but it worked!

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 18

GOOD JOB!!!

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