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Reviewer: starshinedown (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 07:00 AM · On: Flight
So much information to process! I like this chapter, and I'm eager to see how Bella interacts with the Cullens on an on-going basis. And I SO want to know the history with Carlisle.
Reviewer: Kim620 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 02:39 AM · On: Flight
I totally love this story. Excellent chapter. One of my favorites things about this chapter is that you chose Jasper to sit with Bella. I always felt they would have a deep connection but it was never explored and maybe now through you and this story it can be. can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 02:10 AM · On: Flight
I love this story! Every chapter has me wanting more, and I can't wait to see where you go with this!
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 06:54 PM · On: Flight
I am so curious as to how this will play out.
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 05:52 PM · On: And the walls came tumbling down...
Next thing I know, a bunch of men in black suits come to ship me to Guantanamo Bay. -- These days that is too true - I doubt I would have looked that up either! LOL. But it was a great chapter regardless! Emmett got to blow stuff up!!
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 08:06 PM · On: And the walls came tumbling down...
Cool chapter. I love me some Emmett. Thanks!
Reviewer: Kim620 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 02:01 PM · On: And the walls came tumbling down...
I am enjoying this story so much. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 08:46 AM · On: And the walls came tumbling down...
Very cool that they all got out alright! I am also glad that Emett got to beat some people up, he loves that. His little song was funny too!
Reviewer: wmlaw (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 06:32 AM · On: And the walls came tumbling down...
I don't think I've reviewed this fic yet, but I adored this chapter and your author's note had me laughing hysterically. I'm really glad you won't be having any black suited men ship you off to GB. If that happened, we would never know how this story ends!
Reviewer: meganbremer (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 10:47 AM · On: Running
Just remember, emmett has a fun personality, and he is rarely serious...
Reviewer: Kim620 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 10:29 AM · On: Running
Excellent chapter. The story moved along at a nice pace. Felix makes my skin crawl :P
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 10:10 AM · On: Running
Awesome, so Jasper is safe!!! Emmett's POV needs to be all about the fight with a hint of humor and a lot of excitement.
Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 08:06 AM · On: Running
wow.. somehow I knew evil bella wasnt that evil. I'm completely loving this story! Please update soon! :D
Reviewer: starshinedown (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 12:21 PM · On: Distraction
*does dance* I'm sooooooo excited about what's about to go down! Really. I'm bouncing in my seat. It's kinda crazy.
Reviewer: cdunbar (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 02:33 AM · On: Distraction
Exciting! I can't wait until Edward and Bella meet for the first time. I'm thinking an epic throwdown should happen! MWAHAHAHA
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 05:03 PM · On: Distraction
They need to go before Twilight to save Jasper...
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 12:11 PM · On: Brothers
Wow! This is really good. I had to start over to make sure I got the storyline right. Please update soon! I can't wait until Edward shows up!
Reviewer: Marigold (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 10:06 AM · On: Brothers
Yay, more Cullens! :)
Reviewer: cdunbar (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 07:45 AM · On: Brothers
So... does this mean Bella's coming around to the side of good? Is she actually starting to care what happens to Alice and Jasper??
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 07:41 AM · On: Brothers
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Cavriola (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 08:04 AM · On: Destined
This is very interesting, though I find evil!Bella somewhat difficult to picture. I think you're getting better at her, though. I'm eager to see how you continue this. How long Bella is in denial. How she meets Edward: that has to be very interesting indeed. Jasper is steaming hot, for a cold undead person. Bella/Felix is OK. The way I imagine it Bella is going to be persuaded by the Cullens to turn against the Volturi (not easily, of course), and will probably for some time pretend to be loyal to the Volturi while planning their demise. Which must be very difficult. Oh, I don't know. Whatever you make of it, this is a very original take on things.
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 05:17 AM · On: Destined
Wow, that is crazy. I really like this story and I hope you are able to update soon!
Reviewer: cdunbar (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 04:16 AM · On: Destined
Wait... so if Bella alerts the Volturi... she ends up taking them out?? For Alice and Jasper? Or for someone else?? Good second chapter! What's gonna happen next? I'm all aquiver to know. (Seriously... I'm bouncing in my chair right now.)
Author's Response: No, if she alerts them to Alice's vision, she will be the one taken out, but it'll all be explained soon! Thanks the the review.
Reviewer: Scarlett_Letters (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 04:52 AM · On: Torturer
Very much worth continuing. I dig Bad Bella - don't change her too soon, let her wreak some havoc first!
Reviewer: cdunbar (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 11:54 AM · On: Torturer
Wow. Evil Bella is delicious. I love her. Trust me, this is worth continuing.
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