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Reviewer: paigecullen (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 01:29 PM · On: Sacrifice
I like this story, and get better soon.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 12:52 PM · On: Sacrifice
Ekkkkk I love the story sniffle. I have no clue which way is up while reading it! can't wait to read more soon!!!
Reviewer: Chandler (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 12:25 PM · On: Sacrifice
So now I am officially hooked. Interesting concept. I love the shark scene. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us.
Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 12:09 PM · On: Sacrifice
so sad... how will Bella explain everything to the brothers??!
please update soon, this is one of my favorite stories.
Reviewer: vampirebyheart (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 11:38 AM · On: Sacrifice
will she die
will they try to kill her
will she go back to the cullens
will the cullens go to her
what wil happens next
update a lot and fast
you know you love me^-^
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 11:30 AM · On: Sacrifice
Short and sweet:
1. Yay: Bella and Edward had sex!!
2. :( She broke his heart
3. Update soon!
4. If you hadn't noticed, I enjoyed this chapter. ;)
Reviewer: Pastiche Pen (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 11:03 AM · On: Sacrifice
Good chappie. Hot and saaaaaaddd.
Reviewer: rara2007 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 10:59 AM · On: Sacrifice
Oh my goodness...I really really liked this chapter!! You did a great job portraying their emotions in words, not many can do that effectively. So now I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter...still waiting...and still waiting. LOL
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 12:58 AM · On: Distraction
I am enjpying this stroy. Good job with evil Bella. I could never have pictured it. The idea of the distractions is good and I'm glad the Cullen's friends are willing to take risks for them. I'm going to read some more.
Reviewer: rzokian (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2008 04:31 PM · On: And the walls came tumbling down...
hahaha about the bombs. too funny. i don't think it made any difference.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2008 03:18 PM · On: Shark
i loved this chapter. more emmett was definitely a good idea. it cut some of the tension and bella is finally feeling a little better. this story is amazing.
keep writing,
xoxo
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 02:49 PM · On: Shark
While filler, it was still fun. Hope you're feeling all better!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 04:42 AM · On: Shark
OMG, you've got to update soon! This story is very good and I look forward to future chapters. :)
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 04:22 AM · On: Shark
Well, sharks are an interesting feast, but right up Emmett's alley, he loves those predetors. Hopefully though, they will help Bella get away or stop the Volturi.
Reviewer: Marigold (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 03:20 AM · On: Shark
What a great chapter! I really liked the idea of her and Emmett shark-fishing, and your descriptions made it very vivid. And you don't need to apologize for the long wait. Life does get in the way, and you needed to get well first anyway. Glad you're feeling better, and just update when you can. :)
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2008 11:20 PM · On: Torturer
Evil Bella, you say? Well, that's definitely gotten me intrigued! Can't wait to read more. It really is a brilliant concept. And beautiful writing to match.
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2008 11:44 AM · On: Search and Destroy
Bummer... I'm all caught up:( I'm really enjoying this story. Keep it up!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2008 10:13 AM · On: Memories
Edward's a little beasty - so hot. Holler if you ever expand on that CxB action:-)
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2008 09:50 AM · On: Flight
oh my! Are we going to have some BxC time??? Even if it was in the past?? BxC is like my latest obsession. I must keep reading... drat, the kid's nap is almost over... must read faster.
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2008 09:14 AM · On: And the walls came tumbling down...
I started reading your story as I was trying to pass the time before the midnight movie. And I LOVE it. Anyhoo... I'm still in the middle. Fun times with Emmett and his bombs. I loved your A/N... lol. Good news - Gitmo Bay won't exist in a few months! Then you can search all you want;-)
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2008 03:06 PM · On: Search and Destroy
Oh my God! What a turn of events...how exciting! Major drama and possible gore ahead, egh? w00t!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2008 07:30 AM · On: Search and Destroy
Wow, Felix really does love Bella, weird.
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2008 04:20 AM · On: Search and Destroy
I liked hearing Felix's view of things. I have a feeling there is going to be ALOT of action now! Thanks for updating.
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2008 02:49 AM · On: Search and Destroy
Oh interesting. Awaiting the next chapter.
Reviewer: Kim620 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 02:46 PM · On: Search and Destroy
Aro is one tricky listed bastard. LOL. Good chapter........
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