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Reviewer: Embrace (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 10:43 PM · On: Brothers
Oooh Bella is very good. But I guess 300 years as a Volturi Guard will certainly keep you on your feet.
As always, love the story. I can't wait to see Alice's reaction and the rest of the family.
Reviewer: Embrace (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 10:24 PM · On: Destined
Wow. Felix is....sweet. o.O Who would have thought. Very uncharacteristic but also a nice little touch as well. Gives some insight into Red-Eyed Vampires. I don't believe that they have animalistic intent, they just behave that way. Beneath the wild front if an individual person, lost, but completely receptible to the outside world and it's circumstances that change eat person.
Very nice.
As for Alice and Bella, I love this little Cat and Mouse game they are playing and the burdens she and Jasper are laying upon Bella. I can't wait to see how things turn for her.
Reviewer: Embrace (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 09:57 PM · On: Torturer
-Blink- Bella and Felix. Felix and Bella. I haven't seen that before but I can not deny that it also has it's own little...appeal.
Instersting start to the story, very original. I've never seen anything like it. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Very Nice.
Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 06:42 AM · On: And the walls came tumbling down...
Perfect song for Emmett to sing. I love that you used his POV no one ever does. I love this chapter :-)
Reviewer: amaranth (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 03:23 AM · On: Distraction
OME!!! you're story's really cool!! :D
it's very exciting and dramatic as well. the characters are very true to stephenie's. i love it! really great writing!
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 02:05 AM · On: Sell Your Soul
FEEEEEELIX, YOU WIN! Maybe not at getting Bella, but at life! Err, vampiredom!
Reviewer: Chelsea Volturi (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 10:13 PM · On: And the walls came tumbling down...
Vampire war is rocking! I liked the bombs, that's new, i've never read something like that before and it's quite funny to see how the Volturis town is destroyed; and they can do nothing... I like the Evil Bella part so far, it's quite interesting how different she can be.
Reviewer: Quirkyalice (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 07:03 PM · On: Sell Your Soul
Ok, I'm crying. I'm ACTUALLY crying!!! How the hale did you do that? The only other time I've cried reading fanfic is when Alice died, and when Edward and Bella committed suicide! You write emotion so well, I hope you aren't all upset by it, I'm sure I'd be drinking by now, if I'd written that myself. Thank you for mentioning me and my strange music tastes aswell, it made me feel all giddy, and I'm still extremely flattered that you take the time each week to read my crazy brain child that is Center Stage.
I'm hoping now that Felix is OK. I think I'd probably cry more if he died, than if Bella died. He seems so considerate, despite what he is. His love for Bella overshadows his bitterness an the feeling of betrayal he would most likely feel right now. I can't believe he's actually going to help her escape. I hope they do escape. In my little world, it would be that they escape, and meet up with the Cullens, and live happily ever after...I know that probably won't happen, I have a feeling that Felix would have to go back to Volterra, or die.
OH! Idea...Denali. If you get what I mean. I bet you're doing that???
<-- Is (in the words of dear Miss Bella) unconditionally and irrevecobally in love with this story. I mean, it has all the best things. Not only the usual funny, love, angsty stuff, but it has Emmett with plastic explosives, sharks and Hollywood Undead. *sigh* my own personal heaven here, love xD
I'll stop now, because the tears have just stopped, and now I have a cheesy little grin on my face, and if I keep writing, I'll cry again xD
Yes, and I'll still sort out that present I promised you dear, and I noticed the bits related to Sell Your Soul in there too xD
Just to finish, as no review is ever complete without....
a fangirl *SQUEEEE!*
Reviewer: PreferBrunettes (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 04:49 PM · On: Sell Your Soul
Oh Bella - it's like her heart has been torn from her body and she would rather die that to live without. You did a really good job describing her despair. Your Felix is the second Felix I've read in fandom that I actually like. He must really love her to want to save her at the risk of his own life. I can't imagine all the visions Alice has been having after Bella's death sentence and then Felix' plan.
I was surprised that Edward didn't fight more to save Bella and didn't Jasper realize that Bella was just pushing Edward away and that she truly loves him? I would have expected Jasper to convince Edward of that - but I assume you have your reasons.
Things are really getting exciting - I doubt Jane is going to let them get away without a fight.
Reviewer: PreferBrunettes (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 04:42 PM · On: Sacrifice
This chapter was so bittersweet. This is the life Bella should have been born into and not the one she had in Volterra. To have a taste of everlasting love and then to have to sacrifice yourself to save the one you love...gah!..so heartwrenching. I didn't expect the story to take a turn like this - I thought they would fight but not that Bella would go back.
I love the story you're spinning - can't wait for more!
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2008 04:27 PM · On: Sell Your Soul
Ahh it's 430 in the morning and I have been reading this for the past 2 hours and I want more....lol
I absolutely LOVE this story. Great job!
Reviewer: chris7100 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 12:10 PM · On: Sell Your Soul
Wow - great story! Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 10:59 AM · On: Sacrifice
I hope they find and save the Cullens
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 10:58 AM · On: Sell Your Soul
wow. that was intense. i like your felix. he's not the bad guy in this story. i hope he can help bella through this. take her back to the cullens.
keep writing,
xoxo
happy holidays!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 10:44 AM · On: Sell Your Soul
Aww, Edward is so emo. ;) And kudos to Felix for being a good guy. I'm anxious to see how Bella gets out of this (b/c let's be honest: she has to get away "alive"... otherwise, you'd get killed by fangirls ;))
As always, I enjoyed the chapter and look forward to reading more!
Reviewer: Chandler (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 09:24 AM · On: Sell Your Soul
A good Felix??!! Love it. Edward needs to grow his Rambo balls back quickly. Can't wait to see what is next. Hopefully, we'll get one more before Christmas.
Reviewer: SpyketheKlown (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 07:29 AM · On: Sell Your Soul
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more! I think I'm starting to get a soft spot for Felix :)
Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 06:14 AM · On: Sell Your Soul
awww... ur turning me into a team felix!!!! LOL.. does she really have to die?!
Author's Response: I have to admit, that's the first time I've heard that one! Team Felix all the way!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 12:14 PM · On: Sacrifice
She won't be able to live without Edward!
Reviewer: cdunbar (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 10:02 AM · On: Sacrifice
Wow. I can see why this would be your favorite chapter.
It was... perfect. I don't use that word very often, but in this case it fits.
Absolutely perfect. I love this story and I'm gonna pimp it out wherever I can.
~Christine
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 05:13 AM · On: Sacrifice
Heartbreakingly beautiful. That's what I think.
Loved it!
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 09:30 PM · On: Sacrifice
Wow. What a mess for her, and poor Edward. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Vamplove (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 08:11 PM · On: Sacrifice
Truly Amazing
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 05:19 PM · On: Sacrifice
wow. this chapter was... depressing. poor edward. *sigh*
please keep writing,
xoxo
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 02:25 PM · On: Sacrifice
Wow! That was one hell of a chapter! Angst and everything. Fitting how Edward tore off a piece of his chest. Great job!
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