OMG!  We are left hanging with that???!!  You are cruel, LOL.

thank you for reposting. things are making sense now. and now i know what jasper and edward were doing at the end of the last chapter. thank god theyre ok.

Oh no! I could tell that the story was coming to an end, but I do love every minute of it!

 

I love Bella's power, perhaps not the best war scene, but I couldn't have done better. So there you go.

 

I love that you brought Marcus into this. His betrayal was the absolute icing on the cake. Gah. I always felt that he was unjustly wronged. I'm so glad you played on that.

 

AND FELIX IS ALIVE! YAY! I hope he finds love with another. Maybe a Denali girl. Kate seems feisty enough for him. Yes?

 

Oooh can't wait for your next chapter! There is a naked Felix picture in it for you. :D

That was excellent. I can't wait for the next chapter.  Sneaky little Alice.  I knew she would never be caught and had to be part of a vision.

Indeed, but don't forget the best part. IMAGINARY Felix plushie.

 

Of course...a Felix plushie wouldn't be much of a plushie at all. Hulking and rather huge.

post post post!!!  Wow that was a chapter that had me bouncing in my seat!  I loved this chapter but I am more excited for the next.   Is there a chapter missing?  I swore I read another chapter and even my updates inmy account say I am missing a chapter.  Do I already know what the next chapter is about did I already read it?

Author's Response:

Yes, I did try and post a chapter, and I suppose that is what you read, but I'm never knew it ever got posted.  Hmmm...people might be confused.  Anyway, I will be changing the end of the one that had been previously up, so you may want to read it again, whenever I finish it.  Sorry about that!

I always find Alice's power so interesting.  It's got to be so difficult to live with, seeing the choices and different outcomes and knowing that one little thing can change everything.  It's got to be frustrating too, to see how something SHOULD go and it doesn't just because someone is too stubborn or whatever. 

At any rate, thanks for the update!

First of all, I had to scroll down before I even read this chapter because I am listening to Sell Your Soul as I write this and while I'm not really a big Hollywood Undead Fan, some of their songs, like every artist I suppose, are just bleh. However, this one really speaks to me. It's so perfect to where your Bella is now. It really sets the mood for some ass kicking. I kept imagining her freaking out and killing a lot of people.

When I do finally start my story, I'm going to use this song as inspiration for my fighting. It really does get the blood pumping.

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I am blubbering like a baby right now. Haha. I was so scared for Felix when he spoke out of turn. @_@ He really is growing on me, and he's smarter than you'd think.

 

I really do wish him survival in this story, but sometimes sacrifices are needed, while I hope he's not one of them, you do what you have to.

 

I loved this chapter and how you incorperated the lyrics in.

 

This is the first chapter where I simply can't push the next button, so I hope you update soon!

Author's Response:

First of all, my apologies.  I haven't been recieving emails alerting me to reviews.  That being the case, I'll only respond to this one, but thank you so much for taking time to review so many times! 

I'm with you there about Hollywood Undead, but they have a lot of really emotional lyrics, and that I love when I'm writing.  If you know any other good artists, you should visit me on the forums under Evil Bella and let me know some.  I love finding new music.  The only things I'm not really into is spanish music (my husband being latin.)  Everything else is all shades of awesome.

I'm glad so many people like my Felix.  Ever since we met him in New MOon, when he winked at Bella, I thought he totally wants her.  So, when I got this idea, I never even had to think who to pair her with.  It was so obvious.  But, unlike my other fic, where I also honed in on Felix's want for Bella, I thought Felix could have actual feelings for her.  What a concept.  I have to admit, I feel bad for the guy myself, but he's become my Jacob for this story, and I don't have it in me to have it end too badly for him (he will see Emmett again, see chapter 10.)

As for updating.  I actually tried posting Early Christmas Eve, but it was never approved.  I started thinking it all over, and decided to put another chapter first, because the one I wrote is the culmination of everything, and frankly, I'm not quite ready for it, yet.  So...I'm working on it.  It shouldn't take more than a week, but you never know.

Thanks again!  I'm interested to read your writing.

Oh wow, Great White Sharks. That sounds like so much fun.

 

That was an incredibly awesome idea, while slightly terrifying for me as that is my greatest fear, but seriously awesome. I'm impressed.

Oh well, you can't honestly expect Jane to feel any such thing as Compassion.

Bella made her stronger than she is without her. That was the only thing that atrracted her. Now that she has the chance to get rid of competition, she'll of course take it. She has no remorse for life of any variety.

 

However, I am surprised that Felix does. I think I quite like that.

AHahahahaha. I laughed for a good long moment when Edward wanted to grab her and 'pound into her' and then a good moment more when Jasper picked up on that.

Silly Hormonal Vampires.

It'll be interesting to see the conversation that Carlisle and Bella have. I'm glad I was right in picking up on a past relationship with Carlisle. This is the second story that I've read that took a similiar root.

Very captivating.

Ahahaha. Okay. You get props. I loved it.

 

He was enough brawn and funny to sate me. He always does love his fights.

 

Oh my, can't wait to see what the next chapter brings for Dear Bella.

This chapter was a little slow but a very good filler.

 

It picked up really nicely at the end, though It makes me wonder where the rest of the story will lead since this is all very anti-climatic. It's almost the end of a book, but here it is the beginning. (Or fanfiction rather.)

 

I'm excited to see how it all plays out and how Bella will decide, since she would be the key factor in their suvival.