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Reviews For Becoming Bella
Reviewer: Motherthing (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 09:29 AM · On: A Picture's Worth a Thousand Words

What happened?  I do hope it isn't anything serious.  Will you be able to update anytime soon?  This has been such an enjoyable story and I really miss it.

Motherthing

Reviewer: ksw3 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Third Time's A Charm

Sounds like James too me.  He is out for Bella!

Reviewer: ksw3 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 12:48 PM · On: Breathe

cute story!  Not very far into it yet but I like it.  Went thru the same thing with my ex years ago.  A lot of her feelings I can totally relate too!  Takes a long time to trust again or try to trust someone.  She will get there. LOL.  Thank you for your story and I will keep reading.

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 02:24 PM · On: A Picture's Worth a Thousand Words

great story can not wait to read more

Reviewer: devil4eva_666 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 09:39 PM · On: According To Him

AWESOMENESS!!!!!

Reviewer: devil4eva_666 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 01:29 AM · On: Destiny Be Damned!

HOT HOT HOTTITY HOT HOT!

MMMM... i really like how you have switched the piano thing.. so refreshing not to have edward the best player.

:) also by the way...

James is a douche. :) had to be said.

Keep up the Great Writing

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 04:12 PM · On: A Picture's Worth a Thousand Words

Very good, I think Jake is in on it.

Reviewer: madzee (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 04:12 PM · On: A Picture's Worth a Thousand Words

Thank you for this beautiful story...I was practically riveted and read all chapters in one day!  Sorry I didn't review the previous chapters...I was just so eager to get to the next one...and the next!

There are so many suspects in this story...James...Jacob...Jessica...but why do I get this feeling that it could be someone else entirely, or all of the above?

Ehhh what can I say...but I can't wait until you post the next chapter.

Stay inspired and keep writing.  B&E deserve to be happy amidst all this angst.

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 12:08 PM · On: A Picture's Worth a Thousand Words

Wow! This is crazy!

Ok my vote is still that its Jake, but it sounds like he's in kahoot with someone. Hmmm....

Reviewer: 3dawns (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 06:18 PM · On: A Picture's Worth a Thousand Words

So, is it James or Jake or Jessica?  Someone that starts with a "J" huh?

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 05:47 PM · On: A Picture's Worth a Thousand Words

Oh crapola at the photos. I can't believe I'm going to say this, but is there any chance if it wasn't James that did this, could it be Jake? He sure hung up from that phone call pretty quickly when Bella arrived at his office, and he did purposefully interrupt Bella & Edward twice... maybe HE wanted her to find those photos whilst looking for the report he asked for?

 

Reviewer: devil4eva_666 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Baby Steps

nice..very nice.

Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 04:18 PM · On: A Picture's Worth a Thousand Words

*sigh*  He can talk sweet to me anytime...day, evening, night, whenever.....  As far as Jessica goes, in the words of D. Trump, YOU'RE FIRED!!!!  LOL  I love it!!!  I'm a lot suspicious of Jake......

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 09:24 PM · On: Love, Hate and Everything In Between

:) *sigh*

 

*giggle* I wouldn't mind reading about Edward & Bella running into a newly fired Jessica? *smirk*

Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Love, Hate and Everything In Between

One thing happen?....Hmmm, I guess it would be that Jessica and Victoria were implicated in the break-in at Bella's house.  That should stir the pot a bit.  It would be too easy to have just one of them steered towards the crime.  A real who-dunnit.

Yes, I enjoy all of your stories, and hope that you continue to write long, lustful and intelligent prose.

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Love, Hate and Everything In Between

Ok um, Swoon!! That was waaayy damn sexy smexing whoo-hoo!! I need to buy me a piano!

Just had an epiphany--Jake. He's doing this crap, isn't he???? He works with them all so he would know when they were home or not, about the security system, etc...does he think she would go running to him cuz she was scared? hmm.

The next chappie.... oh boy so many things.. oh! I think Edward should meet James or E should catch J in the act of harassing Bella & bust 'em up! Oh & then kiss Bella right in front of him too!

BTW have a question--is Bella on birth control?

Cuz if not...dun-dun-dunnnn!!! Baby Eddies!



Author's Response:

I'm still not going to tell you, but I did say before that I love your theories right?  I still do...

I have a thing for pianos..I have one at home, and play a little so that chapter was right up my ally.

Yes Bella is because we are having no baby Eddies...not in this story anyway. Bella's life is complicated enough without throwing that into the mix.

 

Thanks again for the wonderful review!

 

((hugs))

 

MB

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 12:28 PM · On: Butterflies and Hurricanes

Awesome! Yummy

Gah! Ok the obvious choice would be James was in her room. Especially since he's a cop & would know to cut the lines to the video feed on the security camera's. Or he coulda sent in one of his Minions like Vicki. [tho wouldn't their security have a back up? like battery operated or wireless? ours does]

Otherwise my guess woulda been Jessica, especially considering what was taken

Pleeeze tell me all the bad cops--especially james--is gonna get his "come uppence"??!?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I love your theories!!  I can't promise to tell you who it  is, but I can promise that James will get his comeuppance. No doubt there...I know you have left other reviews and I'll get to those shortly, but just to let you know, things are about to get really nasty.

 

Thanks love! 

xoxo

 

MB

Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Destiny Be Damned!

I just found this story yesterday... love it so far.  I love the intrigue.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the read and review!! 

 

:-)

 

MB

Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Love, Hate and Everything In Between

glad to see jessica get what she deserved, what do iwant to happen..there has to be a break through with getting james for all crap that he's doing so that 's what i want to see



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!!

 

I can promise you this, there will be some things coming out about James (among other things) very soon. Stayed tuned. It's about to get very messy.

 

xoxo 

 

MB

Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Love, Hate and Everything In Between

I'd like to read Jessica's POV to see if she really is sincere about her apology or if she's just tryin to save her ass.  And I think the gang needs a night out to blow off some steam and relieve some tension....

Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 08:06 AM · On: Love, Hate and Everything In Between

ooohhhhh I want one!  (Edward that is) lol

Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:48 AM · On: Love, Hate and Everything In Between

Just like the last time the police showed up, it seems to me like Bella needs to call the dispatch again and say she requests another patrol. Probably couldn't get it, but she could go on record saying she has a personal problem with these two. Then she needs to file a complaint that she feels she's being treated unfairly - before the tape went missing for instance - mentioning that one is her ex's old partner and the other had an affair with her ex-husband. Police may cover for their own but they also don't want a scandal and if she had paperwork saying she complained, might help.

Reviewer: Meikela (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:20 AM · On: Love, Hate and Everything In Between

I would love for Jessica to get fired due to a massive response from listeners of the morning show who are disgusted with her behavior at the charity event. :-) Well, that and some more Edward/Bella lovin', of course. :-)

Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:18 AM · On: Love, Hate and Everything In Between

That was some awesome loving there at the end. I knew that those 2 half wits were going to be the cops that were going to show up at her house. I don't think that James is the one that broke in though. Something tells me that it was Jacob.

Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Butterflies and Hurricanes

Hmmm, I think it was James, through one of his cronies.  I wouldn't think a man would leave the room that 'organized'.  He'd probably spunk on the bed!  But then, Victoria isn't that refined either.  LOL

Have I told you I love this story??....Yea, I really do, and you too!



Author's Response:

Yes, you have and I love you for it!!

 

MWAH!!!

 

XOXO

 

C

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