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Reviewer: HRHLadyEsme (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 6: First Hunt
Wow...
I don't usually read retellings of this particular part of the book, because it can be done wrong soooo easily, but I really like this. They're both staying pretty much in character and the story flows really well. Good Job!!!
Jennifer (aka Happy Twilighter)
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 6: First Hunt
Wow - rare to see the dominant side of Edward :) I'm loving your story - cant wait to read the rest.
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 2: Honeymoon
Looking forward to the rest!
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2008 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 3: Decision
Very well done. Thank you for leaving out the Bella covered from head to toe part that always bugged me. You did a very good job with the wedding night. It was every bit as sensual as Eclipse and much better done, I think than BD. Keep up the good writing.
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