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Reviewer: Shellgogo (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 1--Open to Interpretation

Ok Scilla my dear, you have sucked me in and popped my cherry.  Looking forward to chapter 2. . .  

Shellgoesgaga

Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 10--This Is Crazy Right?

This is so real.  Fear of being hurt.  Women of a certain age have more wisdom and flings are unfulfilling.  He, on the other hand is attracted to her because of who she is.  THey both are in a complicated place.  Hey, look at Demi Moore an Ashton Kutcher.  Me, I'd go for it.  and the consequences be damned.

Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 9--I'll Be Your Lover Too

What can I say?.  You nailed the Rob I have felt.  He may play a little.  But having a warm, real relationship is what he will always want.  He's sensitive and caring. When I heard him sing "Let me sign" I had no idea who was singing that particular song.  THat's when I figured him out. WaTching him in interviews brings out his real personality. As I stated above.  You nailed his personna.  Writing him as Rob not Edward has made this story come alive.  THank you.

Linda

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 9--I'll Be Your Lover Too

OK...so I am sitting here and I can feel the heat from the fire...I can smell the MJ...I played Never Think on my itunes and I just was GAH....what a great dream...I will be reading this again my darling...I will...

When Rob sings, I feel the same way Marisa does, he has such a soulful voice...and it comes straight from somewhere that cannot be explained...call it God...whatevs...it is so special...he is like a candle in the wind...I want to protect it and steal it and own it...like you bb!

Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 5--Villa Lucia

Fantastic build-up.  Being older waiting adds to the tension.  Loving it. 

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 8--Orgasm Muse

OK...scilla...you tease...that was so sad...no wonder she was buttoned up so tight...don't you think you have to keep buttoned up when there is all "THAT" in there? All that crap waiting to slide out??? I sometimes feel like our passion is so connected to oour pain that as we acquire Cougar status it gets mixed up....

love how you wrote this chapter...

Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 4--Lady in Red

You've kept my interest.  Dialogue, great. Situations plausible.  Details make the story.  You're doing it well.  Yup.  Liking it. 

Reviewer: MyRobbie (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 11--Heartache or Regret?

The Stoli!!! That was Awesome!!! You know, I for one am totes ok with the pace. No worries!

Squeeee! This is getting exciting!

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 7--Hop on, James Dean

OK....why was it so hard for that number to come out of her mouth? DAMN...I am going to be saying 49 in April...will that be hard scilla? SHIT...I know I will never be with someone Robs age, let alone Rob...I don't even really go there...that's why these "dreams" you put on paper mean so much...thank you darling...

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 6--I Prefer To Drive Manual

Okay...now you've gone and done it scilla...your brought out the big guns....yep the finger porn...I mean...I am DIED...I mean I cannot look at his hands..I cannot watch the parts of Twilight where he plays the piano, I cannot look at New Moon posters where he is gripping Bellas back like a fucking monster with those long fingers I cannot watche the extra DVD materials where he is playing the bellas lullaby that he wrote...EVEN imaging sitting on a piano bench next to him, being able to play a piano and trying to "play with him" (thatswhatshesaid) would cause me to have cardiac arrest...

I Lurved this chapter...it will live in FF infamy for me...please please can they play together again?????? Please???? Don't make me beg Mistress!

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 5--Villa Lucia

OK...I am all hot and bothered darling...I am going to Italy in September with hubby and friends and you have me all romanticizing and shit...there is something that happens to you when you are at a beautiful place like this and you described it beautifully...the wind, the food, the place, the sun...just the fantasy of adding Rob to all of that is so fun...I love it....

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 4--Lady in Red

As I read this chapter scilla, I kept thinking...would I feel that hot? I feel so old sometimes that I wonder if I would even have the courage to buy a hot dress like that and go and bring the hotness and I thought hells yes....that's what ROB did to me...

He reminded me how fun it was to do that...not because I had to compare myself to those 20 year olds, but becuase I had something else...me...my cougar hotness...48 years of soldering hotness that I wasn't even breaking out of the box...I loved her tonight...she smoked the room up and Jack wanted it so bad and he knew who she wanted...

Love the red hotness of your story, the passion of life eeks through Rob to us and through your story...luv you

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 3--Suspenders and Garter Belts

Oohhhhh...I lvoe a chick fight over ROB...Scilla lets just agree that if we ever get close to HHH we will share???? That's just how Cougars roll...we stick together to get our objective accomplished.

I love how you know your character so well that he comes alive for me. I can see him running his fingers thorugh his hair, I see what he is wearing, and I know exactly how he is turing and walking and looking away...you have done your research and know your subject...very hot and compelling. Really like it!

Reviewer: Twiliterati (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

LMAO..Do I smell paps coming round the corner thanks to the nosy neighbours???

As always, a great chapter... had me laughing so much I nearly pee'd myself. I love that you make Rob seem so imperfect and Marissa obviously sees it.It makes it REAL. I LOVE THAT!!!!!

thanks Scilla!!!! 



Author's Response:

Paps? What paps? Maybe yes, maybe not. I'm soo glad you had fun with it. Thanks for reviewing and please keep it up, that's what she said LOL.

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 2--Old Enough To Be His Teenage Mother

Honey you don't even need to promise lemons to keep me around...lemon drops galore in your writing....hello..ROB, ROB, ROB....

My Cougar heart LOLed all the way through the GOOGLE episode...I remember the first day I realized i had been sucked into the ROBUNIVERSE and started down the rabitthole...OMG...when I realized that he had been born ONE WEEK before I took my ONE YEAR OLD SON TO DISNEYLAND FOR HIS ONE YEAR OLD BIRTHDAY PARTY BECAUSE HIS BDAY IS 21 MAY 1985!!!!!...I thought OMG my son is younger than ROB...I am going to burn in hell...what am I doing????

Then, I realized he is  a Taurus, my son is a Taurus, I am a Taurus...all my peeps are Taurus, I luv me some Taurus...but damn (look at my review!) can we talk some crap???? and talk your ear off???)

I love how you wrote that ROB has something...it is a magical charisma that you are capturing...and you got it too bb...you got it to bb...you are capturing it here for all of us cougars....

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 1--Open to Interpretation

Scilla,

OKAY...being a Cougaar, this Chapter hit me right in  the heart...OMG. I so could see myself in this story. It was so compelling to me...most fan fiction is so far from the "Cougars Den" for me...thank you thank you thank you...

I also have a clear, clear feeling as I read, that someone who KNOWS ROB is writing this...his little ways, his little freckles...someone who has LOOKED at him, watched him and knows his ways...which makes it really HAWT...and knowing the little story about the "BIG WIFF" makes it UBER HAWT...

I am addicted and I am your groupie....

Reviewer: jjdtuck04 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

Such fun!!!!!

Love their weekend together!!!



Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Binky1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

Great Job Scilla!!  You kept refering to the hot tub scene on RAOR and it sure didn't disappoint!!  Can't wait for the next chapter in the saga.....



Author's Response:

Thanks Binky! What's your name on RAoR? Working on ch. 18 now.

Reviewer: tawelephant (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

HEHEHEHE  Cindy and Joe were watching.  That was sooooo hot.  Now I have to go to work with wet panties.  Not good, but so worth the read!!!



Author's Response:

LOL, it's always good to keep an extra pair of panties handy. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: DeeDreamer (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

Holy hotness! Wishin' I had a hot tub right about now...GAH! Another great chapter, bb! See you on RAoR. MWAH!! :)



Author's Response:

Hey DeeDreamer! So glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing. Big smooch.

Reviewer: buff802y (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

Great job with the chapter. Love how they are with each other and cannot wait to see the next chapter posted:)



Author's Response:

Thanks buff! I'm glad you liked it. Working on next chappy.

Reviewer: shelly551 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

Oh what a way to wake up and read this.Again this story is one hot Fu..ing piece of work.



Author's Response:

Shelly thanks so much! I'm glad it was a good morning for you LOL. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Susie Q (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 16--Magic Man

Hi Scilla,

Magic Man....indeed and ohhh...Blow ME!! I like it...hahahahah!!

So Rob is noticing things that she is doing...that's good...I don't know why but I fear she is going to fuck this up! I mean...RL is coming soon!

Your sexin by the pool...oh my....those LONG FINGERS and am I jealous!

Once again, scilla, you are one descriptive bitch and well...I LUV IT!!

...beesue

 

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Author's Response:

Hi Sue, thanks soooo much for reviewing! Yeah, RL is coming soon, wait and see what happens. Waiting for ch. 17 to be approved.

Reviewer: Susie Q (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 15--How To Have A Proper English Breakfast

Hi Scilla,

 

Been MIA on ROaR lately but saw today that you had moved here with your story - so added you!!

Well, Well, I've never eaten a "proper" English Breakfast but OMG - put me on the menu cus I am IN - Rob that is - Yum Yum!  Great sexin  - you are really good at this!! Must say though, a little worried about Marisa - not relaxing or sleeping, controlling and a ...Little bossy?? Hope Rob doesn't notice cus I like these two together!

Reading next Chapter

Beesue



Author's Response:

Hey Sue, yay, you found me! Yeah,Marisa has issues, but hopefully Rob can help. Please keep reading and reviewing. Thanks!

Reviewer: MyRobbie (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 6--I Prefer To Drive Manual

Hey there! It's me, MyRobbie! So sweet this build-up. Can't wait for more! I'm sneaking this in during son's naptime, so I probably won't be able to review every chap. It takes effin forever for me to type on itouch! Great stuff! Thanks!

Author's Response:

There you are MyRobbie! Thanks so much for reviewing. Review when you can. Muaaa.

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