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Reviewer: sarfraz (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

I can't get enough of this story!!  Will be having a cold shower while I wait for the next update!  Thanks.........



Author's Response:

Yay, thank you! Working on chappy 18 right now.

Reviewer: HollyJo123 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

I am in lurve with this story!! Amazing!



Author's Response:

Yay, thank you! Please keep reviewing.

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

OK...You can't trust neighbors....EVER especially in Cali...sorry...been to Pasadena...they watch everyhting..and everybody is a star out there, so they are always on the lookout...sorry cynical Cougar alert...

Hawt pool sex can only be avoided for so long..come on....Scilla...I am spent...

mad luv to you...I am sucked into your universe completely...hope you're happy...TC1



Author's Response:

TwilightCougar1, I totally love you for reviewing every single chapter. Seriously, it makes me want to cry. You don't know how satisfying that is for an author. Huge thanks to you. Working on chapter 18 now, not finished yet. I can't wait to hear what you think about it. Looking forward to continuing the good times on RAoR. Big smooch.

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 16--Magic Man

I cannot believe that...I love the touch of the neighbors....tee hee...I think it was hilarious ...I would SO not have gone over there, so the F what????? JEALOUS much???? Oh yeah, just wanted you to know we heard you...couldn't you like start your BBQ grill or something? Or whatevs????

Anywho....I love the way that Marisa's expereince and openness is so exciting to Rob..it is one of the beautiful things about our lives being richer than a younger woman....we forget what we bring to the relationship because of our obsession with age and looks...it touched me how thy mesh together ang teach other....

Sweet spot was sweet....loved it!

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 15--How To Have A Proper English Breakfast

Scilla...I have spent an entire day in your world....I am grateful to have spent it with your people...they are so sweet...that was so sweet...to find something that amaizng after a lifetime...wow...Rob...sweet....

Reviewer: margdj (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

Gaaaahh hot tub sex, love it! Nosy neighours though - it's OK for Rob, he doesn't have to face them day to day. I love how you bring the characters and settings to life!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing and please keep it up (that's what she said LOL).

Reviewer: cbrand1996 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

Thanks for the chapter! I wonder if Cindy and Joe realize who he is? Yikes! I knew they were going to be trouble :). I liked the first part when she was dreaming of Alessandro and then Rob was there. I liked that she reacted so positively understanding that she was happy it was Rob. And I thought Rob was great to very intuitive and sweet. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks for being so specific about what you liked and thanks for reviewing consistently!

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 14--F*cking Finally

Okay...I quite smoking like 8 years ago and I could use one right the fuck now....it was so worth the weight....I love Marisa...Rob is so sweet and adorable...I love you talking about the elephant int he room..the "I don't come during intercourse myth"...love. love. love it!!! I think we would have world peace if more pewople tlaked about this in bed!!! I am not sure if I could talk to ROB "F*cking Pattinson about it though...she has some Cajones!!!!! SRSLY!!!!

Favorite lines: He stopped kissing me and said, “Fucking finally.” I cocked an eyebrow, “Finally fucking.” Yeah baby!!!!!!!shaaaaaaa....wing......

xoxoxoxoxoxoox

Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 16--Magic Man

FAN-FUCKING-TASTIC.

Reviewer: Shellgogo (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 4--Lady in Red

Love the red dress.  Thanks for making Jack, what I always pictured him to be!!  On to Italy, oh how I love Tuscany. . .

Reviewer: mizz_music (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

Hot DAMN!! That was fucktastic!

Can't wait for more! :D



Author's Response:

Yay, I'm so glad you liked it! Working on chappy 18. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Shellgogo (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 3--Suspenders and Garter Belts

Just a little taste, I see you tease!!  LOL!

Reviewer: Shellgogo (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 2--Old Enough To Be His Teenage Mother

Sorry if you get 2 reviews for this-my last one disappeared.  OK, loving Marissa, but I would probably be more like Laura.  Tee Hee!  Gah-teenage mother, makes me sad.  Why God, why?? 

Great job Scilla!!

Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 14--F*cking Finally

DAAAYAM.  THE WHOLE STRAWBERRY THING. All of it.  I am literally panting.  I will reread this again.  By the way I have the NEW MOOn score on while reading this.  Not the songs--the actual score.  Beautiful and haunting, cresendoing at all the right moments.  I am having my merlot and smoking a cigarette.  Perfectly  done Scilla.  I have been fortunate to find this and read right thru.  Great job.

Linda



Author's Response:

yay LadyMerlot, I'm so glad you're so into it. Please keep reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 13--Rob the Ripper

Does cold shower mean anything to you?  You've got us all with our tongues hangin out.I do't know about the others but I/m a bit older and I am having trouble breathing.  It's finally great having a story about Rob for real.  You've made our fantasies come alive. Loved the rough rob.  Powerful and damned erotic. Now on to the next chapter.

Linda



Author's Response:

Hi Ladymerlot, thank you sooo much for reviewing every chapter. It means so much. Can't wait to find out what you think of Ch. 14. Please keep reading and reviewing. Take care, Scilla

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 13--Rob the Ripper

Okay...you are evil...I have decided....I mean using a poor dog???? I mean KNOWING how much ROB LOVES his freaking dogs????? I worry for your soul scilla...tee hee

 

I loved it...I find that the waiting is the hardest part....I am reading this entire thing in one day and it is because I CAN...but after CH.17 I will have to wait just like the rest of the people who have been with you since the beginning...so I have to be willing to delay gratification...like Marissa or how am I ever gonna score with ROB???? I am in this with Rob for the long haul...oh, yes, he will be mine....yes..he will be mine...

xoxoxoxoxoxoxox



Author's Response:

Hey TwilightCougar1! Sooooo happy you're reading and even happier that you're reviewing as you go along. Love it. I'm dying to know what you think of the next few chapters. Lots of lemony goodness. Thanks again and see you on RAoR.

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 12--The Grand Gesture

OKAY...I have officially burnt two perfectly good hamburgers because  of this chapter...you owe me scilla...dear God...it is so hard to imagine him this way...I am having so many feeligns as I read this...man I am going to need Cougar therapy....it is amazing how much my body image takes hits as I think of my age and how it seems like he must be "measuring" Marisa against some age stick that is in her head...interesting...rambling...probably hunger from burnt dinner...and UST!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: gbasjw (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

I really love this story but I wish their dialog was a little less formal.  I mean honestly - Oh Marisa, Oh Rob, Yes Marisa, Yes Rob - people just don't normally address each other using each other's first names in every sentence (at least not the people I know...lol).  I think the conversation would better convey their comfort level with each other if they were a little more laid back in how they address each other.  Just my personal preference because that kind of thing bugs me.  I like how you've tried to expand Marisa's concerns about where this is going - 'cuz in real life that's what the age difference would bring out.  It's all well & good to live for the moment but we would all have those nagging doubts of ....what the hell am I doing???  Can't wait to see where you are going to take this next after he leaves!  



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the feedback about using their names so often. Part of the reason I did that is that I wanted to convey that they were excited to be together and wanted to say each other's names outloud. But I went back and took a look and realized that there were quite a few unnecessary "Rob" and "Marisa"s so I've re-edited and deleted some of them. I really appreciate constructive criticism, sometimes I may not agree because I have a vision of my story and where it's going. But in this case, I saw your point, so thank you. There are still quite a few "Rob" and "Marisa"s in there for effect, but A LOT were deleted. Working on chappy 18 now. Please keep reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lovepattinson (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

hah so funny! :)



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Please keep reviewing!

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 11--Heartache or Regret?

OK...so I like London Rob...I like up against the wall Rob...and of course I love the DVD fest...the SPUNK RANSOM reference...all good girlfriend...all good...

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 10--This Is Crazy Right?

Scilla....I have to tell you...that woman had to have been dead....it was unbelievable...I couldn't go with her there...no way...I cannot believe her body would have let her mind do that...NO WAY...the COUGAR in me is so mad at her right now....I have to go take a cold shower and kick her ass....OK????

Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 12--The Grand Gesture

ALRIGHT. ENOUGH.  You are a big tease.  I need another drink.  Whew.

Reviewer: kareedelane (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

Sexy to the nth degree...love it...you really write smut well.  Cute without being cheesy!  Keep em' comimg!  Pun definately intended!



Author's Response:

Oh, they'll keep coming, don't you worry, but there will be plenty of plot twists and turns as well. Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 11--Heartache or Regret?

WOw. WOw.  I need a drink.  This is just great stuff.

Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

Love the new update



Author's Response:

I can always count on you to review. Thanks so much!

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