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Reviewer: TerriG (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

I love all of this story.  I cannot wait for your updates

Reviewer: Drizl (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

OMFG Scilla, I f*cking lurved the marker scene. Awesome sauce love. I'm still giggling. Drizl



Author's Response:

Thanks Drizl! I came up with that scene in the spur of the moment. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: isabellamariecullen (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

that was an amazing chapter!! but how could you end it there? you are killing me!!

i loved the shoulder throw! Marisa is so cocky, despite all her insecurities. i loved the send off she gave him!!

please update soon!! hope you feel better soon, take care :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, that's the thing with Marisa is she goes back and forth from being insecure to being confident. I think most of us are like that. Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Binky1 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Get better soon Scilla!!!  Loved that they made up - and make up sex is the best!!!  And I'm glad that she told him how upset she was - don't like stories that just gloss over the emotions.  Hope you are feeling better soon and can't wait for the next update!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the well wishes Binky. Marisa's pretty hot blooded, so she wasn't going to hold back on her anger. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Sexy!!! Couldn't help but wince though; it would be irony if she showed up at his place, and say, some tramp was there, or worse: Sienna!! Have a sinking feeling it's not over yet. The angst, that is.

Hope you feel better soon. Bronchitis sucks! I had pneumonia last year for 5 weeks! So take care of yourself. :)



Author's Response:

Wow, 5 weeks, that's awful. I'm feeling a bit better thanks to the antibiotics. This story will be long, so no, the angst is not over, but it won't resurface just yet. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: suziekew (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Now that was worth the wait! Feel better Cilla!



Author's Response:

So glad you thought so. Thanks!

Reviewer: shelly551 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

OMG I... there are no words for ths chapter

Just fu.....king good that's all I can say ,no words .

Shelly



Author's Response:

WOW, thank you!

Reviewer: katiebird (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Hey sweetie,

I hope that you feel better soon. Having bronchitis sucks. Thanks for writing thru the pain.
I have to say that I didn't even think that he might have lost his phone. But I'd like to think that I would have hid my anger better. Just as a form of self-defense. Probably not though, I tend to wear my heart on my sleeve. I just know that I would have eventually cried too. I cry when I am angry.
Kudos to Marisa, having a steady head with the marker. I don't know if I could have written anything legible, let alone upside down. I would have been too distracted by the pretty penis.
I hope that Rob gives her a present of some kind. Something pretty, like jewelry.

Take care of yourself, missy.

Author's Response:

Hey katiebird, thanks so much for your detailed review. Love those. Pretty jewelry...wait and see. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Knew he wasn't a player.  Stupid man. Losing his phone. What a git. Totally enjoying this story.  Hate the wait.  Feel better soon.  This is the worst time of year for flu, bronchitis. Love the "tatoo"  Original.  Till next time, keep him safe.  



Author's Response:

Thanks Ladymerlot. Yeah, Rob's a good guy, there's no way he was playing her. He can be quite the idiot sometimes, as he likes to tell us all the time. The tatoo idea just came to me so I included it. Thanks so much for your consistent reviews!

Reviewer: gbasjw (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Yeah - I'm one of the readers that you nearly lost when you decided to blundgeon us to death with Marissa's neurosis & past life dramas.  I lost all respect for her at that point and this chapter didn't do anything to change that.  I don't have a problem with her accepting him back so quickly as her initial reaction to the whole no call scenario was over the top (IMHO) anyway.  But she wrote her name & phone number on his jacket tag?  Like his mommy?  I suppose the body ink antics were supposed to redeem her and make her appear sultry but yeah didn't work for me.  Also, not crazy about the lost phone angle simply because it's so overdone in fanfic.   I am going to stick with the story for a few more chapters to see where you go with it as you keep promising bigger & better things.  Honestly, you need to make me like & believe in Marissa again.  I'm not sure that's going to happen.  I know I'm one of your few negative reviewers.  Sorry about that.  Guess that's because I'm close to Marissa's age & that's probably why her behavior & attitudes irritate me so much.  She & EC seem to share the same mood swings & propensity for self-flagillation.  I don't like it when Edward does it either :)



Author's Response:

Hi gbasjw, first of all, I'd like to thank you for taking the time to review in such detail. It shows that you are emotionally invested in the story, even though, clearly the emotions it's evoking in you are negative. That's okay. At least, it's making you feel something and that's better than being indifferent to a story. So here are my thoughts. I guess I take issue to you referring to Marisa's "neurosis and past life dramas." Neurosis implies that someone has an overreaction to life's events. Marisa went through two of the biggest losses a person can endure. She lost her husband violently and suddenly. And she lost the baby she had been trying for for so long. Both on the same day, instantly. The fact that she is still walking around, living her life and is not in a straight jacket somewhere in a padded cell is quite a testament to her lack of neurosis. When Rob seemingly disappeared, the feeling of profound loss was reignited for her. I would hope that is not difficult to empathize with. It touched the subconscious, primal, irrational part of her brain, the part that will never fully heal from her significant losses. I don't think there's anything over the top about it, to be honest, given the gravity of the losses. Plus, she's got fiery Latin blood coursing through her veins Rob's lucky she didn't put out a hit on him. Just kidding, to any Italian readers out there. I know full well that not all Italians have mafia connections. I should know, I'm part Italian. Anyway, as for writing her name on his jacket. ROb's the one who offered it to her. I don't know what to tell you about the marker tatoo. Either it turns you on or it doesn't. Again, that's okay. As for promising bigger and better things...I don't know if I've promised that, I've simply stated that this story will be long and will take lots of twists and turns. I hope you stick around for them. I really do. As for being close to Marisa's age and not being able to relate to her, again, different strokes, for different folks. I'm one year older than Marisa and I can totally relate to her. But hey, I'm biased, since I'm writing her right LOL. And no, Marisa is not based on me. My husband, Elvis, is very much alive and I have two wondeful kids and am one of the few who havent' suffered through a miscarriage. Again, I'm glad you're having such a strong reaction to the story. I would like to make one request of you though. If you could provide your disagreements regarding the way the story is going in the form of more constructive criticsim and feedback, rather than the emotionally reactive way that you have reviewed. I'm human after all, and it does affect me when I read things like "you bludgeoned us to death..., etc." I hope you see my point. Take care and I look forward to dialoguing with you in the future, Scilla

Reviewer: Sweetnobody (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Aw get well soon.

Phew ... This chapter was great.  Bloody mobile phones and their loss!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Please keep reviewing.

Reviewer: christiner (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Excellent!! I love this story & can't wait to read more. I wonder if Rob will get Marissa pregnant later on in their relationship, that would be so good for her.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your consistent reviews! Interesting concept...very interesting.

Reviewer: ilikereading (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

First of all...Take care of yourself, hun!! I need you healthy and strong ;)

Thanks for the way you have resolved the entire situation. I love it. And I hope the meeting at Rob´s house will be full of feelings and talkings to exchange thoughts. And lemons too, of course ;D

I´ll be  waiting. Take your antibiotics, hot milk and honey and drink a lot. Some orange juice can work, too. :D

Su.



Author's Response:

Hey Su, thanks for the advice. I took it and I'm feeling better already. The meeting at Rob's house will be full of all of the above. Please keep reviewing.

Reviewer: Cullen Fan (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

God I love that trailer......... *sigh*   ummm sorry got distracted ;-)  I'm really enjoying the story, even got a little mad at him there for a while!! lol  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Hey Cullen Fan, I'm glad you got mad at Rob. You were supposed to. Thanks for the kind words and I hope you keep reviewing.

Reviewer: Gina_juicy (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

I was so giddy when I got the update email bb!! Though I am disappointed in Marisa for giving in to him so easily... I feel like she could have resitsted more, & gave him a little more hell. But who the hell am I talking... I would have gotten on my knees the first sight of him coming back! I am an easy h00r! lol. Not really, but c'mon, its ROB... forgiven, not questions asked! Okay maybe a few, but forgiven nonthe less! I think I enjoyed the BJ more than the sexing cause it was so spontaneous & what I wouldnt give to have that man fuck my mouth! lol. Cant wait to see what goes down at Robs place... just curious... what part of LA are you gonna have him live in? West Hollywood? I beleive thats where he lived when he was living there for a bit...

Awesome awesome awesome bb! See you next chappy... <3s

G



Author's Response:

Hey Gina baby! Yeah, Marisa tried to give it to him but when he gave it to her (teehee) all bets were off. Who could resist right? In chapter 4, Lady In Red, Rob tells Marisa he lives in the Hollywood Hills. So, that's where she'll be heading in Ch. 23. Thanks for all the support!

Reviewer: pirate51 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Yeah, Rob's back with a legitimate excuse.  Love it!!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, he's a good guy. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Intaglio (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 21--Stage 5 Acceptance

Ok, I'm officially addicted. I just checked my email again to see if you had updated. When will we hear more? XX



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Ch. 22 is with my beta now. Should be up tomorrow or the next day. Can't wait to read your review.

Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

I am doing a reread. Waiting for the update.  No way Rob was going to forget her.  Their connection went far beyond great sex. What they have together, primal and profound. Love their attraction.  Age ha nothing to do with it.  Waiting for the update.  It will be clarification time.  They are both fearful. 

Reviewer: ministripe (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 15--How To Have A Proper English Breakfast

I've been enjoying your story over the last few days... I like the traveling aspect (London and Italy are two places I know them well, never the the 'Jack the Ripper' tour just seemed corny. I'm definately a 'Red' gal in Italy, vino rosso della casa. In the UK not bitter ales, cider was my solution too...:-)

Reviewer: addicted2twylyte (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 14--F*cking Finally

Yeah!  FINALLY!  It was worth the wait!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I hope you keep reading and reviewing. I'll have to check out your story.

Reviewer: addicted2twylyte (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 12--The Grand Gesture

You're the one being the tease!!!  LOL!

Reviewer: addicted2twylyte (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 10--This Is Crazy Right?

I get you are trying to build the suspense - but God! LOL!

Reviewer: addicted2twylyte (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 9--I'll Be Your Lover Too

Someone needs to take out Laura. LOl!

Reviewer: addicted2twylyte (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 8--Orgasm Muse

Nice character development with the story of her husband.

Reviewer: addicted2twylyte (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 7--Hop on, James Dean

I like that he knows her age and is still interested!

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