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Reviewer: Twiliterati (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 25--...You. So much, so much.

Finally!!!!!! Go Rob!!!! Congrats on the Big 'O' Marisa!!!!

Great Chapter as always Scilla

Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 14--F*cking Finally

Woot...they're going all the way! Aha...now I get the "peach" reference ;) A man on a mission...I bet he's a hard worker *snort* <3

Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 13--Rob the Ripper

*banging head on desk* they were soooooooooo close... *sigh* Well next chapter will be the one then...too bad It'll have to wait a while :/ Thanx for a very UST filled chappie... ;) <3

Reviewer: TerriG (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 25--...You. So much, so much.

great story - I follow you on raor - you write from the heart, obviously

Reviewer: arfalcon (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 25--...You. So much, so much.

Wonderful!!

Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 12--The Grand Gesture

Gonna keep it short...sleepy and drunky! ...love, that's all! <3

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 11--Heartache or Regret?

LOVED IT!!!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 10--This Is Crazy Right?

HOLY FACK!! I just read chapters 1-10 on my iphone and for some reason, it won't let me review. On my laptop now and here is my review of chapters 1-10. I FACKING LOVE YOUR STORY!! Being 41 myself, I love Marissa and how you portray her. AMAZING JOB ! I will review every chapter from now on!! Looking forward to more!! Oh and the Villa and all of the people staying there remind me of the movie "Stealing Beauty" with Liv Tyler! LOVE it!

Reviewer: rpfan1976 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

I think this is #1000 for you! Love this one too. R's house sounds as beautiful as he is. I respectfully request more armpit and/or feet action in future chapters. ;)



Author's Response:

Sound the bells, whistles and alarms, RPFAN1976, you're my 1000 review! Woohoo! Thank you so much and to all my faithful readers. Luv you guys. Muaaaa.

Reviewer: rpfan1976 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 25--...You. So much, so much.

Love it! I am so jealous of her. And possibly you, if you know what one of those O's feels like. :)

Reviewer: Notebookgirl72 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 25--...You. So much, so much.

Woot! Yay for Marisa! If only more men were like your version of Rob, Botox would be obsolete!

Another great chapter Scilla. I'm glad to hear that the story is not nearing its end quite yet.

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 25--...You. So much, so much.

WOOOOOOO!!! Is it wrong that I'm ALMOST as excited that Marisa finally got her big 'O' than I am about their declarations of love for one another? *LOL* Go Robbie!

Reviewer: Suantaji (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 25--...You. So much, so much.

Hello Scilla, 

after reading every available chapter of this story last night, I have to tell you I just LOVE it, laughing, thinking 'oh no, that's just to much, you can't do this!' and just enjoying it all very very much. Sigh! I like the emotional side very much. And if you could find it in you to write RPOV, i'd happily take any chapter you choose to rewrite. Just so you know! Thanks a lot for this story!

Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 25--...You. So much, so much.

Such a yummy chappie!! This is oh so good, even if I'm not really a Rob fan!! I like him here! Kellan is more my cup of tea, but Rob sugars things up really nicely.

I love the cougar aspect and look forward to the meeting of the family!! So keep things commin'...or is that cummin'? lol More Please!!

Ellen

Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 11--Heartache or Regret?

Naw...a message at the door!! He's gonna call her *happydance* ..uhm yeah, I get pretty emotionally invested...freck woman scorned, hope she isn't going to be trouble!! *snort* "Mrs. Rossison" he's a hoot...eh, no...?! "If you want the man in him to come out, let him pursue you, let him take the lead, don’t emasculate him." hmm...sounds plausible...and like something a man would say... "Yes, but nothing worth fighting for is easy." You're on a roll with these profound words of wisdom aren't you? ;) "Ok, so what does he smell like…?” now that is what I call a normal reaction, hehe... ah, the You Tubing... sweet memories... "If anything continued between us and it became public, the paparazzi would eat me alive, but I didn’t care as long as Rob got to me first" hehe, eat her alive *wink*...uhm...am I being extraordinarily pervy again or is this a normal reaction to this sentence? lol ..."God, I sound like such a tool don’t I." Yes Rob, you sound like a tool, a big hard tool...*snort* couldn't resist... giggle..."hold your spunk for ransom"...woot Marisa!! ;) ...OMR!! THE BEANIE!! Oh, I'm such a fool...fictionfictionfiction...no... THE STOLI!!! shit...fictionfictionfiction...god Scilla you're killing me here!! And if those are the RobnanaNutmuffin Jeans and the sexboots I'm done...Done I tell ya! (Yeah, I comment while I'm reading, that's why nothing makes sense ;) ) ...hmm...I would watch out for stalkerazzi if I were Marisa...*crosses fingers* ...Rob's driving LOL, you nailed it ;) no, poor guy I know nothing about his motor skillz *cough* ...yup Marisa reality is a bitch! Fortunately for you this is a fanfic ;) even if it's sometimes so good that I almost forget it *wink* <3

Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 10--This Is Crazy Right?

OMR, the L word (well one of them!)!!! No need for Marisa to explain why she loves him...preaching to the quire here ;) ...tho it's nice to read! Oh no not an angry drunk??? Phew, just a bad mood! Uhm, were they really talking about a light? ;) That felt very Freudian...and I guess it was! Uy uy uy some more...I feel like writing some Spanish...but if my English spelling is bad... *shudders* ..."Like a man possesed requiem..." is agood song...eh sorry, digressing! Oh how I would love to hear him whimper...She said what? No? Blasphemy! LOL! No I totally get it...but dayum...tho Rob got a bit too pissed for my liking...but then again he was totally pissed...hehe...;) Now this is getting sooo intriguing...vacay is over how will they meet again? <3

Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 9--I'll Be Your Lover Too

"It just made me zone out and stare at the wall" see that's why I'm never gonna try Mary J...I get that from just Vodka, lol “R-o-o-o-o-b, when are you going to let me suck on that thing?” ..::Headdesk::.. Laura is so funny...eh, not ;) ..."sufficiently wazzocked" god I love that expression!! She's awed by his singing and I'm like..."just you wait hun till you learn all about this wonderful man" ...like I actually knew him...shoot, I'm a nutter...! Singing along with him...god I love that song! Never think...! <3 "Tom snored" bahaha...supportive mate...or perhaps relaxing soothing voice + a doobie makes it hard to stay awake ;) *sigh* yup, don't even think dope is ruled out if Rob wuld ask...#I'vegotitbad !!! Cute turn in the story! *sigh again* Derrydown green color of my dreams...a dream that's daily coming true...I'll be your lover too! So awesome *sniff* sorry for being totally irrelevant...I can't help it...thanks for bringing up so many of the things I love about Rob! *mwah* <3

Reviewer: RobsYorkshireGirl (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 25--...You. So much, so much.

My heart is quite literally still hammering in my chest after that last chapter. That was a whole lot of emotion and a somewhat hefty slice of lemon tarte! Your story flows so well that it makes it quite easy to just get lost in it. Roll on Ch 26 ...... I'm ready and waiting!

Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 8--Orgasm Muse

"Rob’s little giggle" I swear to gawd he's the only man that can make giggling hot! :) "frolicking around in the pool with Rob" well, frolicking for me is always going to mean "prancing in the woods in New Moon"...sorry I'm easily distracted! She has a pool? *jealous* oh...right, still fiction (dammit!)...nuuhhmm...happy trail...man furrrrrr... ..::DED::.. “'Bloody Hell is she trying to kill us?' Tom laughed and replied, 'Uh, no, I think just you mate.'" hehe, I like TomStu, he's so perceptive ;) ...A massage by RP, is that even legal? lol
"What I hadn’t planned on was how having his hands so close to my lady bits was going to make me feel. He kept going higher and higher on the back of my thigh and then rubbed as close as he could without actually touching me there, then he took a sharp turn up and started rubbing the lotion into my left butt cheek" *hyperventilating* calm down...*breathes into paper bag* calm down... sorry 'bout that ;) gonna try not to say anything about that next part...but, uy uy uy...muy muy calore!!
Hehe, I study linguistics and I started thinking...do you think there are classes for guys to learn cunnilinguistics? *snort* Yes, I'm a mature adult...*cough* Yeah, Marisa is a fellow white wine drinker *virtual fistbump* I knew I liked her ;) Hehe...girl-on-girl got the guys' attention...que surprise! ;) ..."pocket rocket" LOL ...but ouch she has a lot of pain to carry *sniff* ...woosh...rollercoaster chapter for sure! Dayum, I'm a wordy beyotch ;) Lots of love! <3

Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 7--Hop on, James Dean

visual of Rob in a cowboyhat...ehm...*thud* ...could be high-larious, could be sexy as h-e-l-l! Of cousre he would say he's too pussy...he says that all the time! Well...he've said it at least twice ;) ...“You better hold on tight, cowboy.”,  well I'm glad she told him she hadn't seen any of the twilight movies...cuz a cowboy and a spidermonkey ain't that different...eh...well... sort of..."He was sitting right up against me, his hands hard on my hips and we were moving together in rhythm with the horse." Scuse me while I lay down and die for a bit...*fans self* ...hmm...usually I prefer the American terms to the British ones, but soccer is defienitely an exception... Play and fun is always a WIN! <3

Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 6--I Prefer To Drive Manual

Italian bread and straight-out-of-bed-Rob in the same paragraph? Cruel! ;) "I didn’t peg you for an early riser.” yep...I'm a perv... no doubt about it...cuz you might figure out where my mind went...gutter!“Oh, brilliant, so you’ve already seen more than enough of me then, haven’t you?” *sigh* not even fiction Rob can understand that there is no such thing as enough when it comes to Rob... *shakes head in disbelief*"Knackered" makes me think of "Knackers", lol ...so wrong! Nevermind me...I've got weird cultural references on my mind...! ...yup, the boy needs his beer! :)"it felt good to have my hand on a stick shift again." LOL once again...perv! I never drive anything but stick shifts myself ;) though I think the car in this story just lost its virginity *snort* ...so she plays the piano...hmmm...and he has piano hands...yeah, I see how that could be distracting...*dreaming* Impressive writing, sweets! <3

Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 5--Villa Lucia

TomStuuuuuuuu! Eh, sorry got a bit excited ;) ...salt and pepper hair...eh? Need to look up that one...great descriptions of the settings!
"You’re lucky you’re not ugly, I don’t tolerate ugly.” uhm, cuz that would've been the worst part about being ugly? LOL What a kook!
Rob...plaid...sunglasses(Raybans?)... *sigh* and that eh, grape "eating" thing...jeesh! Choked cuz it was so large, huh? hehehe...nice one ;)
"slippery little suckers", that  always makes me think of Pretty Woman...quite fitting actually, xcept the hooker part of course...Ride? “Horses? Uh, no.” hihi, gotta love dirty minds...or was it just me? ;)
Crusty Italian Bread *drool* ...Rob, who? #asif
Eff it, I really need to go to Italy!! Food tastes better and the air makes you horny? *gigglesnort* no wonder they have plenty of tourists...
Once again I loved the chapter! <3

Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 25--...You. So much, so much.

Love, Love, Love this story. Love Rob and Marissa! This story has LOTS of lemons which I love. I agree...Rob naked and having sex ALOT is absolutely a must!  Can't wait for them to be out in public together...maybe have some hot bathroom sex or something like that! Also, would love to see them get into an argument and then have great makeup sex! Keep it up...you're awesome!

Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 4--Lady in Red

I'd like to think that the 2 years of Spanish I took is paying off in reading this story, I love the casual use of Spanglish :)
"You're not the on I'm trying to kill" Muahahaha... ;) you go girl *wink* and oooh! looks like I'm not the only one winking, kismet? oh, right...still fiction...
Pfft...Marisa, never underestimate Rob's Sex eyes...he KNOWS what he's doing ;) Great chap, nice tempo you've set! <3

Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 3--Suspenders and Garter Belts

Marisa is amping up the volume ;) ...and I love the idea of kismet! Silent limo, loud “Oh, you mean my garter belt?” Lol!! Ooops! They've got chemistry for sure! Ah...the heat is on! :) <3

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