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Reviews For Touched
Reviewer: luc-darling (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Touched

This is such a lovely beginning! You've taken facets of the canon personality, yet made them their own person. The backgrounds for both are just so fitting; I can see them in my mind's eye. (& it makes me grin. Alice is so darling!) I cannot wait to see where this is going! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Touched

GULP!!!  Hook, line, and sinker, I'm yours. I LOVE a wounded-spirit Jasper. :))  (are you reading Show Me a Garden (bursting into life)? it ROCKS!!!)  Poor Alice! what the hell?? Can she feel anything yet? what happened to her head? and where are her people??? why isn't the Pixie on a milk carton???   (ooh, you must check out Tie Me Down To This World, too!!)

This story is just gonna rock, I know it!! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! For right now, Alice has absolutely no feeling whatsoever. The doctors don't why either. She's completely numb physically and Jasper is numb emotionally. There's a lot more to them than even they realize.

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Touched

Very good, it will be interesting to see how their relationship develops

Author's Response:

Thank you!

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