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Reviewer: CentauRita (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2013 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love, unrequited, sucks!
Reviewer: lavyalice (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2013 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow.. great storyyy
Reviewer: meee611 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, this was sad.. Surprisingly on both sides.. :(
Reviewer: lovebitessobiteback (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was sooooooo sad!! Poor Jasper! I was crying for him. I know that this is a one shot but I just have to say that I wish there was more!
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
powerful, emotional and beautifully written....BRAVO
Reviewer: MeLovesCookies (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
You never fail to make me cry! You are made of 100% awesome, thank you for sharing your writing with us :)
Reviewer: seremela05 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
I never read slash, but I love your writing!
Reviewer: mc21 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh how I wish this wasn't a one shot!! So much angst, so much drama. I love this, I love You!! I even cried so hard i got snot on my fav tshirt :(. So beautifuly written. You have so much talent. You are simply amazing AG.
Reviewer: KaiaRose (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 1
Such a sad, sweet story. I am confident that Jasper will find someone that can return his affections in the future.
Thanks for writing. Jasper and Edward's characters feel so real.
Reviewer: Sleepsheep (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
My Gosh, this is so sad. I crying right now.
Reviewer: MeiSun (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow... So moving. Poor Jasper. I hate that Edward is so... typically teenage.
Beautiful, but so sad.
Reviewer: chele the original (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
Poor Jasper they treated him like shit and he didn't deserve it.this made me cry.
Reviewer: nohesitation (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 1
I truly love, love, love this story...
Reviewer: Puddinpop72 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
You are the most creative, original, angsty writer out here!! Everything you write is so heartwarming & gutwrenching all at the same time! Can't believe it took me so long to read this- cz you never disappoint!
Reviewer: SFFR (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is such a sad story. You have me hooked on slash now. You suggested "Uncomfortable" for me and I read it AND LOVED IT. I want more "forceful" Edward. I didn't like him allowing Jasper to dominate him. I feel so bad for Jasper. I wonder what happens to him.
I guess it's been so long since you wrote this, you aren't planning to continue it. Ok so it's official, I have read everything you have ever written. SOOO you know what that means, you need to write something else for me to read.
I think you are the most talented person I have ever had the privilidge to talk to and I appreciate the opportunity to read your stories.
Your Friend,
Sandy
Southern Fan Fiction Review
Reviewer: YouWouldntLikeMe (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 1
Amazing One-Shot. You could really feel Jasper's attachment to Edward. I've read some of the other reviews and I know a lot of readers dislike Edward and/or Bella in this, but I don't. I think you've created really complex characters in this that have both positive and negative aspects to them.
Bella in this seems like a nice girl, she never really goes out of her way to be mean to Jasper, but at the same time she does make that mistake with Jacob. I know Jasper hated her, but I didn't.
Edward is obviously torn for awhile between wanting to be friends with Jasper and not knowing how to be friends with him because he's gay. Many people seem to dislike Edward for this fact, but really, it's not like Jasper made it easy on him. When he saw Edward pulling away, he just clung tighter to him, which is probably the worst thing you could do in that case. Also, he really pushed Edward to become romantically involved with him when it was clear that Edward didn't feel the same way.
Overall, I think this was an amazing one-shot. It's one of those short stories you can read over and over again and gain a different perspective on it.
Reviewer: Andre (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
That's it... it wouldnt hurt to actually let us know some more. Great One-Shot even though it left me wanting for more... I like the way you write and make us live through Jasper and feel his pain. The reality is that there's a lot of cases like this one, in which you get attached to a person that will never return the same affection... Great story!!
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 1
This little story broke my heart so bad. It's always a pleasure reading your Jaspers.
Reviewer: dellatwi (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 1
ugh thats it its over it feels unfinished. This was awesome its so rare that a fan fic can make me genuinely feel something and as uber corny as it sounds I was blubbering half way through when edwrd pushed jasper down so he would stop following. Your pen name is earned but also with the angst you bring the funny too as usual thanks, also Iam a huge fan a WA but I can live without an epi it feels finished I've read it twice. Withering the ferns is also my fave dry hump your awesome thanks
Reviewer: twilightbookaddict (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is so very sad.
Reviewer: billet doux (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 1
I`m definitely crying my eyes out right now. Poor Jasper, if he liked girls I'd offer him some comfort, but he doesn't. I don`t even know what to say besides that was so wonderful, I loved the progression of them growing up.
Sheesh, Edward didn`t feel ANYTHING for him? Gosh .. . so horrible.
Wonderful though.
-De`Anna
Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
you should write more for this, not leave Jasper all broken :(....
Reviewer: Oblivious (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hi, I'm a bit late, I should have dropped a review earlier Lol.
But I have to say this didn't seem like a one-shot at all to me; I'm sorry, but it didn't. This story is more like a budding novel! It was abosolutely amazing. I just can't believe it's over so quickly.
I seriously think you should consider turning this into something more; I know a lot of people would read this and loads would review, because you are such an amazing writer. So many emotions in one little chapter! I think you could expand on this episode or write some kind of sequeal to this, lol!
The best one-shot I have ever read, truly; the best (:
Reviewer: elemirehum (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
okay i was kinda hoping for a happy ending lol! amazingly written, obvs or i wudnt be reviewing lol, but really sad at the end, could you think about continuing it?? x
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 1
oh my gosh, that was aweful...in the best way. y'know, you'd think i would've figured with a penname like AngstGoddess i wouldn't have been so surprised by a not-happy ending, but jeez!! the boy is slumped under the bed. that's so sad. he need someone better than Edward! asshole
that was great
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