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Reviewer: hurley1003 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 12:34 AM · On: Give Me A Sign
Well i am glad to hear Edward's point of view. I also love the pairing of Jasper and Edward. Always perfect for those two.
I am curious, will Bella EVER let in Edward even if he never gives up?
Reviewer: belachia (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 10:18 PM · On: Give Me A Sign
looking forward to see how/if E handles the situation with bella...
Reviewer: wtm (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 09:48 PM · On: Give Me A Sign
love but i just can't see carlisle telling edward that! i know it important for the story but....
wtm
Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 04:14 PM · On: Give Me A Sign
I'm really glad Carlisle broke the confidentiality rule! Now maybe Edward can help her. Except... she has to let him first. Or not, I guess he could just show up at the right time. :) Boys love that "saving the girl" thing, right?
Bella's so troubled, and it's not even her fault, which makes it sadder. How could anyone ever do that to their own child??
Thank you for the update. I will wait patiently until the next one!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 03:52 PM · On: Give Me A Sign
great chapter! update soon!
Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Give Me A Sign
wow, amazing.
i hope edward figured it out soon
Reviewer: Pennyxoxx (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 03:23 AM · On: Ask No Questions, I'll Tell No Lies
Were you being sarcastic when u said about ur frequent updates?? U never update!!! please do because its such a good story!! xxx
Author's Response: no, that was copied from fanfiction. i update frequently on there, but on here, I'll submit a chapter and it won't be validated for two weeks or so. It seems like I never update on thie site, but I promise, as soon as one chapter is validated, the next is submitted right behind it.
Thanks!
Reviewer: Olinka (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 02:19 PM · On: Ask No Questions, I'll Tell No Lies
Great story, very dark, but I love the realism of it.
Reviewer: daisyhellride (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 07:27 AM · On: Ask No Questions, I'll Tell No Lies
Wow...deep...
Good story line though.
Reviewer: lovebug90 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 03:05 AM · On: Confessions
AH-MAY-ZING! i could smell so-co when i read this chapter!
Reviewer: lovebug90 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 02:40 AM · On: Ring Ring. Who is it?
the first chapters werent bad...fanfics like this usually have flowy problems at the begining...cant wait to read more...
Reviewer: lovebug90 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 02:10 AM · On: Afraid
im glad you havent deleted this...its hilarious...everyone as potheads....
Reviewer: ashleyr132002 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Ask No Questions, I'll Tell No Lies
omg u have to finish the chapter!!!! this was really good n u gotts me on the edge of my seat in every chapter. i never no wats gonna happen.. just when i think i might no, i get it wrong!! lol ur doing a great job so far ;)
Reviewer: ashleyr132002 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Breaking
wow ive only been reading this to day.. and frankly i gotts ta say im really enjoying this story.. it reminds me of my life n my situation with someone! minus da father beatin n da mom abandoning me but home life aint exactly da best to put it lightly(but odder dan dat its pretty much the same) but the fact that theres a guy im practiclly in luv wit but its complicated n we cant be together.. yah we wanna be but theres something stoppin us n it gotta do wit my dad.... but yah its really good.. u did a pretty good job!!
Reviewer: shinyvolvoowner75 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Ask No Questions, I'll Tell No Lies
*sigh* when is edward going to save the day?! next time charlie beats her up she wont fight to live bella will just give up on life and cant she just run away the worlds a massive place she can go live in the jungle and eat beetles and mud thats got to be better then getting your face plowed in the carpet everyday!!! when is she going to realize he doesnt own her and she can make her own choices JEEZ!! :-P
Author's Response: lol. feel better? (:
Things are about to get crazy, so just sit back and enjoy the ride!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Ask No Questions, I'll Tell No Lies
I really hope that Bella will find it in her to use that card that Dr. Cullen gave her. She needs someone local to talk to about all of this stuff so I also hope that she either lets Alice in or Edward.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Confessions
Even though Bella is scared to death that Charlie will come after she needs to get out of there now and fast before he really does kill her.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 01:15 PM · On: Breaking
Poor Bella! It is terrible that she has had to cut everything that she wants out of her life because of Charlie. I hope that she finds the strength to move forward with it and screw Charlie! She won't be under his wing for the rest of her life.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 01:04 PM · On: Turtle Shell
Well at least Charlie didn't hit her this time.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Ring Ring. Who is it?
So Renee leave Bella with her drunken abusive father and then decides to call her? What the Hell!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 12:49 PM · On: Death Row
Damn I don't like this Charlie one bit. I hope that Bella is going to be ok after all of this.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Afraid
This is a different story but not different in a bad way. And there is Mike! He doesn't ever get a clue in any story I read I kinna feel sorry for him! Ok maybe not.
Reviewer: Clumsy One _4eva (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Ask No Questions, I'll Tell No Lies
is that it!!!
it was i the finished catagorie. and no u arent spoiling us cause u aint updated us yet!!! I love the story btw. has this happened to you cause he detailing is to perfection. Nop don't answer that its none of my buisness.
Love it with all my heart. Plaees update son.
Love Bailzzz
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 08:55 AM · On: Breaking
Poor Bella. This is kind of hard to read because it's so sad, but I'm holding on because I'm hoping it gets happier.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Ring Ring. Who is it?
Renee? WTH?
I don't normally read bad-Charlie stories because I love me some Charlie, but yours is very good.
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