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Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Afraid
Well, I'm glad you didn't delete it. ;)
Joanie
Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Breaking
wow, that is amazing.
i cant wait to read more, im loving it.
my heart breaks for edward
Reviewer: jewelsie (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Breaking
More Please???!!?
Reviewer: shinyvolvoowner75 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Breaking
i HATE charlie 4 wat he did 2 bella hes a asshole and bella needs 2 move away and get out of there(shes old enough 2 do that right?)
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Breaking
keep writting!!! r u gunna have any E POV??!!!
wtm
Reviewer: duckindistress (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Turtle Shell
Well you reviewed my stories, one good turn deserves another. I'm reviewing yours. lol
I stumbled upon your story the other day and tonight was the first chance I got to read it so far. I like what you are doing with the characters, intersting take on Charlie and Renee. And its heart wrenching to imagine Bella hitting the self destruct button, she is really alone in the world just now, she needs people to confide in and truly help her claw her way out of the hell she is living in.
Only wee tiny thing I would advise you to watch out for is your word use e.g., "I lied on the roof", 'Lied' refers to telling a lie, it should be 'I laid on the roof'.
Aside from that I am hooked and looking forward to your next update...soon would be good. Sara xx
Author's Response: oops! thanks! ill watch that (:
im glad you enjoy my story! im working on the next chapter now, just been a little busy lately. No worries though. You won't have to wait too long!
Reviewer: Kerri (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 02:14 AM · On: Turtle Shell
OMG I HATE CHARLIE AND RENEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: samanthayh (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Turtle Shell
keep it going...really liking it.
Reviewer: Natural_Disaster (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Turtle Shell
i want to kill charlie.....such an ass. and i think its kind of cool how you didnt make Tanya such a bitch but a friend. keep writing..the story is good
Author's Response: Thanks!
usually all the stories have tanya as some terrible person whose a down right bitch and all that, but i thought it would make the story even more different than it already was.
Hope you keep reading!
Reviewer: shinyvolvoowner75 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Turtle Shell
wtf!?how dare renee call bella after she deserted her to live in that blemble hub (;p hehe i have my own languge u gotta get used 2 it!!) WHY DID SHE ACT LIKE A BITCH!!! please answer that 4 me pretty please with lots of reveiws 4 u if u do it on top!!! :) :) :) :) :) :)
Author's Response: lol. i like you (:
okay, so renee, why was she being a bitch?
well, in her mind, she was doing what was right. she was worried about her own sefety and figured bella would be fine until she could 'save her', thus becoming her daughters hero.
she thought bella was complaining and not thanking her enough or anything of the sorts, so she was being huffy about it.
so bella put her in her place :)
Thanks and i hope you keep reading!
hope to hear from you soon!
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Turtle Shell
lovin tanyas character her convo with bells was really well written
wtm
Reviewer: cranberryblue (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Turtle Shell
I offically love this.
Its emotional, and I totally get Bella and Renee's relationship. Its realistic and the way a 'harebrained' mother would actually behave-- believe me I know.
Anyway. 10/10, can't wait for more, it's a good story.
Reviewer: mibbe (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Turtle Shell
Interesting story, keep going at it, I'll be waiting for the next update. :)
Reviewer: Kerri (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Ring Ring. Who is it?
OMG!!!!!!!!!PLEASE WRITE AGAIN SOON!!!!!!!
Reviewer: beautifulytragic33 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Ring Ring. Who is it?
i rly like it. not my usual style, but i can go with it. good story!!!!
Reviewer: angiewal421 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Ring Ring. Who is it?
i'm really loving this story, can't wait for the next chapters
Reviewer: samanthayh (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Ring Ring. Who is it?
ugh my god, when will you update, ugh im hoping tomorrow, or right now even lol...im dieing to read the next one...with that clifhanger!! wow!!! looove how bella says "the fuck" insted of wtf.
Author's Response: I'm waiting for the next chapter to clear and i already have the next one written as well, so you won't have to wait long!
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Ring Ring. Who is it?
wow wow wow
i really feel for bella.
i hope everything works out soon
what the hell does renee want?
Reviewer: shinyvolvoowner75 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Ring Ring. Who is it?
now why would that ...THING (renee) call bella after she deserted her and left her with that asshole charlie?! please answer that goog so far
Author's Response: don't worry, your question will be answered very soon my dear(:
im waiting for the next chapter to be verified.
cant wait to hear what you think!
Reviewer: lv7713 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Ring Ring. Who is it?
i love your story i think you're doing an excellent job =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I'm glad you're enjoying it!
I'm waiting for another chapter to clear, so be on the look out soon!
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: November 09, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Ring Ring. Who is it?
love this keep writing!!!!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: November 09, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Death Row
o my god am in love with this story!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: November 09, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Afraid
awsome!!!! love bellas charater in this and loved the cheesy line by newton someone has actually tried to use that line on me before as he went to grab my ass, i just slapped him and said 'Did that?' and walked off, my freinds thought it was hilarious!!!
wtm
Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Ring Ring. Who is it?
Ooh I like it!!!! Please make haste and update!!!
Reviewer: g_alice_m (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 03:32 AM · On: Ring Ring. Who is it?
LOVE IT!! Its so deep and emotional it really touches subjects that people are to scared to write about i'm really loving this story can't wait for more update soon!
grace
xx
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like my story!
Yes, I agree, most people are too afraid to write about certain subjects.
That's what writing is all about though. You can write about whatever you want, you want to capture your readers in your story!
I hope I'm doing okay!
I will update soon!
Thanks again!
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