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Reviews For Seeing The Sun
Reviewer: lionandthelamblove7 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Changes - Kittredge

Ah!! I loved this chapter!! Well written work here. I love your story and your style if writing!! I look forward to the coming chapters!!


Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Changes - Kittredge

I'm glad you up-dated. Don't be too hard on yourself. Now that everything is set up the real story can begin! Up-date soon:)

Reviewer: lyns13 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Deleterious - Jacob

C'MON WRITE MORE!!!!! pleassssssssssse!!

Reviewer: lionandthelamblove7 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Deleterious - Jacob

Ah! I love this story already! The sence where Bella passed was described with such detail that I actually felt like I was there. I love this story so much and I hope to read more. Can't wait!!



Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Deleterious - Jacob

Very good, Very interesting subject, a different Jacob story from anyother I have read.  I hope you continue and update soon. 

Reviewer: his_golden_eyes (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Deleterious - Jacob

Great opening chapter... I am not usually jacob person but i really liked this so far. I am excited to see where the story goes. UPDATE SOON!

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Deleterious - Jacob

Oh wow! Hell of a way to open a story!

I like Jacob.  I do think, though, that he should have taken a swipe at Edward on his way out. *wry smile* You know... Edward DID ask...!

So is Bella irrevocably dead?  Looks that way.  How desperately morose.


I can't truthfully say I *enjoyed* this first chapter, but I am intrigued by how you're going to play this out.

Reviewer: KTwin405 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Deleterious - Jacob

this is mad good. keep goingg.

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