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Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 22
Wow. This was an intense moment between them. Poor Edward, he must be freaking out, thinking that he has lost her. I have misesd this story so very much. It is so emotionally charged. I love it.
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 22
WOW!! can't wait for more!
Reviewer: careolinagirl (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 22
Hey, good chapter. I struggle a bit that Bella is so naive, but I'm giving her the benefit of the doubt for shock. I'm intrigued by where this is going. Will it turn out happy or not??? I have missed your updates, but I'm glad that the last 2 have been close. Keep going, I love this story. Your posting made my day!
Reviewer: Bonsai (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 15
your reunion is making me cry....new moon did not....i think the fear of the last few chapters...and the fact that bella thought he was dead as well is making it more emotional...
WELL DONE!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 22
Awww man, now what I was hoping for :( but then again, this is something that I can relate to. It makes complete sense that she needs to get away to be able to process everything that has happened and at the same time figure out what she wants for the future.
I agree that, as hard as it was, telling Bella was the right thing to do. She would have found out about it at some point and then it would have been so much more horrible to deal with. It might be hard now, but definitely the right thing to do.
Another well written chapter, can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Bonsai (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 4
I do not think the pace is too slow. You have to set it all up...like the first movie in a trilogy.
it was someting you were concerned about, no worries :)
keep up the great writing...you've hooked me
Reviewer: Bonsai (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 2
Excellent writing!
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 21
This was so beautiful! I cried!
Reviewer: New-moon-rising (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 21
one word "teriffic" lol
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 21
That was just... my heart feels torn. Literally. That was bitter and painful. And terrifyingly good. Thank you.
~Mia
Reviewer: Red_Queen (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 21
WOW What a different story! I am really impressed! I love it! The Character Lazarro and the relation with Demitri...that was a really unexpected twist and I loved it!
Reviewer: klutz (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 21
i dont get the ending?
who did he kill?
and is that bellas funeral??
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 21
sniffle sorry it took me so long to read this chapter. I reegret being away from it for so long this chapter was awesome hard to swallow but interesting and still needed as a point to continue with the story!
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 21
Oh
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 21
Isn't it 'shepherd', and not 'sheppard'? And I'm sorry to be such a nitpicker, but it's 'whose' hair, and not 'who's'. *ducks and hides*
I loved the chapter, though. Bella's reaction is gorgeous.
Reviewer: KissinCullens (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 21
Oh no. You've managed to damage Bella's faith in the Cullens. How could you?
I look forward to the next chapter. I just wonder how many more forks in the road you have planned...
Reviewer: Ashmerlin (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 21
I know I read the draft but reading it here as the final copy made me cry. You are an awesome writer! I don't know how you do it but you always make it amazing.
XOXOXOXOX
Ashmerlin
Reviewer: Rosebud101 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 21
This is a great story line. i hope you up date soon.
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 21
that was unexpected indeed! great twist. can't wait to see how this unravels.
Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 21
Wow. Just wow.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 21
Wow. I don't hate you. It was brilliant. It;s all done now. I hope she grieves for Katarina, and tha pain of her family and friends... then finds hope in her future with Edward, and the Cullens. This was what she had wanted anyway...
I can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 21
Oooh! So that is the funeral that Alice saw then? This is the coffin that supposedly holds Bella? Is Katarina in it? Or is it filled with stones etc?
Can't wait for Bella's POV next. I'm assuming Bella will now need to be changed?
Hurry and update!!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 20
argh! Stop stalling -_- lovely work though.
Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 20
I just picked up your story today and had to tell you how much I liked it. Thanks so much for writing it!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 20
Evil cliffie.... I almost hate you for it... almost ;p
So, Bella is the singer for both Edward and Demetri? And because she saved Lazarro then Demitri is indebted to her. Does he love her? Is he capable of these human emotions? Or does he just want to kill her?
Will bella be given a choice? Demetri or Edward? Is that why Alice is scared? Is Bella going to think she should go with Demetri to save the Cullens from something?
Arrggh so many questions... please update soon!
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