Wow.... I don't have any words to describe this chapter. I loved it though.

Author's Response: Good, I'm glad.

Noooooo!   How dare they not get a brief frantic make out before they dragged her away!!

 (I agree;  the Volturi should have been more sinister like in BD.  And I like short chapters)

Author's Response: Perhaps there will be plenty of time for that later?

Ooh this was a great ending.  I agree with you that there should be more of a struggle, of some suffering for the characters - and NOT just Bella's ansgt-ridden, weak insecurities.  I personally prefer longer chapters but it is gratifying to have such quick updates, as well.  Hope to see one wonn, hint, hint!  Thanks for a very intriguing chapter. 

Author's Response: It seems like alot of people were expecting worse from the Volturi in NM.  I'm happy to deliver:)  Thanks for the reviews and I love your pen-name.  I'm one too.

woahhh what's happening!?! I can't decide between the longer, less frequent updates or the short ones like this.... I guess if I had to choose, I'd rather have more frequent updates. Keep 'em coming. ;o)

oh my gosh, i love this story, its awesome, update soon!

So my huge sigh of relief that Edward was really truly alive (well to the extent he can be considered alive) and not a hallucination was very short lived...your more menacing volturi have me worried! So cruel for B&E to be so briefly reunited only to be ripped apart again - their agony really comes through in your writing.

As much as I love a long post, I'm enjoying the frequent updates...and the good thing is they keep me wanting more!

That chapter was somewhat short, but it was good. It hurt me though, to see them hurting like that...lol...I will be waiting for more!

Geesh! that was like enough angst in a single chapter to meet my quota for the week. But it really worked in the format. Just when they're reunited, they're ripped apart again. wow. now I really can't wait to see what happens! As for the long vs. Short chapter thing... I don't know which I prefer. the more updates the better thou!!! YAY!

Your authors note has left me with a sense of foreboding.  :(

How sad that Edward and Bella have been separated again so soon!  And what of Alice?  Where is she?  Is she ok?  Is Jasper with her?

And I'm all for these short chapters updated frequently.  I would hate to have to wait longer for updates <HINT HINT>

OMG!!! I am going to cry if that really is just a hallucination!!! I'm going to be figuratively perched on the edge of my seat and holding my breath until the next chapter!!! (Ok so I used waaaay too many exclamation marks in this review but this is seriously exciting stuff)

 What? Thats not very nice to leave us hanging like that! Buy atleast Edwards back (I think).

OHMYGAWD!! lol... keep posting, pretty please?? :o)

Aww man, you can not leave me hangin' like that!!! this is definetly one of the pest AU New Moon's that I've read. Totally in cannon, and exteremly creative. I absoulutely LOVE it!