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Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 19
Oh a cliffie! I liked your little story at the begining! I hope that whatever is comin' isnt too bad! I have loved this and will be sad when it is over! Take as long as you need to write the chapters! Anything to prolong the story! lol! I wont bitch or anything i swear!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 19
I love your note and I believe you!
LOL
I love that its going on and we can see whats going to happen with them!
Post again soon!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 19
Okay, your author's note was the funniest thing EVER. I was laughing out loud reading it.
This chapter was wonderfully romantic. Things are definitely brewing on the horizon.... I am eager to find out what's coming! Great update!
Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 19
Love your super long Author's Note. Too cute.
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 19
Uh-oh...family meeting and Edward not lying to Bella anymore. Why do I have the feeling that this isnt going to be good news???
Always the worry wart. :P
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 19
Oh don't leave us hanging there!!! update soon and don't worry if you have 2 chapters to go or 6 I'm with you till the end
Reviewer: PaisleyCrighton (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 19
Are you sure Bella and Edward didn't tell you anything about not leaving cliffhangers? I am pretty sure they would. They really love their readers. Please update soon!
Reviewer: dreamingofyou (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 19
This is so good. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Twilight131 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 19
This is getting so good - I can't wait for the next update. I don't mind that this will go on for a few more chapters. It's great!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 18
Yeah!!! I am so glad that they kissed! :) And that finally, they are being honest with each other.
I like how Bella was thinking of his shoes, it's so different than what edward was expecting, but then Bella has always been that way hasn't she?
I'm glad too that Bella voiced the thoughts that made her feel she was a monster. It's only natural to wonder if she would now be free if he were dead. I'm happy though that Edward was compassionate enough to make sure she knew she wasn't a monster.
Another fantastic chapter.
Reviewer: wendy_beth (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 18
I absolutely adore this story! It makes sense that Demitri would be a tracker with the background story that you did good. Good Job!!! I read the whole story this afternoon so I am pretty impressed!
Reviewer: Porcelain Mortal (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 18
Woohoo!! *Happiness* :-D
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 18
Sniffle.
She thought she was the monster...what a pair they make. Wow sniffle
"Gravity is a strong force that can’t be overcome. I leaned forward, but he was already coming toward me. Our lips met, hesitantly at first, and then recklessly. The past evaporated and nothing else mattered. I was whole again."
Breath taking!
Reviewer: bells123 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 18
Great chapter. I've really enjoyed this story. I'm glad that she didn't just trust him immediately.
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 18
That was a long awaited update, but soooooo well worth the wait. I am so glad that they had a chance to talk. Plus we got a kiss out of the deal! I cant wait for more!
Reviewer: radiant_being73 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 18
Fantastic update!! I love that she told him her truth, all of it, and didn't pull her punches and that he kept his mouth shut, gave her her space and listened. It was beautifully written and I am hopeful for their future. Way to open the channels of communication, let's hope they don't slam them shut again...
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 18
I really liked their reunion. I'm glad she got all of that stuff off of her chest.
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 18
Oh this was so sad and happy at the same time. I'm glad you updated, you have been missed. I had tears of saddness and joy for this one
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 18
Yay, for a while there I didn't think that she would ever believe him.
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 18
Your writing is terribly beautiful and startlingly refreshing. My one lament is that there is not any more. I will always be desperate for more from you. I love your writing.
~Mia
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 18
A lovely update! And i hope you do them a touch more frequently in the future!
Reviewer: ashtong21 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 18
oh god...that edward :) i love him almost as much as i love this story!!
update soon!
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 18
Ok, yeah it's been awhile. I had to back up a chapter to review what happened last chapter. Once I did that everything was pretty seamless. I like that Bella is actually thinking through whether or not to accept Edward's declaration. Are you still planning on having this wrapped-up in two more chapters?
Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 18
i love it!!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 18
Fantastic. Spellbounding. I love her rant. I love that she was focused on his shoes and then it all came out all at one time. Its so real. This story is so wonderfully addictive. The characters are so true, I really believe that it COULD have happened this way. I can't wait to read the next scene. Where do they go from here? How do you rebuild the trust? I am eager to read about it!!!
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