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Reviews For Fire and Ice
Reviewer: okiyi (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2014 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

Lucky little B#$@&



Author's Response:

Exactly.;)

 

~Lisa

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2013 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

It feels like she used Jake



Author's Response:

Valid point. And honestly, she totally did. However, Jake didn't mind in the least. ;)

 

~Lisa

Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2013 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

That was... HOT!! Mmm.. I definitely wouldn't mind being Bella right then. :P

One question though, wasn't Bella a virgin before this, or had she already made love with Edward before? If so, there should have been blood and pain (unless she was already too euphoric to realize there was pain, and the sensation of Edward's coldness) when Edward entered her first; but at least the blood would still be there.

Adding Jacob's puncture to her neck and Edward's licking it up was a nice touch (did Jake mean to do that?)!

Beauiful little one-shot! Thanks! :)



Author's Response:

Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

This was such J-U-I-C-I-N-E-S-S! This was the first, major sex fantasy short story I examined on this site and the story didn't disappoint me!! Bella sure was lucky to have 2, incredibly skilled, sexy men wanting her, having her and competing for her pleasure! Yes, Edward and Jacob were like 2 male animals determined to win Bella the female animal; it's a wonder Edward and Jacob didn't fight right then and there in the forest at first! This is remaining in my favorites! I panted from the vivid descriptions!! Thanks for the thrills!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It was rather naughty to write but my husband definitely enjoyed the perks of me getting so hot and bothered by it. ;) I appreciate the glowing review.

~Lisa

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2011 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

mmm very vey hot



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Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2011 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

um, fuck yea there was some tingling!!! great job!!!  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

Hahaha - thank you. I'm glad you "enjoyed" it. ;)

~Lisa

Reviewer: brittanyrayne (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

Definatley need a super cold shower!! ;) wow, i must say that was awesome!!



Author's Response:

Hahaha - thank you so much. ;)

~Lisa

 

Reviewer: silentdreams0131 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2011 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

i need a cold shower and a cigarette after that.......wonderfully written, great job!



Author's Response:

Can't blame you there. ;) I might've attacked my husband after writing this. I'm glad you enjoyed it too. :)

~Lisa

Reviewer: Loopy4Twilight (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

ahh hott stuff ... so wish my fiance was here right now he wouldnt know what hit him.. would of loved more of her going home with Edward though x



Author's Response:

Sorry I didn't respond to this before now. I apologize for that. I would've enjoyed more of the "after" with Edward too, but this was all they gave up at the time. ;) Thanks for reading and the review. I appreciate it.

~Lisa

 

Reviewer: Nathyette (Anonymous) · Date: November 05, 2010 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

My God, this is an intensely hot one-shot. Thank you for submitting your beautifully written, pungently citrus-flavoured work. xD It's gorgeous.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. It certainly raised my temperature up while writing it and I blushed the entire time my hubs had me read it to him. Then of course I reaped the benefits. ;) I appreciate the read and review. =)

~Lisa

Reviewer: ahatten (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

LOVED IT. It certainly did elicit a response. My boyfriend will not be leaving the bed for a couple days...



Author's Response:

HAha - well, I'm glad you enjoyed it and that your boyfriend will reap the benefits. Thanks for the read and review. I appreciate it. =)

~Lisa

Reviewer: AshleyL (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

Hubby where r u?????? Oh who cares about hubby, can't wait for him WOW!

Author's Response:

Hahaha - that's when shower massagers and big bathtubs come in handy. ;) And of course, take advantage of the hubs when he gets home again. Glad you liked it. :) Thanks for the read and review. I appreciate it.

~Lisa

Reviewer: SvassGudinna (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

That was "Fuck hot" writing and I most definately enjoyed it -- twice.  You go woman - keep it up. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;) I appreciate the read and review.

~Lisa

Reviewer: IVYnurse (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

sooooo naughty and sooooo delightful! :-) loved it!!!



Author's Response:

Hahaha - thank you. It was a bit naughty. ;) Thanks for the read and review. I appreciate it.

~Lisa

Reviewer: mickeyjnn (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

OHHH JAcob And Edward, though i would have preffered just Edward...but that was good and....interesting. good job i liked it though i would have preffered it with just Edward or Jakes and Edwards perspectives.



Author's Response:

Hahaha - I don't blame you. I'm an Edward girl myself. This was written by request for KariAnn who wanted the Edward/Bella/Jake sandwich. I obliged her, but I'm still an Edward/Bella girl completely. I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway. =)

~Lisa

 

Reviewer: alys (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

oh my, were is my ice water.....



Author's Response:

Haha - thanks. Sorry to overheat you, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;)

~Lisa

Reviewer: teamicyhot (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

um........... wow.......... let me catch my breath......



Author's Response:

It took me a long time - and a thorough "session" with the hubby to finally catch my breath. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

~Lisa

Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

*sigh*....*moan*....*growl*.... speachless....

Damn, that was hot!!! Need to go find my husband now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Haha - yes, I had to attack my husband after writing that. I didn't know I had that kind of scene in my brain. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed it. =) And thanks for the review.

~Lisa

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

Nasty, Nasty Bella.  That was good!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! =)

~Lisa

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

ohhhhh my gosh! that was so incredibly beutiful  beautiful umm maybe beatuiful. umm yeah my mind is so not where it should be right now that i can't even spell that stupid word. but it was that B word trust me! mmmmmmm i don't think its fair she only got a one time deal!



Author's Response:

Hahaha - well, I suppose that causing your brain to be incapable of coherent thought beyond beautiful is a good thing. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you so much for the review. I'm sure quite a few people agree that Bella should get more than just the one time with that experience, but we all know Edward doesn't like to share. :)

~Lisa

 

Reviewer: erikskitty1989 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

All tingly! My fiance had no idea what i was up to, the only thing he knew was the clothes went flying! Very much awesome..LOVED it, doesnt even begin to cover it...write more PLEASE!!!!



Author's Response:

Haha - well I'm glad that both you and your fiance enjoyed the benefits of reading that naughty one-shot. ;) Thank you so much for finding it, reading it, and leaving a review. I appreciate it. =)

~Lisa

Reviewer: hetzel4 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

Holy crow! That was....HOT. That was inspirational ;) Great stuff!!



Author's Response:

Yes, it was quite naughty and delicious. My husband was attacked when I finished writing it. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing it - I hope you put that "inspiration" to good use. =)

~Lisa

Reviewer: Tara Von Delectable (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

Hmm. Where's my vibrator?



Author's Response:

Hahaha - hopefully you found it. ;) Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review. I appreciate it. =)

~Lisa

Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

wow! off to that cold shower, amazing =) as always! weird, i mean it would never happen, but some how I believed it could make sense sharing her like that HOT

=)



Author's Response:

Hahaha - I'll agree it was weird. I actually prefer my sex scenes with subtle imagery instead of the more explicit details, but because it was written by special request for a dear friend I took it much further in the details than I normally would. I did blush the entire time wrote it - and again when I read it out loud to my husband. I'm delightfully surprised you read this piece as well and enjoyed it. Thanks for letting me know what you thought - as always it put a smile on my face. =)

~Lisa

Reviewer: gg1982 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice

ID LIKE IT BETTER IF SHE WENT HOME JACOB!!!!

Author's Response:

So I take it you're a Team Jacob fan. I can understand that. My daughter is too - although she's 11 and is not allowed to read this. ;) Still, I hope you enjoyed it anyway. Thanks for the read and review - I appreciate it.

~Lisa

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