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Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 04:13 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Oh wow!
Can I just say how liberating it is to read B & E being free with one another... I love how easily they have slipped into their roles of fiancee & betrothed as Alice is around.. How they have allowed their real selves to respond to the other & to quit the facade's... Even though its BPOV - the relief from Edward is tangible..
Love his determination to do it right this time... The dates, the build up.. but worry about what he is up to in the evenings - dangerous me thinks...
Love them together - their unity, their humour & the love.
& now they have fessed it too. WOW!
Quite the chapter.
Thanks so much.
Cheers & lotsa love
Emmy.
XXXXX
Reviewer: Melissamh (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 04:05 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
FInally! I've been waiting so impatiently but I LOVED it. Please keep going!!
Reviewer: stylindancer (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 03:49 PM · On: February 29, 2008
Aww Edward with a baby would make anyone say the bug "L" word...sigh ;) Yay for updates!
Reviewer: DelSig (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 03:22 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Love the Chapter. You are a great writer. I can't wait for the next chapter. So is Jason a part of Volterra?
Reviewer: jenalpz (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 03:21 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Yes long time coming, but I loved it. I love Edward with a baby, it makes me sigh. I am getting more and more curious how everything with the Volturri will get fixed up. I can't tell, which I love. Your story makes me think a lot. One of my first fics and one that get's me super excited when you update. Thanks!
Reviewer: TF Alice (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 03:00 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Woo-Hoo!!
That was a great chapter! She ran into Jason . . . is he going to put it together later? Is she going to make it to the trial undiscovered?? So excited and glad you are writing again. Loved the sweet moment in the hospital <3
Reviewer: bbness (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 02:53 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
SO GOOD!!!
Reviewer: my_personal_brand_of_heroin (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 02:22 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Cause I'm lazy I'm just copying and pasting the review I made over on ff:
Awww ... that i love you was one of the sweetest i've ever read -i swear i even have tears in my eyes thinking about it, i just completely melted. It was perfect and beautiful and i think they realise it ain't for show.
I enjoy learning about Marie's past, it gives us so much insight and they're so well written.
Has Edward joined the Occhi? Is that where he disappeared to?
Even though i was glad Bella has a friend in Jake, im glad she realises he's not a part of the world she's in now, she belongs with the Cullens.
And i like how you showed the Alice and Bella moments - its more like they're actually friends now instead of just sisters-in-law to be. And she's a mom! I'm glad Jasper got there in time.
The party was great! Especially Bella finding the balls to stand up to Tanya and stand up for what's hers.
Though the whole jenks thing has me worried - not about how you'll write it, i trust you to do that amazingly - but for Bella and Edward! I hope he doesn't try and remember her too much, i know how much that bugs someone and usually you don't let it go - but im hoping Bella does remember and not forget with little JC coming into the world, otherwise it could be trouble... more than could already be coming.
The whole thing had a sense of "calm before the storm" especially with bella's dream. I loved the pack of wolves metaphor, it really helped build up the tension.
I loved it! T'was awesome as usual and extra long chapters are the best - im my opinion with HIPS the longer the better. Thank you for finding time to update even with everything you've got going on with the bellies - i better continue with my epic reading list now. :D
Wow, I didn't realise till now how long that was!
Reviewer: nibo (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 02:06 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
So sweet. I was nervous about reading this again after the hiatus but I should have known I'd have no reason to worry, I am even more in love with it than before. I am dying to know what happened to Marie to make her testify and where Edward and Bella will go from here. Thanks for the great update.
Reviewer: Kyramy (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 01:28 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
A long time getting there?!
Understatement of the century!! XD
Luurved it!! Fabby!! WOW!!
Reviewer: leahswings (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 01:16 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
I love you's over a baby and labor at a birthday party, what a chapter.
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 12:54 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Poor Alice. I hope Jasper doesn't miss his baby birth. And now Alice will be staying with bella and Edward.
Reviewer: alice rules (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 12:19 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Very long chapter indeed! Thanks. Cannot imagine Alice as a mum to save my life! Wow. Finally, lil JC made it. Looking forward to more...
Reviewer: babylou23 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 12:11 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
aww so cute
Reviewer: bryantjess (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 12:04 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
awwwww! yay!
Reviewer: Mo40 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 12:00 PM · On: February 29, 2008
Interesting start. Can't wait to read more.xx
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 11:58 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
I love drunk Edward. Too bad he over thinks everything.
Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 11:57 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Oh my, he loves her too? Or was that just for "show"? SHIT!
Fabulous chapter!
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 11:25 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
I'm glad Bella is spending time with Esme. I also love their swimming lessons. I love it all.
Reviewer: cullenbabygirl (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 10:39 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Perfect ending!!! Love it... please may I have another????
Author's Response: Ha. It will be a couple weeks probably :)
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 10:36 AM · On: April 27 - May 5, 2008
God I love Emmett. I kind of agree with Emmett. He needs to protect Bella and Edward might break Bellas heart.
Reviewer: like_diamonds (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 10:34 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
I loved it, it was adorable =)
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: sparkleNbite (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 10:14 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
I should have reviewed more as I read through the story and for that I am sorry.. BUT in my defense I didn't want to waste the time, I just wanted to read more!! :)
Your story is entertaining, well written, and keeps a great pace to provide great flow for the story but enough information to really create a full picture of the characters and their lives. There are no words for how eager I am to continue reading.
Thank you for this great moment with Bella and Edward! I loved it and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you for your thoughtful review and for taking the time to tell me you're enjoying the story. :)
Reviewer: Lucette21 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 10:10 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Oh all the people they'd met previously, Jason Jenks was the one I least expected might be a black hat ... I guess we'll have to see - I suppose he could be undercover in someway.
I loved the slowdown but continuation of the physical side of the E/B relationship but I'm glad Alice can take her cockblicking ways home with her now.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Yes, Alice is going home with baby JC.
There was a Jason Jenks in a previous Volturi flashback... I think chapter 16.
Reviewer: Myffieberry (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 09:51 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Oh boy, did I ever! Edward and Bella will get a chance to make up for when Alice barged in next chapter right? And Bella will tell Edward about Jason Jenks recognising her too? Right? Goodness I love this story!!!
Author's Response: thanks for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying it :)
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