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Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 06:15 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

this is the kind of twist that I hate seeing here, Bellas' brain must have been melted, so instead of trying to help solve the preoblme she is creating one more for everyone

Reviewer: JAustenlover (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 06:14 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Oh, that was a very very hard chapter to read. So very sad. Heartbreaking. She's pulling an 'Edward.' Guess I should have seen this coming, but I didn't.

Great job making it totally convincing, my dear. I'm a mess! lol.

Why oh why do I have a bad feeling about Jake's involvement in this? His insistence she take a car, instead of the bus? Hope I am imagining danger where it doesn't exist.

Thanks for the chapter update. I know we are nearing the end. So sad! I look forward to the next chapter.

*air kisses*

JA



Author's Response:

It was sad, but we are hurtling toward the end.

Thank you, as always, for reading :)

Reviewer: gonyes (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 06:10 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

:o(  I knew it had to happen but I am still upset.....it's going to be heartbreaking when Edward comes home.  However, next time that ring goes on her finger it will be for real.

Reviewer: c_kristy (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 06:09 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Wow I can't believe she's going on the run...it makes sense that she would feel the need to do this to protect everyone, but I can only imagine how hurt and outraged both Edward and Emmett will be. Cannot wait for the next chapter. It's great to have new updates for this amazing story :)



Author's Response:

thank you for sticking with the story :)

Reviewer: idlehands (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 06:07 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

eeek. oh my.  amazing work. silly bella, running away. edward is going to throw a shit fit....i can't wait to read all about it.  terrific job, i look forward to the update.

Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 06:06 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

awww..I understand her wanting to do it but damn..stupid bella/marie not smart. great chapter.

Reviewer: laddymischief (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 06:06 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

phenominal. i cried. NO big.

youre amazing.



Author's Response:

<3

Reviewer: Zandriin (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 06:04 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

I'm so glad you started posting this story again. It was one of the first ones i read when I got into reading FF all those months ago and it is still one of my favorites. Every chapter makes my heart ache just a little more.
Z

Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 05:55 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Oh! What a stupid and brave young woman. Her strength is unfathomable. I would've crumbled when I found the IDs and waited for him to come home. Yeah, I guess I'm pretty dumb too. lol.

I like where this is heading, its all building up. I actually hope she can do it on her own, but I'm pretty certain that she will be noticed somewhere. Boy, Emmett will probably be more pissed than Edward. I guess I'll find out next week.



Author's Response:

You will def. find out next week. :)

Reviewer: bekanz (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 05:51 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Agh intense!!! can't wait for next chapter gees she's selfless haha

Reviewer: Elizmeagan (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 05:49 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

I really love this story and was so happy  when you posted another chapter last week.  I am glad that I was patient and waited for you to get the story the way you wanted it to be.....as if I would ever abandon one of my favorite stories!  Thanks for sharing it with us.



Author's Response:

thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 05:44 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

BWWWAAAAAAAA!!!!!! Are you serious?  Unacceptable!  UNACCEPTABLE!!!!  The only way you can make this better is if you let the rest of the Cullens know about Bella/Marie.



Author's Response:

Edward and Emmett are up next chapter.

Reviewer: gxtgal (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 05:44 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

My heart is bleeding. Bella, Bella, Bella....

Reviewer: Meghaja (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 05:41 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

I feel my heartbreaking. Sunday cannot come soon enough.

Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 05:41 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Ordinarily I would cringe reading a scene involving any kind of shopping where Alice takes place. I'm giving you big kudos for that scene, hon, because you made her an afterthought and kept the focus on Bella. I felt Bella's pain, I felt her worlds colliding. I felt her guilt as Esme comforted her and the dramatic irony of it.

:)

Books



Author's Response:

Ha. I didn't even think of it as a "shopping scene" with Alice. Funny.

Thanks for the love :)

Reviewer: Edward Lives (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2010 03:35 PM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008

I love it! "Didyoumeanit?"

Reviewer: FeFeLaRue81 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 12:34 PM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008

Love this story. Any idea when you will update again? Soon I hope.



Author's Response:

I intend to update later tonight. :)

Reviewer: CzerSue (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 07:17 PM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008

Thank you for coming back...

Reviewer: Kat N Hat (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 03:34 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

i AM SO GLAD YOU ARE UPDATING AGAIN.



Author's Response:

me too :)

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 02:53 PM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008

I'm so glad that your back. I'm a mighty patient person, but holy kelp! Please finish this story and even if its the next chapter (which I hope its not) I would be a happy woman.

Happy New Year

Reviewer: justlooking (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 02:20 PM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008

So glad you'rs back.  I've missed this story.  Great chapter.  I love Em and his super human strength!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 12:53 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008

It was an amazingly happy surprise to see a new chapter after so long! Thanks for the recap summary at the top too, saved me going back over things (because I'm addicted to this site and have a tendancy to get mixed up on what the different B&E's are up to hehe :)

As for the chapter, a lot of things going on, not least of which was B&E confirming their feelings for each other finally! So now I wonder if they'll both end up having to disappear, or whether there'll be some kind of resolution that allows them to stay with the family... hmm... assuming Bella's "cover" never actually gets blown completely (ie the bad guys who find out are "silenced" forever) there's still a chance for the whole HEA and not just part of it.

Looking forward to more :)

PS very much looking forward to Rosalie and Alice's reactions eventually hehe

Reviewer: Lauravamp (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 03:03 PM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008

So glad that you're back!

Reviewer: BDroxmysox (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 11:27 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008

WELCOME BACK !!!!! I don't know what took you so long, but I'm glad you're finally back here, I've missed this story SO MUCH !!!! it's been my favorite since I first started reading fanfictions ;D You are completely awesome, fabulous, terrific, magnificent, super, great, fantastic, PERFECT !!!! Can't wait  for Sunday :D

xxoo

Hedda<33

Reviewer: swilson500 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 09:19 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008

Love this story! I was always intrigued, but had held off on reading it until you started writing again. I hate to get attached to a story then wait months for the conclusion. So glad I read it. Read all the chapters without stopping. Cannot wait for an update. You have a true talent!

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