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Reviews For Catch me
Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 05:49 PM · On: "Torn"

Don't be worried about this chapter. I found it very erotic. Who wouldn't want Edward to show them the ropes???

Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 05:02 PM · On: "Save yourself!"

I love Alice and how much she and Edward adore each other.  I hope Edward doesn't have to wait too long to start putting the moves on B!

Reviewer: Arabella_ (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 04:56 PM · On: "pressure release"

Love the story. Love your threats.

Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 04:44 PM · On: "A screeching Halt"

So glad Jake finally got his ass kicked.

Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 04:28 PM · On: "iPods and favors"

You seriously need to reassess how important reviews are b/c there is nothing that could possibly be better than being pinned to a wall by Edward    ....with my legs wrapped around his waist...oh my, I think I need a shower now....lol    Story is still great and I can't wait until Jake gets his ass kicked by someone, anyone.

Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 04:02 PM · On: "Torn"

I think that chapter was priceless.  OOC and humiliating yes, but priceless none the less.  I know from personal experience that being in a rough emotional spot, extremely drunk and "tense" are a dangerous combination and can lead you to do some OOC things!  lol.

Reviewer: mayi (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 03:09 PM · On: "pressure release"

WOW!!!! What the hell indeed. I can't wait to read the next chapter and see what Bella does!!!

Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 02:35 PM · On: "pressure release"

awwwwbless edward, poor bella, dumb ass jacob! as always just fantastic! totally awesome!!! can't wait for the next chapter! keep up the good work u rock luv ur ever luvin no1 fan xx

Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 02:27 PM · On: "Introductions"

Liar....nothing could be better than a piggy-back ride from Edward, lol.  Love it so far.

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 02:17 PM · On: "pressure release"

Okay...I am seriously envious of Alice. Jasper is a God. Edward is as well of course but OH MY GOD! Jasper is tempting. loved the scene thanks

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 01:46 PM · On: "pressure release"

Great chapter!

I'm glad that Bella talked to Jasper. She needs someone besides Edward and her brother to talk to.

I hate that Jacob had to ruin her birthday...Why can't he stay away?

Looking forward to your next update!

Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 12:48 PM · On: "pressure release"

Not the best way to find out that a guy has fallen in love wiith you.  I am so glad that Jasper was there to talk to her and to help guide her.  I love when he is so sweet sensitive, caring, and damn sexy.  Alright I admit it I love me some Jasper.  (And some Emmett, and Edward, and Jake too. Even if in this story he is a total ass, it is still a very fine ass.)  Great chapter.

Reviewer: sassygrl0982 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 10:31 PM · On: "Breathe"

Just finished reading what you have written so far! And all I can say is..... WOW!!! I love this story! You are a talented writer and I love the way to structured the characters! I cannot wait to see what happens with Jacob being there!! So.... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE HURRY!! I need entertainment until Eclipse comes out!! I already have my tickets and am sooooo excited! So please give me the gift of your wonderful story!!!! So please hurry and update otherwise I may go mad!! LOL

Love it!!!

Reviewer: Chipper (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 06:21 PM · On: "Breathe"

I don't think I've ever reviewed your story, luv.  You know I love it.  I absolutely want to STRANGLE you right now for bringing Jake into this moment. 

Tell me my Edward's gonna kick his ass.  Please?  Pretty please?  :)

Mwah.

Reviewer: KatnissGale (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 12:29 PM · On: "Breathe"

Oh dear! Jacob... What will Bella do? I can't wait to find out!!

Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 12:01 PM · On: "Breathe"

Sheesh....he's always ruining it!  Please please please please tell me that the next chapter Bella breaks her hand on Jacob's jaw after telling him to go to hell!  PLEASE!!  I can't take it anymore...LOL  Oh God, she can't go back to him....is it going to get worse before it gets better??  No, she can't do that to Edward.  AARRGGGHHH!  LOL

Reviewer: where_the_books_live (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 10:27 AM · On: "Breathe"

Jacob!? And things just started going well for the two of them. Let hope he doesn't muck up the works too much. Great chapter!!

Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:40 AM · On: "Breathe"

WTF ... Jacob why does he always have to ruin everything !!!! i'm glad to hear that the updating will be more frequent, i really miss this story ...

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 07:04 AM · On: "Breathe"

NOooo! Augh!! Why?!? How could you??!? Woman you are cruel!!! The the the perfect moment & kiss & gift an an an...you ruin it with jake???? Eeeewww!!! That it just WRONG!!!

You so owe us after that! Oooh how bout Edward "showing" Bella more orgasms, but in person!?? :-) Aw c'mon, it's the least U can do!

Reviewer: Allaiin (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 05:04 AM · On: "Breathe"

Omg.. Such a cliffhanger!!! U r evillll!!! Lol. This story is reli reli good. :) Edward is so sweet!

Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 09:44 PM · On: "Breathe"

Well CRAP!! And double CRAP!! Did Jacob really have to ruin the moment?  Oh that was so mean of you. 

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 06:32 PM · On: "Breathe"

They kissed! I'm so happy! And oh shit to Jacob! Cockblocker!

Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 04:11 PM · On: "Breathe"

What's going to happen.  Of all the luck for Jacob to show up right after that.  Please update again soon.

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 01:52 PM · On: "Breathe"

Bella has some seriously fucked up luck. She finally makes progress with Edward and regains a fraction of her self esteem just in time to have the dog resurface. Please help her to stand up for herself and Edward. thanks for the update. also I love toasted cheese and tomato sandwiches

Reviewer: Odenc (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 09:04 AM · On: "Breathe"

Nooooo...Jacob is with another girl - right??
Bella needs to keep moving forward!

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