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Reviews For Asthenia
Reviewer: Sage220 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 07:15 PM · On: All The Wrong Places

I like this story! It's so interesting; how did you come up with this idea? Are you still updating?

Reviewer: melindadasril (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 03:45 AM · On: All The Wrong Places

NIce!!make me wondering what happens next!!more!!lol

Reviewer: AliceChild (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 12:22 AM · On: The Amazing Collapsing Girl

Love the story, I can't wait for more.

Btw, I request and invitation to the wedding! =]

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 12:12 AM · On: The Amazing Collapsing Girl

lol, so very true!

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 11:07 PM · On: The Amazing Collapsing Girl

I know right?! ...Stupid boys... gggrrr! But this is going to be the best damn pretend wedding ever! lol XD



Author's Response:

Oh I know! And who knows, I may use the ideas if I ever find a guy who isn't, you know, stupid. Haha. Or Kellan Lutz. Because even if he turned out to be stupid, he's sexy as hell, so I'd still keep him around. I'll just be like "Smile and nod, honey." XD

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:45 PM · On: The Amazing Collapsing Girl

so, i know this will sound hokey darlin' but what about instead of a traditional reception we play an old movie like An American in Paris, Sabrina, or something along those lines and have theatre foods?  Stupid? I've always wanted a reception like that. maybe out side under the stars??



Author's Response: Ohhhh! I DEFINITELY picked the right person to marry! :D You know, I almost wish this was a real wedding, it sounds so perfect. XD

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 08:49 PM · On: The Amazing Collapsing Girl

lol, that is so true!! XD  any other ideas?



Author's Response:

Hmm... catering as a sit-down dinner at the reception, or buffet-style. Or no reception at all?

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 08:49 PM · On: The Amazing Collapsing Girl

lol, that is so true!! XD  any other ideas?

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 08:27 PM · On: The Amazing Collapsing Girl

Oh, I know! We could go to Catalina Island, get married and honeymoon there in LA?  The water is beautiful there, very clear.  Maybe get a boat or something ?



Author's Response:

I love that idea! See this is why women are always best at planning weddings - we can plan a perfect one without even meeting each other. XD

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 08:07 PM · On: The Amazing Collapsing Girl

Hmm, I like that dashboard confessional song "stolen" XD  Which beach should the big event be held at?  east coast, west coast?



Author's Response:

Oh God! I love that song! It's in my top ten most played songs on iTunes. :D As far as the beach, I'm not particular on which specific one, but I'm thinking one with nice blue water instead of like, the east coast with it's green/brown looking water. It just seems like a better backdrop for pictures. Where should we honeymoon? Or would it be a destination wedding/honeymoon?

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 07:06 PM · On: The Amazing Collapsing Girl

lol, lillies will be fine darlin' I'm not to particular about the flowers, you can take care of that, but can I do the music???? Because you L-O-V-E me??? *puppy eyes*



Author's Response:

Oh of course! I wouldn't have it any other way. It was, after all, your song that brought us together. What did you have in mind?

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 01:55 PM · On: The Amazing Collapsing Girl

lol, Amen! The only time I see dawn is when I haven't fallen asleep yet, which recently, has been often!  What sort of flowers should we have? XD



Author's Response:

Hmm. I personally enjoy lillies and I feel like they would fit in well with a beach wedding. What do you think, sugar pie honey bunch?

Reviewer: MadisonAshlee (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 01:46 PM · On: All The Wrong Places

Love it so far.  Can't wait to get to know Bella and Edward better.

-Jessica



Author's Response:

Glad you're liking it. I'm pretty sure Nachos4Children is working on the next chapter. That is, if she's not getting distracted by her own wonderful story. Which, by the way, you should totally check out on her fanfiction account if you like her style. :3

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:56 PM · On: The Amazing Collapsing Girl

See, that is what true relationships are about, sharing and caring!  Should the wedding be at sunset? that would be beautiful, don't you think? XD



Author's Response:

I'm glad you understand the importance of it. Haha. And yes, very. and much easier than dawn, for night owls like me. XD

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 10:12 AM · On: The Amazing Collapsing Girl

sounds like a plan my dear!  Fine I guess you can wear the tux, but I was thinking maybe a vintage wedding, not all this froofroo crap that is popular today?  Like maybe an off white off the shoulder dress for mio?  well how about, if I let you share Rob, will you share too? XD



Author's Response:

Well, yes, vintage, but I'm pretty sure tuxes have been in use since the beginning of time. Haha.

Well~ hmm... I'm very possessive about my thought-Kellan BUT I guess since you're my wife, I can agree to that deal. XD

Reviewer: dracorium (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 07:53 AM · On: All The Wrong Places

yeah, the captian is good shit at shit that......



Author's Response:

Haha! Indeed!

Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 02:18 AM · On: All The Wrong Places

OME I wish my husband was a rose giver lol



Author's Response:

Hah! Even an accidental one? XD But yes, it would be nice to get flowers every once in a while, wouldn't it?

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 10:24 PM · On: The Amazing Collapsing Girl

maybe a nice wine color with touches of a stormy sea blue??  ... But I guess I should tell ya, if I ever get my hands on Robby Pat, I'm tossing you to the curb my dear! lol, you are so awesome!!



Author's Response:

Ooooh sounds pretty. :3

Okay, okay, I can understand that. If I ever get my hands on Kellan Lutz... well, let's just say no one will hear from either of us for a few days... weeks... years... So we'll just assume the marriage dissolved by that point, yes? XD

Oh, by the way. I want to wear the tux. I look awesome in tailored clothes. Haha.

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 07:31 PM · On: The Amazing Collapsing Girl

;) That would be lovely, maybe on the beach?  Just close friends and family, very small??  What should our colors be? lol



Author's Response:

I always thought maybe a nice wine colour, and of course white. Hmm. Although on a beach, maybe a nice light blue instead? What do you think? Oh, and of course, keep it very intimate. Most of the world, sadly, wouldn't understand us anyway. Sigh.

Reviewer: WannabeRosalie (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 07:03 PM · On: All The Wrong Places

Ahhh....Edward cusses a lot...that's hot. Those were my second thoughts. My first were 'WOO!!!' just because it was an EPOV chapter. Have I mentioned that I love you yet? Well, I do. God, he's so screwed! That's what he gets, though. Nah, it wasn't that short. Actually, I don't really give a crap. I mean, hello, it's Edward. He's awesome in all amounts. Well, that's pretty much all I have to say, there was probably more, but I forgot. Oh yeah! You're awesome. 



Author's Response:

Haha, yes. Glad you agree. And aww. You love me? /snuggles ... but you can't tell my wifey. Haha.

Reviewer: WannabeRosalie (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Start at the Beginning

How in the world did you guess!! Yep, I love you guys. Still irritated, because it would appear that I am entering a stage in my life that I've named Stupidity, because I still can't figure out what's wrong with Bella! You know, besides the fact that she's falling in love with my boyfriend, but hey, things happen, right? Again with the light story. C'mon! Bring on something super-dramatic or...something. Not that I didn't like this chapter, I loved it. But I don't know, I just like when something catches me off gaurd. So my goal for you is to do that! Ooh, a challenge...

Bella. Edward=bad news

Me. Edward=gorgeousness

Rose



Author's Response:

Oh don't worry, there will be PLENTY of dramatics. What would a twific (especially Anna and Nachos style) be without dramatics? XD And don't feel bad that you can't figure out what it is. That's what we're going for. Haha.

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 05:06 PM · On: The Amazing Collapsing Girl

lol, only if you promise to keep updating! lol



Author's Response:

Haha! Deal!

So I'm thinking a June wedding? XD

Reviewer: maserati (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 05:05 PM · On: All The Wrong Places

Great chapter.  It's always nice to get some background on a character.  Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 04:44 PM · On: All The Wrong Places

hmm, Edward and the Captain sittin' in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G First comes love then comes drunk, then comes Edward hungover yet again!!  lol



Author's Response:

oh my god. /huggles

marry me? XD

Reviewer: hannahduval (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Start at the Beginning

i love this so far (: very funny & intriguing! great work.

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