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Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 12:54 PM · On: 6: Blessing

color me confused, i guess we need to see what edward and everyone else was thinking there at the end cause i feel like i missed something.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2011 01:34 PM · On: 6: Blessing

I understand her love for "friend Jacob", but to let it come between her and her husband, I think is wrong on her part.

Author's Response:
I don't know if she'd let it come between her and her husband if it really came down to that. I think that the whole problem throught the books is that she never thinks that it could come between her and her husband...and he doesn't do much to persuade her otherwise. Ah...teen angst! Thank you.

Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 11:39 AM · On: 6: Blessing

"My smile could not have been more opposite his. It widened impossibly as I flung my arms around his shoulders, the white lilies of my bouquet smashing into the back of his head and filling his hair with petals. "You came right on time!" I laughed into his lapel. "They're just about to bring out the food!" He chuckled quietly."

Pure gold. The flowers hitting him in the back of the head was visually a perfect Jacob and Bella moment.

"He took a deep, slow breath and began again. "While I was running, I was thinking about how stupid I was...how selfish to be in love with you, and to want you to love me back, when I could find that girl that I'm supposed to be with, and imprint on her at any moment. Where would that leave you?" "

Igzackly! I've always thought about that too. Very smart to point that out!

This reunion between Jacob and Bella was bittersweet and fraught with just the right amount of angsty Jake. You portrayed the physicality of him perfectly.

I really enjoyed this chapter.

Author's Response:
I've always associated Jacob with just the slightest bit of chaos so the flowers fit him perfectly. I'm so glad you noticed that!

Thank you so much for this one, Kari. After the Jake that you gave us with Broken Doll, I'm taking it as an extreme compliment that you think that I did him well!

Reviewer: juliet233 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:54 PM · On: 6: Blessing

If you haven't noticed, you're getting a lot of reviews at once from me tonight while I avoid studying ;)

This was another great chapter - you did really well with Jacob and Bella's conversation.

Author's Response:
I'm am really enjoying those reviews too! I love the ones that come in rapid fire succession! That means I REALLY screwed up your studying...sorry! (but thanks for reading!)

Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 09:50 PM · On: 6: Blessing

Awesome scene between Jacob and Bella.

Author's Response:
Thank you...I'm team Edward all the way, but I'm really trying to understand Jacob's side of it all!

Reviewer: PaisleyCrighton (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 03:56 AM · On: 6: Blessing

While it is similar to BD - I am really looking forward to the next chapters. You have captured the characters extremely well. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks...next chapter swerves off a bit more, I promise!

Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 01:01 PM · On: 6: Blessing

This story is truly amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing...I love the feedback!

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