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Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 12:41 PM · On: 5: Eternity
i expect edward will tell her later what tanya was thinking, no secrets you know ;)
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 05:31 AM · On: 5: Eternity
i really don't mind missing out on reneesme, seriously, she creeps me out.
Author's Response: Yes! She doesn't so much creep me out, as just ruin everything between Edward and Bella...so not allowed in North Star!
Thank you so much for seeing it that way...and having the patience to read this whole thing so far!
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:26 AM · On: 5: Eternity
5 stars!
Author's Response: 4 moons, 2 clovers, and one blue diamond!
Thank you so much Kari! I just read up on the ratings. I promise I will use them from now on!
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 10:56 AM · On: 5: Eternity
"They were the most breath taking vows I had ever heard. He continued, slipping the ring onto my shaking finger.
"I love you, Bella-and those three words have my life in them." "
Indeed! This whole wedding scene was beautifully rendered. The whisperings of the would be husband to his would be bride were truly sweet. So very Edward.
And this was just..brills;
"He wasn't done. "And I will love you, always."
I stared up into his eyes waiting for Alice or Jasper to fill me in on the origins of the last quote. Edward's crooked smile appeared, and the urge to reach for him, to fold into his arms and kiss his luscious lips had never been so irresistible.
"Bon Jovi," he confessed only to me, sounding slightly embarrassed. I stifled a laugh...and a sob. "
Nicely done. I love this version of the wedding. The whispering, the vows, it's all golden.
Author's Response: Oh thank you, thank you!
I was actually pretty happy that I'm an obsessive quote keeper for this one, but I was afraid that it may be a little too fluffy! I'm so glad that you liked it! I swear that if I ever get married (again) I will have to use some of them!
It is occuring to me now just exactly how far behind I have fallen in responding to you! I'm so sorry Kari! Please don't be mad at me for flooding you inbox with author response notes!
Reviewer: juliet233 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:44 PM · On: 5: Eternity
Hey, I'm all for the little fluffy indulgences :) I LOVE that Seth is one of the groomsmen - he's just too adorable. Emmett officiating the wedding cracked me up, and I loved Edward's vows, even if he did cheat in writing them. Hee.
Author's Response: Thank you...I'm glad you like them because this was my version of BD, and it's a little fluffy, although I've got an evil tendency for violence too! I couldn't help myself with the Bon Jovi here!
Reviewer: roxanne (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2008 09:31 AM · On: 5: Eternity
Lol! I love how you had Emmett as the pastor..OMLK I was laughing soo hard...so far your doing really good.
Author's Response: Ha Ha! I thought he'd be great. I'd want him presiding over my wedding any day! Thank you!
Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:34 AM · On: 5: Eternity
thru ch 5.
Author's Response: ummm...thanks for reading.
Reviewer: lyinglamb (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 06:39 AM · On: 5: Eternity
I'm so copying those vows for my wedding! NOOOO! Not Bon Jovi! Couldn't you have made it something, not so Bon Jovi-ish?
Author's Response: I was looking for different bands with similar lines, but I couldn't find any! That why I added "embarrassed" in the description. Besides, I thought it was kind of funny! But thanks for reading!
Reviewer: wickedlovely (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 11:39 AM · On: 5: Eternity
I loved all the quotes Edward used in his vows. Bon Jovi!! Ahahaha!!! xD
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 03:44 AM · On: 5: Eternity
I absolutely loved reading this chapter. The quotations were wonderful and throwing in the line from Bon Jovi was priceless. Just the right amount of humor in a sweet chapter. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm taking the weekend to map it ut. Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon!
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