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Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 09:32 PM · On: Exposure

please update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Umm...RL doesn't allow me to do anything ASAP but work.


 

Thank you for your review and being a loyal reader. The outtake is finally complete and I would like to send it to you. However, it's rather large, so I will need to email it or share the document via gDoc. Please send me your email address and let me know which you would prefer, PDF or gDoc.

Send me a PM with your email address, and I'll email you the outtake.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

~Browns

 

Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2011 03:01 PM · On: Exposure

I love this story....please dont drop it.  i cant wait to see it to yhe end.  thank you



Author's Response:

I will not drop! My betas won't let me, 


 

Thank you for your review and being a loyal reader. The outtake is finally complete and I would like to send it to you. However, it's rather large, so I will need to email it or share the document via gDoc. Please send me your email address and let me know which you would prefer, PDF or gDoc.

Send me a PM with your email address, and I'll email you the outtake.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

~Browns

 

Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2011 01:58 AM · On: Exposure

I enjoyed the chapter. Nice to see this update. Good luck with your RL/work stuff too.



Author's Response:

Thank you, chica!

Thanks fo reading and reviewing!

~Browns

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2011 09:32 PM · On: Exposure

 Good Chapter......



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Browns

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2011 04:25 PM · On: Exposure

loved the chapter looking forward to the enxt chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and review!

~Browns

Reviewer: critterbug05 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 03:15 AM · On: Olive Branch

i need more!!! your fic is really good!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  


Thank you for your review and being a loyal reader. The outtake is finally complete and I would like to send it to you. However, it's rather large, so I will need to email it or share the document via gDoc. Please send me your email address and let me know which you would prefer, PDF or gDoc.

Send me a PM with your email address, and I'll email you the outtake.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

~Browns

 

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 05:40 AM · On: Confessions

whoopps, I figured it out. doh! Somehow, I read too fast and thought the very first chapter was NOW. I was tertelly confooosed!

It seems a shame that she and Jasper break up after these big declarations. Alas. 

and why the FUCK does she go back to fucking James? gah! what an ASShat she is! 

 

stupid girls annoy the shit outta me. 



Author's Response:

Read on... everything happens for a reason. And she's not entirely in her right mind when she makes that decision.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Browns

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 05:12 AM · On: I just can't... Can I?

I am totally confused about this timeline. When were Bella and Jasper together? and he was sucking on her in Florida, while she was pregnant, and then ditched her again when they got home?  why is she drinking at this party if she's pregnant? WTF???

This flip=floppy timeline shit has me all confused!

and when the hell did he get involved with Alice? did he make out with Bella in Florida while he left Alice in Forks?

I'm not gonna read any more tonight - please, help a confused girl out! :)



Author's Response:

The very last few lines of the first chapter point out that the pregnancy occurs two years after the James/Bella break-up.

Sorry my timeline is confusing to you, but that's just the way it came out.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Browns

Reviewer: Meghaja (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 04:30 PM · On: Olive Branch

I have no idea why it took me so long to discover this story, but I am glad that I have now stumbled upon it. Really looking forward to the next update. I hope Bella and Ariana are both alright.



Author's Response:

 

Yay! I love new readers. I think you know by now my update schedule is non-existant.  I update when I can, but I'm still writing.


Thank you for your review and being a loyal reader. The outtake is finally complete and I would like to send it to you. However, it's rather large, so I will need to email it or share the document via gDoc. Please send me your email address and let me know which you would prefer, PDF or gDoc.

Send me a PM with your email address, and I'll email you the outtake.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

~Browns

 

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 08:29 PM · On: Olive Branch

well time to slow down and not worry about stupid stuff! cant wait to see waht happens next but i have a feelign that it wont slow down 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Browns

Reviewer: prattster666 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 07:18 PM · On: Olive Branch

Browns.....I love it!

I think i have worked a few things out and i am anxious to find out if I'm right!!!!

Keep up the good work!

Big hugs Cat x



Author's Response:

Hmm...I wonder what you have figured out. Now I'm curious...


 

Thank you for your review and being a loyal reader. The outtake is finally complete and I would like to send it to you. However, it's rather large, so I will need to email it or share the document via gDoc. Please send me your email address and let me know which you would prefer, PDF or gDoc.

Send me a PM with your email address, and I'll email you the outtake.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

~Browns

 

Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 02:02 PM · On: Olive Branch

Duddde! Poor b!!! Ive missed this story so much!!!! Please update soon

Author's Response:

Thank you fo reading...RL is not behaving, but I will continue to update when I can.

 


Thank you for your review and being a loyal reader. The outtake is finally complete and I would like to send it to you. However, it's rather large, so I will need to email it or share the document via gDoc. Please send me your email address and let me know which you would prefer, PDF or gDoc.

Send me a PM with your email address, and I'll email you the outtake.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

~Browns

 

Reviewer: amylizhawkins (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 01:21 PM · On: Olive Branch

Wow great update.  Please update soon!!!



Author's Response:

 

I try to update when I can.  Glad you liked the chapter.


Thank you for your review and being a loyal reader. The outtake is finally complete and I would like to send it to you. However, it's rather large, so I will need to email it or share the document via gDoc. Please send me your email address and let me know which you would prefer, PDF or gDoc.

Send me a PM with your email address, and I'll email you the outtake.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

~Browns

 

Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 12:08 PM · On: Olive Branch

I think it's time to relax and have lots of sex!



Author's Response:

LOL...if only it were in the cards for our couple.


Thank you for your review and being a loyal reader. The outtake is finally complete and I would like to send it to you. However, it's rather large, so I will need to email it or share the document via gDoc. Please send me your email address and let me know which you would prefer, PDF or gDoc.

Send me a PM with your email address, and I'll email you the outtake.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

~Browns

 

Reviewer: maserati (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 10:17 AM · On: Olive Branch

Wow! This chapter really hit home.  My daughter just went through having pre-eclampsia and had to have an emergency c-section at 8 mths pregnant.  Love your story and writing skills.



Author's Response:

 

Hi meserati,

Thank you for your review and being a loyal reader. The outtake is finally complete and I would like to send it to you. However, it's rather large, so I will need to email it or share the document via gDoc. Please send me your email address and let me know which you would prefer, PDF or gDoc.

Send me a PM with your email address, and I'll email you the outtake.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

~Browns

PS, I had no idea how many people surffered from Pre-eclampsia until this chapter.

 

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 10:08 AM · On: Olive Branch

Uh wow! Way to throw a curve all with the preeclampsia! More please!!

Author's Response:

 

Hi Panda1499,

Thank you for your review and being a loyal reader. The outtake is finally complete and I would like to send it to you. However, it's rather large, so I will need to email it or share the document via gDoc. Please send me your email address and let me know which you would prefer, PDF or gDoc.

Send me a PM with your email address, and I'll email you the outtake.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

~Browns

PS, I have some more curveballs for you.  LOL

 

Reviewer: twlightobsessed (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 05:12 AM · On: Olive Branch

I am loving this story and can't wait to see where you take it.  I'm also looking forward to hearing Renee's pov as well. Keep up the amazing writting with this story.



Author's Response:

 

Hi twilightobsessed,

Thank you for your review and being a loyal reader. The outtake is finally complete and I would like to send it to you. However, it's rather large, so I will need to email it or share the document via gDoc. Please send me your email address and let me know which you would prefer, PDF or gDoc.

Send me a PM with your email address, and I'll email you the outtake.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

~Browns

 

Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 04:38 AM · On: Olive Branch

Oh Edward is going to freak out when he hears about this. Cannot wait for the next chapter, I hope that the Swan's finally settle their issues.



Author's Response:

 

Hi kvgamble,

Thank you for your review and being a loyal reader. The outtake is finally complete and I would like to send it to you. However, it's rather large, so I will need to email it or share the document via gDoc. Please send me your email address and let me know which you would prefer, PDF or gDoc.

Send me a PM with your email address, and I'll email you the outtake.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

~Browns

 

Reviewer: peculiar_warrior (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 03:39 AM · On: Olive Branch

I was very happy to see an update.  =D  I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter.  Hopefully everyone will chill and leave Bella alone so she can have a healthy delivary.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Andi (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 02:53 AM · On: Enough!

smh at renee!! shes so selfish for leaving her kids and family!!! im so happy edward is back!!!



Author's Response:

 

Hi Andi,

Thank you for your review and being a loyal reader. The outtake is finally complete and I would like to send it to you. However, it's rather large, so I will need to email it or share the document via gDoc. Please send me your email address and let me know which you would prefer, PDF or gDoc.

Send me a PM with your email address, and I'll email you the outtake.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

~Browns

 

Reviewer: Andi (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 02:51 AM · On: Olive Branch

i keep waiting for the ball to drop about alice being mar!!! great chp btw!!!



Author's Response:

Okay, here's the thing.  I have a ways to go before I unravel this thing.  However, some of the characters already know, and others will find out soon.

Wanna guess who they will be?

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Browns

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 02:20 AM · On: Olive Branch

Good Chapter......



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: JEM1979 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 02:03 AM · On: Olive Branch

Well, that sucks for poor Bella...just as she was trying to seek her answers. I know the feeling though. I had preclampsia with my first baby, but it was at the end of my pregnancy and they just induced me. He was mainly okay...had a bit of trouble and ended up in the NICU, but we both made it out OK. :) Keep up the good work. - J



Author's Response:

Glad to hear you and your little one made through.  I have some experience with the condition myself.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Browns

Reviewer: twlightobsessed (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 10:25 PM · On: Overactive Imagination

I am loving this story.  It is definitely a web we weave.  It is blowing my mind away at all the connections that Edward and Bella haven't figured out yet.  Especially this latest development I've just figured out and can't wait to see how it plays out.  Not only is Edward connected to James, Victoria, and Alice.  He's connected to Jasper as well ahh.  I can't wait to see how this is going to play out.  You are pure genius that's all I can say.  On to the next chapter.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 03:19 PM · On: Enough!

Boy can Bella hold a grudge or what. 18 years and she hasn't given Renee a chance when they live in the same house? Wow...what will she do when Edward screws up and we know all men will eventually screw up.

I hope Edward can make her see that she needs to learn to forgive AND forget about what Renee did almost two decades ago. She is old enough now to just



Author's Response:

 

My Friend Alice!  How are you?  Ready for some insight on Renee?

Thank you for your review and being a loyal reader. The outtake is finally complete and I would like to send it to you. However, it's rather large, so I will need to email it or share the document via gDoc. Please send me your email address and let me know which you would prefer, PDF or gDoc.

Send me a PM with your email address, and I'll email you the outtake.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

~Browns

 

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