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Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
lol, i pray that God will help u with the sequil. i know that he has helped me with many things like that. good luck!!!
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 2
AND HERE IS UR 100th REVIEW!!!!!!!
Author's Response: That is the coolest thing ever! Thanks so much. :) I am so glad you read the story and liked it so long after I posted it. A sequel...hmm, haven't really thought about that, actually. I'll see where my muse takes me--if it ever shows back up.
Thank you again!
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
lol, i saw that there were 98 reviews, so i decided to make this the 99th. the 100th will come soon!!!!!!
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 18
i loved it and all, but there is one important question that u didnt answer in the story. accually, there r two.
1) does Bella go with Edward to Chicago?
2) is there a sequil?
i would love the answers, and i absolutlt love the story. great job!!!
~GODBLESS~
luvz u alaways,
bri
Reviewer: redshoes (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 18
Loved this story- kudos to you for finishing it!
Reviewer: MaggiMarie (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 18
I really liktory.e this. Thanks for a good s
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 18
I liked the ending. Their looks and actions, what was said and what wasn't was enough. Great story!
Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 18
This was a sweet ending. Congratulatoins on writing a great story. Keep writing!!
Judy
xoxo
Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2010 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 9
Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2010 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 9
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2010 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 17 (Kayla Cullen)
Cullens (and Bella's dad) to the rescue - yay! Poor danger magnet.
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 17 (Kayla Cullen)
Only ONE??!!? But....but....but....
will there be an Epilogue???? Will the next chapter be longer?? Will we get to see Edwards POV on what he saw when he entered? The fight? Them beating the crap outta James?? I can't believe he left walking on his own! Ida taken out some knee caps lemme tell ya... lol
Reviewer: bella27 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 17 (Kayla Cullen)
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Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 17 (Kayla Cullen)
ok, so this is good. I know Bella will be fine. Last chapter already? crap!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2010 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 17 (Kayla Cullen)
Will it be an entire chapter devoted to James' unfortunate shenking in jail? Or will it be hospital sex? Okay, maybe that's pushing it just a little!
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 17 (Kayla Cullen)
positively awesomeness.
Amidst the angst and pain, you had me laughing out loud. When Bella thought her apartment was committing suicide (and then spawning), I thought I couldn't laugh harder. And then:
Emmett’s a tank, Jasper’s fast, and Edward’s pissed. He didn’t stand a chance.”
AND THEN James "walked himself into a few walls".
Brilliance embodied here! Take a bow.
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2010 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 17 (Kayla Cullen)
I hope James is repeatedly sodomized with a sharp object in prison.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 16
Well, at least the woman have brains! Even Tanya! Let's hope there's still time!
Author's Response: Women rock. :)
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 16
Thank God that they realized that Bella was lying to protect everyone especially Edward. I hope that Edward saves her in time and that they FINALLY admit that they love each other and they get together....PLEASE!!!!
Author's Response: Next chapter will be up soon. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: mksims1 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 16
i cant't wait for the next chapter. great story
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 16
aaaaaahhhhhhhh........
My dog just fled to hide under the bed because of the scream of frustration I just let out at your little cliffee. I hope you're happy ;-)
Author's Response: Poor puppy! But I have to admit I'm glad you want more. It will be up soon. Thanks for the review. :)
Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 16
Edward took the car! Yesssssssssssss......this is awesome! I love this. I think it was good for him to have a moment of doubt, but then be put back on track by those around him. And to have someone call and tell him. He should know Bella is selfless like that. Anyway....this is far better than I expected it to be. I thought it was going to be cliche in the Edward leaves and then regrets it later. But no, you have made this story even better by this. Awesome~
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad this exceeded expectations. It's always kind of hard to know how your plot is doing when it's based off someone else's plot. Thank you again for the review.
Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 16
Holy crap, thank goodness for Rose and Alice. But, shit, Edward going there alone is exactly what James wants. damn.
and Edward took the police car. that is priceless.
love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate you reviewing.
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 16
YES!!! I KNEW IT!!!! THANK YOU ROSALIE & ALICE FOR KNOWING YOUR FRIEND!!!
Augh! Woman u are killing me with these short, suspensful chapters!!! I think i need a Valium... O__o I have email alerts going straight to my phone because of you! lol yeah I have no life ^__^ this story is too good!
Um, did I miss something, or did Edward just steal Charlie's squad car??
Author's Response: Wow, that's probably one of the most flattering things ever, actually. :) I'm so happy you're enjoying the story so much.
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 16
As upsetting as it was to read I am so so so grateful that Bella's friends/family knew enough to not fall for the ruse. Edward go earn your title as knight in shining armor - perhaps sans armor - later maybe!
Author's Response: Ahh, sans armor.... That's a thought. ;) Thanks for the review!
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