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Reviews For One of the Boys
Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 11:21 AM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

:)

Reviewer: Jane_Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 10:02 AM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

this is really good. when will the next chapter be posted?

Reviewer: hey-you (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 06:09 PM · On: The First Day

no more writing?

Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 05:43 AM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

I really like this story and I miss it! I can't wait to see what will happen at Bella's Birthday party..Please update soon!! :D

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 09:36 AM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

“I’m so hot for you right now, baby,” Rose drawled flatly from her seat - LOL

 

you may have either children or a nice house. Make your peace with that now. - Oh MAN, those are words of wisdom.  :)

 

Great chapter!  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: AEMcKell06 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 04:49 PM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

It sure has been a really long calm... :(

Reviewer: twilightrockhard (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 04:15 PM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

umm... no offense, watsoevr, but wen r u gonna post d nxt chap?



Author's Response:

Hi, I'm so sorry for the delay! RL went crazy and then I was ill, but I am furiously typing away right now and am hoping to have chapter 7 up by the weekend :)

Reviewer: twilightrockhard (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 04:08 PM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

umm... no offense, watsoevr, but wen r u gonna post d nxt chap?

Reviewer: charliedee (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:51 AM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

Cannot wait for the next chap and the party!!

Reviewer: ColdOneCullen (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 03:27 AM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

Wow this fic is really cool. And you have me nervous about the next chap. Something terrible is going to happen with bellas gift isnt it :( I already want to punch Jessica in the face. The relationship you have between Bella and Edward is sweet and Im enjoying it. I dont want anything to come between them.

Great writing. Keep up the good work

Reviewer: twilightfan303 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 11:13 PM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

I really like this story. I can't wait to read more! :)

Reviewer: enigma2288 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:10 PM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

love love love the story!

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:43 PM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

Now you've got me scared.

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:22 PM · On: The Non-Date Double Date

Really? Lingire? Do you not know Bella?!

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:10 PM · On: The Damsel in Distress

Bicth is dirty.

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 04:17 PM · On: The Plan (ish)

Ooooohhhh yyeeessss!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 04:08 PM · On: The First Day

Im a patient person I really am but Bella is more patient than I might have been.

Reviewer: dangerous_dreamer (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 06:03 PM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

ooo cant wait for the next chapter! this story is going great! update soon please!

Reviewer: Pippakrullen (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 02:53 AM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

i LOVE it.. it's so much fun..=D please continue

Reviewer: shannle24 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 03:04 PM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

yeah this story is offically the love of mhy life thanks for uhpdating i will luv uh 4ever nd ever if uh uhpdate soon . I mean come on uh know uh want 2 lmao

Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 08:13 AM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

Loved this chapter.

I like how Edward tries to help in the kitchen bit ends messing things up.

I wonder what drama will happen at the party.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 07:08 AM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

Great chapter. I liked all the family stuff in this chapter. Looking forward to chapter 7. What's gonna happen? Please update soon.

Reviewer: jabba0628 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 05:12 AM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

I can't wait to see what kind of trouble this group will get into at this party. It should be good time regardless.

Great job, keep it up!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 06:07 PM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

dying for the party

Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 05:49 PM · On: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

I really love this story!

cant wait for more:]

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