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Reviews For Greed
Reviewer: Regetta (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Greed

I actually really prefered this version to Bella's POV. This, for me, was better written, funnier, more realistic and an all together more enjoyable read. Awesome :)

Reviewer: Arundel_Angel (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Greed

I loved this scene in the book, their last night together in Bella's room before their wedding!  It is so intimate and romantic and I loved hearing what was going on in Edward's thoughts.  You did a wonderful job capturing his feelings, thank you for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: shiny silver grl (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Greed

A very nice, enjoyable read :)

Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Greed

This was really good.  Are you ever going to write more?  I'd love to see how the bachelor party goes.

Reviewer: Rochelle Allison (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2008 12:35 PM · On: Greed

oooh, that was good! i love how you write; it melds seamlessly w/ myers' style.

Reviewer: wandaf (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 01:46 AM · On: Greed

Great little fic! I love it when we get to see how the brothers interact outside of Bella's POV. This was well-written and I could see it so clearly. Thank you for sharing it!

Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 02:32 PM · On: Greed

That was really great I loved it and you did it correctly.

-Twilightx28

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 05:37 PM · On: Greed

Loved your Edward POV!! Great story!!

Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2008 09:37 PM · On: Greed

You did a great job with Edwards POV, I found this very enjoyable. That boy does love to over think things...I would love to see you continue with this.  I also would like to see a bit more of their bachelor party and what the boys may say to each other. 

Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2008 09:24 PM · On: Greed

You did a great job with Edwards POV, I found this very enjoyable. That boy does love to over think things...I would love to see you continue with this.  I also would like to see a bit more of their bachelor party and what the boys may say to each other. 

Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2008 09:24 PM · On: Greed

You did a great job with Edwards POV, I found this very enjoyable. That boy does love to over think things...I would love to see you continue with this.  I also would like to see a bit more of their bachelor party and what the boys may say to each other. 

Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2008 08:18 PM · On: Greed

You chould definitly continue on with what happened while they were out. Emmett's thoughts in particular are always exciting.

 

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 05:12 PM · On: Greed

Awww, that was so sweet.  I love Edward POV that holds true to his character.  I thought you did a really good job with this. 

Reviewer: MissMason0001 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 03:05 AM · On: Greed

Excellent Job, this is exactly the way I imagined it-

 You should definitely post more stories. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

You're very very kind. I intend to post more. I'm in the midst of writing some now. 

 

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 11:53 AM · On: Greed

very good! i liked it a lot!

Reviewer: RunsWithVampires (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 05:28 AM · On: Greed

 Write more!!! This is really good.

Reviewer: Mizra (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2008 10:00 AM · On: Greed

This is GREAT!  Very much like I would read if Edward's story was written for Breaking Dawn.

Author's Response:

I'm considering doing so now. ^_^

I sort of opened Pandora's box with this because now once I've 'heard' him, he won't shut up! Who knew Edward was so talkative?!

Thank you for your lovely review! Seriously, reviews are the life and breath of every writer. xxx

Reviewer: invisiblevampire (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2008 06:15 PM · On: Greed

This is so in charecter! It sounds just like something Stephenie Meyers would write! Great job!

Author's Response:

That's amazing praise coming from you! You write very, very good Edward POV.

I do intend to write some more stuff from Edward's POV, and sort of 'scenes in between' chapters in the books. But it may take me a little bit to work out the bugs. I'm so happy you like it.

(you made me feel like I'm being asked to sit in the back of the bus with the COOL kids.) :-)

xxx

Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2008 03:40 PM · On: Greed

That was gorgeous---so sensual and tender....with a nice splash of Emmet-humor.  :)  You write Edward's POV perfectly.  I loved it. 

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I am hoping to write some more of EPOV. I have ideas but we'll see (because 'real life' is taking over currently! Stupid real life stuff. Ick!) how long it takes me to get another one up.

You've been very kind.

 

Reviewer: Imagine (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2008 01:49 PM · On: Greed

magic! I wish you would do their bachelot party too!!!

Author's Response:

I am considering writing up their bachelor party, but I doubt it'll be as interesting as SOME of the ones I've read!

 

Thanks so much for your love review. 

Mel (aka wish_girl)

xxx

Reviewer: Katya (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2008 10:27 AM · On: Greed

That was so good! You captured Edward's voice so lovely, it was almost like readng Midnight Sun... Except. You know. It was Breaking Dawn.

 I sincerly hope you choose to do more scenes from the book. Even sporadically. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the lovely review. ^_^

 

I do plan on doing more from Edward's point of view - probably the wedding and the flight to Rio at the least. Once I did this one (and it was meant to be a one-shot), more ideas came to me. 

 

I started working on the flight to Rio last night. So, really, thank you for reviewing and reading. You made my day!

Reviewer: kibby (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2008 10:19 AM · On: Greed

Hey wish girl!  Your story was beautiful and very Edward (loved the Smiths in the background!) Thanks for fleshing out one of my favorite BD scenes.  I look forward to reading more of your work.  Thanks xoxokibby

Author's Response:

Thank you for your lovely review! ^_^

 

I'm a bit Smiths fan myself, and when I listen to it, I think about Edward quite a lot. So introspective and humorous, I have to believe that it would suit Edward's eclectic musical tastes. 

 

I intend to (although I didn't intend to initially, I've just had more ideas on the back of this piece)do a few more scenes in Breaking Dawn from Edward's point of view, but probably not much that's already been done. I hope you'll enjoy them when I get a chance to write them!

 

Thanks again,

Mel (aka wish_girl)

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