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Reviewer: carij15 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2013 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 20: The Big Day
I can't tell you how much I loved this story.... I cried I laughed and smiled throughout the entire story.... it was really really good..... You are an amazing writer
Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2012 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 20: The Big Day
My first love was killed is a car crash and this story hit so close to home. I was 17 and am now 63 but still know that at times I miss him. This story is so good and so sad too.
Thanks - Xanath
Reviewer: Jmose2 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2012 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 1: Unbearable Pain
Super job on this chapter.
Reviewer: Jmose2 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2012 12:54 PM · On: Introduction
Excited to read more...very well written.
Reviewer: Jmose2 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2012 12:54 PM · On: Introduction
Excited to read more...very well written.
Reviewer: Jmose2 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2012 12:54 PM · On: Introduction
Excited to read more...very well written.
Reviewer: Kai15 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2012 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 20: The Big Day
WOW!!!! what can i say other than my gawd you are ahhmazing!!! Everything worekd out so wonderfully :)..i was on the edge with this story always kept me guessing!!..Thank you for writing probably the best fan-fiction with Bella and Jaspermy two favoirte characters!!
Reviewer: redauntie1 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 20: The Big Day
It was a good jas/bella story.
Reviewer: kyndria15221 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 20: The Big Day
Wow it was so beautiful i love ever word of it. You have a beautiful way to your writting and it is a wonderful talent keep up the great work i can not wait to read another one of your stories hope life is good :)
Reviewer: Jaspersheart (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 1: Unbearable Pain
love love love the story so far its written beautifully
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 1: Unbearable Pain
Sad that Alice and Edward are dead....or are they? Off to read more.
Reviewer: 1greekgirl (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 20: The Big Day
loved your story ....keep the stories coming !!! :)
Reviewer: Gone_Crazy109 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 3: Working Through It
AWWWWWWW jasper is sooooooo sweet!!!!!!
Reviewer: shannitwilightmad (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 7: Bliss
I
FUCKING
LOVE
YOU!!!!!!!!
omg this is my fav story ever!!!!!!
love it
love you
love jasper
he is mine!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Jazzella (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 20: The Big Day
I really enjoyed reading this one, very interesting twists in the middle there, but really nicely balanced overall.
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 20: The Big Day
Thanks for a fantastic story! Well rounded and balanced!
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 20: The Big Day
Thanks for a fantastic story!
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 9: Final Goodbye
you made me cry...like dripping down my face, hardly able to read words cry....
Reviewer: milancaw (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 6: Home Alone
Wow...that's basically all I can say. Hey...a good song for this story is "Once Upon a Broken Heart" by the Beu Sisters. It fits PERFECTLY. I <3 story...so much. It makes me want to cry. It's so sweet...
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Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 20: The Big Day
probably a case of different strokes for different folks. I thought it was very touching, all of it; Alices' something blue, and Carlisle sharing his memories of Edward. A totally satisfying ending to a story that I was afraid was going to be too sad, but wasn't. Good work.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 19: Inner Demons
Knowing from personal experience, Ican empathize with Jasper, feeling he might have lost Bella. Thinking you may have lost your love is the mosy frightening thing in this world.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 18: Unexpected Consequences
That was a real scary happening. Bella's abilities seem to have a few glitches, or problems I'm not sure what to call them. Downsides is as good a description as any.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 17: Engaged
Good lemons make good lemonade and that was pretty darn good! How thoughtful of Bella to include Rosalie in the wedding planning. It sure seemed to mean a lot to Rose.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 16: Getting a Grip
Who is sending you bad reviews? Tell me and I'll slap them for you. I'm happy Bella and Jasper are together again, as they should be. It's nice she has made contact with Jake again, finding that her dad is happy and doing okay. Maybe Bella can stay in touch with Jake and through him, keep tabs on her dad.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 15: Decisions
Poor Bella, she thought she could handle the decision, no matter what. Turned out she wasn't as calm and collected as she thought. Sure glad it turned out okay for all concerned.
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