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Reviewer: megan1010 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 10

I reallly really love this story!! I hope you are able to update soon!! i miss it!!

Reviewer: Kourt17 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 10

LOVE IT

Reviewer: nowforruin (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 10

ok, so very late in the getting to reading, but i just read all 10 chapters! i love bella as a pastry chef - i'm addicted to food network and i kept picturing the chaos/fun of duff's shop.

i always love Rose when she's a little less of a bitch but still so fierce

the interactions between edward and kate are so cute. almost makes me want one of my own. almost.

i will def be waiting for the next chapter. and harassing you through your blocks ;)

<3

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 10

Awww I really feel for Bella; it must be so hard to deal with a situation like that. I wonder if she really will tell Edward what the whole deal is.

LoL, Kate is just so cute and I have a funny feeling that she will definalty heal Bella's heart.

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 10

that was sad and sweet all at the same time.

Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 10

I'm soooo happy I found your story!!! I love it!! I can't wait for you to update!!! Hurry......please?

Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 10

aw. lovely chapter; i really liked the interaction between katie and bella and especially bella's reaction to it. i also am quite fond of your edward; hes great! loving, shy, handsome, great with his kid...ahh

can't wait for more! keep up the good work

Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 6

I love flustered Edward. Haha!

Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 5

Ha. Emmett and his big mouth. He just can't help it.

Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 4

Whew. Too bad for Edward that was a dream.

Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh no. She fainted! How embarassing. Eeeeh.

Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 2

What? That sucks for Bella!

Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

I like this Bella. She's not a pushover.

Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Prologue

Gotta love some Alice.

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 10

So happy for the update; your story is great. Poor Bella..and daddy Edward sends my heart all aflutter. LOL

Reviewer: imloki (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 10

Awww i'm all gooey'mushy and warm inside thanx i needed that because it's sooooo cold in C hicag right now!!

Reviewer: Alexis Danaan (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 10

Dude! You kill me with the short chapters! (but I still love it!)

Reviewer: nessiebells (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 10

you are awesome to he highest degree.

Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 10

i love this

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 9

LOL...Edward's birthday is definalty a highlight in the year. Sigh...It brings warm fuzzies to my heart that Kate is taken so with Bella; I wonder if it makes Bella just a little sad that she won't be able to have children of her own. *snicker* I can't help but wonder what Alice whispered to Bella.

Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 9

lovely chapter! good work!

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 9

Well done. Love this story!

Reviewer: megan1010 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 9

YAY!! I'm soo glad you updated! I love this story!!! Update soon!!

Reviewer: julesana8828 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 9

Love your story, especially the Kate and Bella part, I was raised by my mom and stepfather- he was the best father ever. there is more to family then blood. So far this has been such a sweet love story, I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 9

Great Chapter! Love this story and really like the relationships and tones of the characters.

How come I have a real bad feeling that Tanya is going to show up one of these days? God I hope not!

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